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After reading, re reading and doing some thinking. I think I'm ready to take a stab at this. I hope you enjoy what I write. Here goes.
Chapter 5: Planning the proposal
Two years had passed and Zoot and Leah's love had grown over time. Zoot had been going jewelry shops to look at engagement rings. Years ago before Zoot met Leah, he and Floyd were talking about whether they were eventually going to marry if they found the right woman.
*Flashback*
Zoot was sitting on his sofa polishing his sax as Floyd entered the room.
"Hey, man. What's up?" Floyd said. Zoot looked up and shrugged.
"Just polishing the 'ol sax." he said.
"I've been thinkin'." Floyd told him as he sat down next to him. He strummed his guitar strings. "Janice and I have been talking about possibly getting married later on down the road." Zoot stopped polishing and raised his eyebrows.
"Really?" Zoot said. "You know after you get married to Janice she's going to turn into a nagging wife."
"Naw, man. You know she isn't like that."
"She isn't now." Zoot told him. "I'd rather be free. She'll think she owns you once she has that ring on her finger. I can see her saying Floyd, do this. Floyd, do that." Floyd ignored the last comment Zoot made.
"Don't you want to show people how much you love your woman?" Floyd asked. He was tuning his guitar and strummed his strings some more.
"There are other ways to show your woman you love her. Marriage is just a piece of paper, man. That's all." Zoot picked up his rag and began polishing again. "I'm never getting married. I decided that after Janice and I ended our relationship."
"You might change your mind." Floyd said getting up off the couch. "The right woman is waiting." Zoot watched him as he walked away. Zoot replaced his reed and mumbled "Yeah right." to himself and started to play his sax.
*end of flashback*
Floyd teased him when he found out about Zoot's ring shopping.
"I'm never getting married." Floyd joked. "I told you that someday you would fall in love and you're in deep!"
"Yeah I know. I was young, man. Who knew huh?"
"Hey, Jan!" Floyd hollered. "You owe me $50.00! Haha! Zoot is going to pop the question!"
Leah was in her dressing room getting ready to go out with a few friends. She put on her favorite spaghetti strap shirt that had a heart on it, a black leather jacket, along with a necklace Zoot gave her as a birthday gift. It had his name in sparkly jewels. She was combing her hair when Zoot knocked on her door.
"Come in!" she called.
"Hey, babe." Zoot said, giving her a kiss.
"Hi, honey." They embraced warmly."You look like you're up to something."
"I have something big planned. Something you're going to love."
Leah smiled at her soon to be fiance. "I'll be thinking of you while I'm out with my girlfriends."
"Try not to miss me too much." Zoot joked. Just as they leaned in to kiss, there was a knock on the door. It was Leah's friends. The door opened before Leah could even get to it to open it for them. Jennifer, a tall skinny girl with blonde hair was the first to walk in. She was followed by Teri, an attractive girl who was slightly shorter than Jenny and Jerrica who looked like a rock star.
"Who's this dude with the shades?" Jerri asked. "He's hot."
"This, ladies is my boyfriend Zoot." Leah said, blushing a little. "Zoot, this is Teri, Jerrica, and Jenny."
"Hi." Zoot said waving to them.
"I didn't know you were dating such a good looking man." Jenny said. "It's nice to meet you, Zoot."
Teri shook Zoot's hand. "Are you ready, Leah? Girl, I missed you like crazy! Can't wait to party with ya."
"I missed you all too! Let me get my purse and make up on." Leah rushed to the bathroom leaving Zoot with 3 chatty women. He felt a little awkward.
"Leah told us all about you in her letters to us." Teri said.
"She did?" Teri nodded.
"She never sent us any pics although she said she would." Jerrica said. "You guys must be busy."
"We have to practice for our gigs and stuff. Leah and I have been spending a lot of time together."
"Awww." Teri said. Leah came out of the bathroom with her purse over her shoulder.
"Let's go, girls!" Leah said smiling. "Love you, Sweetie. Knowing these girls, I'll be back late." She and Zoot hugged and kissed and the girls headed out the door.
Zoot watched as the 4 girls piled up in Teri's convertible and drove away.
Now was the time to start getting things set up.
Zoot saw Janice and Floyd jamming together.
"Hey, Jan. I need a woman's opinion on engagement rings." Zoot said boldly. Floyd and Janice stopped playing.
"You're asking me to help you? The man who told me he was never going to get married??"
"Yeah yeah. I know I said that."
"I told you!" Floyd said and started laughing. "50 please." He held out his hand. Janice sighed and gave Floyd his money. "Thanks, baby cakes!"
"Sure I'll go with you. I know the perfect store to go to. It's Leah's favorite jewelry store."
"What's it called?" Zoot asked.
"It's on a street corner like two blocks from here." Janice said. "I can't remember the name."
"Let's go. We're not taking the bus because I don't want Leah to know." Zoot said.
"You don't want Leah to know what?" A gravelly voice said, startling Zoot and Janice. It was the good doctor.
"Zoot is going to pop the question." Janice told him. Teeth's eyes widened. Zoot expected him to say and you said you were never getting married but to his surprise he didn't. "I'm happy for you, man." He patted Zoot on the back. "Have you talked about wedding plans?"
"I haven't even asked her yet." Zoot said.
"You know she'll accept, man. She's crazy about you. You're her world." Dr. Teeth said and walked away.
"Let's go to the jewelry store before they close." Janice said pulling Zoot toward the door.
Janice and Zoot walked the two blocks to the jewelry store.
"Here it is." Janice said. "Jem's Jewels."
"That's weird."
"Jem is the owner's name." Janice told him. They walked in. A short woman walked out.
"Hi, guys. How may I help you?" she said cheerfully.
"We're here to look at engagement rings." Zoot said shifting his weight.
"And wedding bands." Janice added. "Don't forget wedding bands."
"Right this way." Jem lead Zoot and Janice to the wedding sets. She also had single engagement rings. Zoot looked at the sparkling rings. They were gorgeous.
"I'm not sure what to look at. They are all so pretty." Zoot said in awe. Janice was looking too.
"There is a certain one that she pointed out to me and I can't find it. It had a heart shaped ruby - HERE IT IS!" Janice pointed to it. "Can we see this ring?"
Jem opened the glass and pulled out the ring.
"Can you picture her wearing this ring on her finger?"
Before Zoot could answer her, Leah's friend Teri walked into the jewelry store. She noticed Zoot with Janice.
"Hey, guy. What's your name again?" Teri said.
"Uh uh" Zoot stammered.
"Zoot!" Janice said. "His name is Zoot."
"What are you doing?" Teri asked.
"Looking at rings. I'm asking Leah to marry me but don't tell her." Teri pointed at Janice.
"Why is she with you?" she asked. "Leah is my best friend and you better not be cheating on her."
"Zoot would NEVER EVER do that to Leah!" Janice said. "He loves her too much. I'm here to help him pick out the perfect ring."
Zoot carefully examined the heart shaped ring. He pictured the look on Leah's face as he slipped the ring on her finger. He started smiling. He looked at the price tag on the shiny band. It was $700. Zoot counted the cash he had on him. The smile disappeared when he found that he only had $400 on him.
"What's wrong?" Janice asked.
"I can't buy it." Zoot said. He was upset. "I don't have enough money. This ring will be perfect for my girl." Janice started digging through her purse. "What are you doing?"
"I'm looking for money to help you, silly." Janice said. She found a $50 and gave it to Zoot. "I think I have more."
"I'll help too. My best friend deserves this." Teri said. She started digging through her purse until she found her wallet. She opened it.
"Here's another $50 and $100. This makes $200." Janice said.
"That gives me $600." Zoot said. "I still need $100." Janice kept digging and digging. No luck.
"That's all I have on me." Janice sighed. "I wish I had more."
"I have a few hundreds on me from my savings." Teri said. "Will you accept a couple hundred?" Zoot's smile reappeared. "On two conditions."
"What conditions?" Zoot asked.
"That you'll be the best husband ever and we get invited." Teri smiled.
"You know I will and you are invited." Teri handed him her cash and he rushed to the jeweler. "I want this ring please." She looked at it.
"Sir, this ring is on sale. It's half off." she told him as she was getting out her calculator. "That will be $350 plus tax." Zoot handed her his $400.
"I guess I don't need the extra money you girls gave me". He said giving the girls back their money. Both girls refused to take it.
"You keep it." both Teri and Janice said. Zoot put it into his wallet and put the wallet in his pocket. Teri hugged him. Zoot hugged her back.
"I know you'll make that evening special for Leah and don't worry, I won't say a word to her about it." she said and left. Zoot felt his cell phone buzz. It was a text from Leah. It said "Hey, honey the girls bought a hotel room for the next couple of nights. I will be spending the night with them tonight. Okay? I'll call you later. Love you, baby. xoxoxo Zoot smiled.
He texted her back. Hey, babe. Got your text. Have a great time with your friends and spend as much time with them while they're in town. I'll see you later. I'm busy getting that surprise planned and I know you're going to love it. I love you.
This is going to be perfect for him to get his big surprise put together for their special night Next stop: flower shop then to find the perfect place to propose.
To be continued . . .
Chapter 5: Planning the proposal
Two years had passed and Zoot and Leah's love had grown over time. Zoot had been going jewelry shops to look at engagement rings. Years ago before Zoot met Leah, he and Floyd were talking about whether they were eventually going to marry if they found the right woman.
*Flashback*
Zoot was sitting on his sofa polishing his sax as Floyd entered the room.
"Hey, man. What's up?" Floyd said. Zoot looked up and shrugged.
"Just polishing the 'ol sax." he said.
"I've been thinkin'." Floyd told him as he sat down next to him. He strummed his guitar strings. "Janice and I have been talking about possibly getting married later on down the road." Zoot stopped polishing and raised his eyebrows.
"Really?" Zoot said. "You know after you get married to Janice she's going to turn into a nagging wife."
"Naw, man. You know she isn't like that."
"She isn't now." Zoot told him. "I'd rather be free. She'll think she owns you once she has that ring on her finger. I can see her saying Floyd, do this. Floyd, do that." Floyd ignored the last comment Zoot made.
"Don't you want to show people how much you love your woman?" Floyd asked. He was tuning his guitar and strummed his strings some more.
"There are other ways to show your woman you love her. Marriage is just a piece of paper, man. That's all." Zoot picked up his rag and began polishing again. "I'm never getting married. I decided that after Janice and I ended our relationship."
"You might change your mind." Floyd said getting up off the couch. "The right woman is waiting." Zoot watched him as he walked away. Zoot replaced his reed and mumbled "Yeah right." to himself and started to play his sax.
*end of flashback*
Floyd teased him when he found out about Zoot's ring shopping.
"I'm never getting married." Floyd joked. "I told you that someday you would fall in love and you're in deep!"
"Yeah I know. I was young, man. Who knew huh?"
"Hey, Jan!" Floyd hollered. "You owe me $50.00! Haha! Zoot is going to pop the question!"
Leah was in her dressing room getting ready to go out with a few friends. She put on her favorite spaghetti strap shirt that had a heart on it, a black leather jacket, along with a necklace Zoot gave her as a birthday gift. It had his name in sparkly jewels. She was combing her hair when Zoot knocked on her door.
"Come in!" she called.
"Hey, babe." Zoot said, giving her a kiss.
"Hi, honey." They embraced warmly."You look like you're up to something."
"I have something big planned. Something you're going to love."
Leah smiled at her soon to be fiance. "I'll be thinking of you while I'm out with my girlfriends."
"Try not to miss me too much." Zoot joked. Just as they leaned in to kiss, there was a knock on the door. It was Leah's friends. The door opened before Leah could even get to it to open it for them. Jennifer, a tall skinny girl with blonde hair was the first to walk in. She was followed by Teri, an attractive girl who was slightly shorter than Jenny and Jerrica who looked like a rock star.
"Who's this dude with the shades?" Jerri asked. "He's hot."
"This, ladies is my boyfriend Zoot." Leah said, blushing a little. "Zoot, this is Teri, Jerrica, and Jenny."
"Hi." Zoot said waving to them.
"I didn't know you were dating such a good looking man." Jenny said. "It's nice to meet you, Zoot."
Teri shook Zoot's hand. "Are you ready, Leah? Girl, I missed you like crazy! Can't wait to party with ya."
"I missed you all too! Let me get my purse and make up on." Leah rushed to the bathroom leaving Zoot with 3 chatty women. He felt a little awkward.
"Leah told us all about you in her letters to us." Teri said.
"She did?" Teri nodded.
"She never sent us any pics although she said she would." Jerrica said. "You guys must be busy."
"We have to practice for our gigs and stuff. Leah and I have been spending a lot of time together."
"Awww." Teri said. Leah came out of the bathroom with her purse over her shoulder.
"Let's go, girls!" Leah said smiling. "Love you, Sweetie. Knowing these girls, I'll be back late." She and Zoot hugged and kissed and the girls headed out the door.
Zoot watched as the 4 girls piled up in Teri's convertible and drove away.
Now was the time to start getting things set up.
Zoot saw Janice and Floyd jamming together.
"Hey, Jan. I need a woman's opinion on engagement rings." Zoot said boldly. Floyd and Janice stopped playing.
"You're asking me to help you? The man who told me he was never going to get married??"
"Yeah yeah. I know I said that."
"I told you!" Floyd said and started laughing. "50 please." He held out his hand. Janice sighed and gave Floyd his money. "Thanks, baby cakes!"
"Sure I'll go with you. I know the perfect store to go to. It's Leah's favorite jewelry store."
"What's it called?" Zoot asked.
"It's on a street corner like two blocks from here." Janice said. "I can't remember the name."
"Let's go. We're not taking the bus because I don't want Leah to know." Zoot said.
"You don't want Leah to know what?" A gravelly voice said, startling Zoot and Janice. It was the good doctor.
"Zoot is going to pop the question." Janice told him. Teeth's eyes widened. Zoot expected him to say and you said you were never getting married but to his surprise he didn't. "I'm happy for you, man." He patted Zoot on the back. "Have you talked about wedding plans?"
"I haven't even asked her yet." Zoot said.
"You know she'll accept, man. She's crazy about you. You're her world." Dr. Teeth said and walked away.
"Let's go to the jewelry store before they close." Janice said pulling Zoot toward the door.
Janice and Zoot walked the two blocks to the jewelry store.
"Here it is." Janice said. "Jem's Jewels."
"That's weird."
"Jem is the owner's name." Janice told him. They walked in. A short woman walked out.
"Hi, guys. How may I help you?" she said cheerfully.
"We're here to look at engagement rings." Zoot said shifting his weight.
"And wedding bands." Janice added. "Don't forget wedding bands."
"Right this way." Jem lead Zoot and Janice to the wedding sets. She also had single engagement rings. Zoot looked at the sparkling rings. They were gorgeous.
"I'm not sure what to look at. They are all so pretty." Zoot said in awe. Janice was looking too.
"There is a certain one that she pointed out to me and I can't find it. It had a heart shaped ruby - HERE IT IS!" Janice pointed to it. "Can we see this ring?"
Jem opened the glass and pulled out the ring.
"Can you picture her wearing this ring on her finger?"
Before Zoot could answer her, Leah's friend Teri walked into the jewelry store. She noticed Zoot with Janice.
"Hey, guy. What's your name again?" Teri said.
"Uh uh" Zoot stammered.
"Zoot!" Janice said. "His name is Zoot."
"What are you doing?" Teri asked.
"Looking at rings. I'm asking Leah to marry me but don't tell her." Teri pointed at Janice.
"Why is she with you?" she asked. "Leah is my best friend and you better not be cheating on her."
"Zoot would NEVER EVER do that to Leah!" Janice said. "He loves her too much. I'm here to help him pick out the perfect ring."
Zoot carefully examined the heart shaped ring. He pictured the look on Leah's face as he slipped the ring on her finger. He started smiling. He looked at the price tag on the shiny band. It was $700. Zoot counted the cash he had on him. The smile disappeared when he found that he only had $400 on him.
"What's wrong?" Janice asked.
"I can't buy it." Zoot said. He was upset. "I don't have enough money. This ring will be perfect for my girl." Janice started digging through her purse. "What are you doing?"
"I'm looking for money to help you, silly." Janice said. She found a $50 and gave it to Zoot. "I think I have more."
"I'll help too. My best friend deserves this." Teri said. She started digging through her purse until she found her wallet. She opened it.
"Here's another $50 and $100. This makes $200." Janice said.
"That gives me $600." Zoot said. "I still need $100." Janice kept digging and digging. No luck.
"That's all I have on me." Janice sighed. "I wish I had more."
"I have a few hundreds on me from my savings." Teri said. "Will you accept a couple hundred?" Zoot's smile reappeared. "On two conditions."
"What conditions?" Zoot asked.
"That you'll be the best husband ever and we get invited." Teri smiled.
"You know I will and you are invited." Teri handed him her cash and he rushed to the jeweler. "I want this ring please." She looked at it.
"Sir, this ring is on sale. It's half off." she told him as she was getting out her calculator. "That will be $350 plus tax." Zoot handed her his $400.
"I guess I don't need the extra money you girls gave me". He said giving the girls back their money. Both girls refused to take it.
"You keep it." both Teri and Janice said. Zoot put it into his wallet and put the wallet in his pocket. Teri hugged him. Zoot hugged her back.
"I know you'll make that evening special for Leah and don't worry, I won't say a word to her about it." she said and left. Zoot felt his cell phone buzz. It was a text from Leah. It said "Hey, honey the girls bought a hotel room for the next couple of nights. I will be spending the night with them tonight. Okay? I'll call you later. Love you, baby. xoxoxo Zoot smiled.
He texted her back. Hey, babe. Got your text. Have a great time with your friends and spend as much time with them while they're in town. I'll see you later. I'm busy getting that surprise planned and I know you're going to love it. I love you.
This is going to be perfect for him to get his big surprise put together for their special night Next stop: flower shop then to find the perfect place to propose.
To be continued . . .