Rowlf's puppy days

[Fraggleforever]

Thank you everybody! I hope I kept you entertained and to the edge of your seat the whole time........


.....well, maybe not the whole time.
But thank you for the comments!!

 

[The Count]

No, thank you for the nice story. Hope to find another one of yours on the forums soon.

 

[TogetherAgain]

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Believe me, FraggleForever, you earned all 324 of those hugs! WOW! This is such an AMAZING thing to come home to... I am honestly so amazed right now, there's just SO many moments that are just so perfect...

Starting with chapter 10- The song!!!! And the men, those creepy, vile, disgusting men... Comedically slow, but also evil. Oh my gosh...

Chapter 11- The main thing, of course, Kermit's talk with Jim, just blew me away. In KSY Kermit was petrified of Jim- here, he's gotten over his fear of humans and even has a conversation- gets help, even! And just the fact that it's Jim, I mean... But that wasn't the only thing I loved. The first thing to stand out to me was this:

Kermit caught his breath, made sure everyone else did as well, and said,
"Come on guys. Let's save our friends!"

That part in bold is what really jumped at me: he made sure everyone else was okay, too. Truly a leader in the making. And I liked this part, too:

Croaker looked at her admiringly.
"You're so cute when you're sarcastic."
Kermit frowned at Croaker.

Reading that resulted in a strange combination of laughing and squeaking. Good thing no one had to hear it.

Chapter 12- Starting with something that had a similar reaction to that last quote,

Kermit did a double take. "A compliment from you? Wow, that's a first."
"Don't get used to it."

I love it! I absolutely love it. And did I mention that I love it? I also love how "We have time" has turned into something of a running gag- the punchline coming now, when they don't have time. I also love this part:

"Uh.....boss?"
"What is it?!"
"They outnumber us 100 to 2."
"Oh. Well then, time to run I suppose."
"Couldn't hurt."

It's just such a reversal of which of the men has brains, and it's so comedic!

Chapter 13-

"Oh, that's the guy that helped me. I owe him one."

Again, with Jim! I love it, I especially love "I owe him one." Not sure why, but I do, I just do, so much! And I love the talk about the talent show, and I simply adore this:

"Did you say something?" asked the farmer.
"Uh......woof woof?"
"Hmm...sounded different the first time."

HAA! It's great! And then the show, Patch and Biscuit finaly truly 100% approve, and it's awesome!

Years later- Four words. For old times sake. I think that says it all... that just says it all.

A wonderful story, I absolutely adore it, Thank you for it, and you are more than welcome for the comments- you deserve them!

 

[Erine81981]

I did a little sketching a little while I was reading (Which I adored so much) and wanted to do some pictures for this story. I'll try and get some finished and put them up. Great story FF. I loved it so much. Your a great story writer and teller.

 

[Fraggleforever]

[Huge smile]

I am really glad that everybody liked this.
I hope that you guys like the next one just as much.

As soon as I get an idea.

 

[Erine81981]

Were Rowlf's siblings any Sisters or just brothers? Never mind. I found it.

 

[Erine81981]

Here is Rowlf's Family
Left to Right (Spot, Rowlf, Biscuit, Patch, Rover and Clover)

 

[Fraggleforever]

Oh.....my.....goodness.....

That is exactly what I pictured them to be!
You, are a talented artist!!

I can't wait for more!!!!