Once Upon My Heart.

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Again, this is just the first part of the chapter. I'll have the rest up and running ASAP. As for now , I hope everone likes this.
 

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Whoa... That was... Well, it was.
You might want to take care of a few spelling errors here and there...

And though I'm a bit reluctant to warm up to the ushygushies... The way it was developed in this chapter absolutely made me thrill to every little detail and show of chivalry from Robin towards Megan.
Simpy superb. Something troubles me though, this confrontation Megan dreads back at her home. There are a few conclusions I could make, but won't out of fear and respect for you, the author.
Great stuff greenstuff... A wonderful addition and it was the kind of romantic writing I could come back to love each time I read it.
Hoping for more soonerishkibbible.
 

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WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! ...Call me biased, but I just adore teenage-Robin... And his chivalry, and that he's GENEROUS in his tips (both of my sisters are waitresses...) All lovely!

MORE PLEASE!
 

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Hey guys..yeah sorry for the typos, I only noticed that after I had actually already post it! EE! Sorry guys. Oh, and Count- yeah don't worry. Conclude away, even if you want to PM me, that's fine. More coming as soon as I can!
 

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and Count and TogetherAgain, thanks for your kind words! I try really hard to make Robin vibrant and charming as a teenager, so it's good to know that i'm doing a semi good job!
 

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Hey...guys! Guess What? My dad finally got a new computer, so now I can post way more often!! Yaay!
 

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YAAAAAAAAAAY!

You do know that means we just might nag more, don't you?

MORE PLEASE!
 

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And you do know that means you can use your thread, not to mention the threads of others' stories to nag them for more right?
That means you Lisa... Looking for more of Heart of Gold, along with those other two somewhat neglected fanfics.
Oh, and before I forget... Post more Nicee!
 
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