Whoa... That was... Well, it was.
You might want to take care of a few spelling errors here and there...
And though I'm a bit reluctant to warm up to the ushygushies... The way it was developed in this chapter absolutely made me thrill to every little detail and show of chivalry from Robin towards Megan.
Simpy superb. Something troubles me though, this confrontation Megan dreads back at her home. There are a few conclusions I could make, but won't out of fear and respect for you, the author.
Great stuff greenstuff... A wonderful addition and it was the kind of romantic writing I could come back to love each time I read it.
Hoping for more soonerishkibbible.