christyb
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You too huh? I'm just getting over the flu. Right now I'm resting on my hour break and I'm trying to get enough energy to go back to class when it starts. I seem to be fine in the mornings but by midday I'm ready to call it a day. Annnyyywwwaaayyysss my health has nothing to do with this fab chapter. I particularly loved the Muppet reunion. Your detail in dialogue is dead on right there. I can see Kermit at the door and each Muppet slowly make it's entrance pausing for a little chitchat.ReneeLouvier said:All right, Ed. If my poor stomach can be still for 30 minutes, I'll crank out another wondefully delish chapter for ya'll over in my thread. I really want to do more, but if no new chapter appears, assume I've gone to bed for basically the weekend.
This line really stood out to me at the close. On one hand it's light and sum up on a good day for them all. An "all is well and good with the world" moment. However, for some reason I'm taking it that you meant it on the flip side. There's almost a forboding warning to it....so I ask you...do I need my teddy?Greenstuff said:With great vigor and vim they all ran out of the theatre, the sun shining perfectly on their youth. So vibrant. So energetic So carefree.