FanFic: The Predicament

[The Count]

Sorry, lemme explain. The bit with the plumber coming to fix the pipes... Though it was eluded to on the show, no plumber ever appeared on any of the show's episodes. The scene you wrote above about said plumber coming and interacting with Doc... Feels like it'd fit perfectly in any episode if such a scene as the one you wrote had been filmed.
Make sense now? And if it doesn't, it's better to make dollars anyway.

 

[Fragglemuppet]

Wow, what a dramatic chapter! The scene with the plummer made me laugh, as it reminded me of a friend who used to get in truble with tech support for "experimenting" with her computer. Wow, poor Red, and poor John, for not realizing all the trouble he caused, and poor doc, for the same reason, and the poor plummer... You get the idea, lol!
A couple of things though that I feel may need to be worked on in later chapters... First, Doc did tell Gobo his name; I believe it must have been in episode 95, although I haven't seen the all-important last few episodes. Second, and most importantly, not really sure how to say this, but when Gobo saw Doc hurt, I'm not so sure his main concern should have been seeing Doc as their provider of water. I'm not sure if you've seen the episode, but I believe the only reason Gobo and Doc ever met was that their was an emotional connection between the two of them. When all Gobo wanted from him was a material posession, he was not able to get through. Does this make sense?

 

[theprawncracker]

WHOA!! Sara! WoW!! Update!! Wheeee!! But it was soooo dramatic!! I love it! Can't wait for more!!

 

[muppetwriter]

Chapter Six was really marvelous, Renee.

It seems to me that Doc and Sprocket are getting a lot of attention in recent fanfics, including my F4/Muppets story. And that is excellent, considering that we're not that far away from the DVD release of the second season to FR.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

[crazed gonzo fa]

Thanks for the new chapter!

 

[Ruahnna]

Glad to see this thread reenergized--will try to catch up and post some more soon!

 

[The Count]

No! We won't let this wonderous story die! Come Sara, rise out of that funk and post more story!
Please? Oh, and excuse the nagging. Just feels so liberating after finishing my own story.
And if you get a chance, I'd need Scooter's B-Day (can be Richard's if the airdates of his original appearance prove too confussling).
So, more please!

 

[Java]

We need more!

 

[The Count]

Hey Sara... Know the RHLC has you pretty busy... But can we please get some more of this great story?
*Readies to let the penguins and muffins fly from both cannons.

 

[ReneeLouvier]

You'll get another chapter soon enough. Been kinda battling my own inner demons for awhile now. Couldn't really get the verve to start typing again.

But I'm back on the high saddle (so to speak) and the chapters will be coming. Maybe only one a day or every other day, but I'll get back into the swing of things!