FanFic: The Predicament

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Chapter Five

As Gobo nearly dragged Red through the caverns, she was not speaking at all. Having everyone take over the pool was bad enough, but when it was John at the head of it? It was almost unthinkable to her.

"I still can't believe John would do this to you Red! I mean, that's your job, right? It needs to stay your job." He was determined, as he twined his way through the smaller caverns, keeping his eyes peeled for any sign of John or the Fragglettes.

"...yeah..." Red mumbled, keeping up pace with him.

Gobo stopped, hearing the flat tone of Red's voice. He turned and looked at her, frowning softly.

"He took your job. Not only your job, but...he's hurting everyone." He said softly to her; lifting her chin upwards.

"How could he have hurt everyone, Gobo. I mean, it's just the pool. Everyone will get tired of playing, and splashing around; then they'll leave. And it'll all go back to normal."

"He's gone too far this time, Red! Remember when he made you and Mokey do those things? And he almost caused us to drive the doozers away?" Gobo paused for a moment, and wrapped his arms around Red, giving her a comforting hug.

"He shouldn't be allowed to...to flaunt his power to how he likes! He did that not for everyone else's benefits, but for his own!"

Red leaned into Gobo's strong arms, and laid her head on his shoulder. She started to cry just then. It was very rare, and very insulting for a Fraggle's job to be taken away like that.

"It'll be okay, Red." Gobo rubbed her back gently, and he slipped out of her grasp, and the two of them went on forward to find John.

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"So, John. How is everything going now?" Darla asked, leaning against the rock face; smiling.

"It's much cooler now. A nice breeze is coming around." John said, his eyes still closed tight, relaxing once more on the large rock.

"You know what's still going on though?" Carla said, with a sour sneer. "The water is still going down!"

Carla pointed downwards, as the Fraggles were filing out of the pool, drying themselves off, and the water was only a couple of inches deep now, and was still being drained.

"The Gorgs are pulling their weekly bathwater. That's what's going on." John said, irritablely.

Darla looked down, and saw the Fraggles were fussing among themselves, and were beginning to meander back to their normal daily plans. The pool was completely empty now, and was quickly turning bone dry in the heat.

"John?? Something is really wrong. Normally...the Gorgs only pull half the pool, right?" Darla said, with a slight tremor to her voice.

Convincing John sat up just then. When Darla got worried, it was really time to maybe take an interest in what was being said. He too looked over the edge, and his face took the color of a pale rag fraggle just then.

As John was looking over the edge, a small rock hit the wall, right above his head. Turning to see who it was, he almost went white.

"Convincing John Fraggle!" Gobo was standing in the doorway, with Red beside him. He looked all the part of a hero for his woman done wrong, but he was more intrested in knowing why that had happened below.

"You caused all this! What got into your head? Red had a job to do, and it was her job! You don't even know why she chose this day to clean the pool out, do you??" He was steaming mad, but as he walked closer to John and the Fragglettes; he made himself calm down.

It was not right to hold anger towards him, the poor fool didn't even realize what he had done, more then likely.

"...I...no I don't know why she happened to pick this day of the week to do her job!" John shot back, attempting to glare Gobo down.

Gobo came up close to John, and stared him in the face. Then he turned away; and grasped Red's hand, nodding to her. She nodded back, and walked closer to John; coming up beside Gobo.

"M-Mr. John? I chose that day, because Mokey had told me that that was when the Gorgs normally took their baths. I clean the pool, the pool drains about h-halfway, then the pipebangers would come, and it would fill again. And the pool would be clean enough for it to refill. Just because it's hot, dosn't mean every fraggle in Fraggle Rock should go and swim in the pool!!" She finished talking, and looked straight at John for his response.

"And...have the Gorgs ever drawn too much water?" He asked, turning to look downwards to the now dry lake bed.

"Not too often. That's because the water is cold when they draw it. The silly creatures water is cold, our water is cold, their water is cold. Mokey and Gobo have helped me piece together how the waterways work. It's all connected, Mr. John."

Gobo frowned at John, who closed his eyes for a moment. He knew he was in hot water, so to speak.

"I-I didn't realize that. I'm sorry." He looked down, hoping they would just leave. He really didn't mean for all of that to happen, but it had already happened, and nothing could have changed.

"You need to know what you're dealing with before you go convincing someone, John. I'm going to go up to the room, to see what's going on. See why we haven't gotten any water from that silly creature yet."

Gobo then left with Red in tow, hoping to find better news outside.
 

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Yea!!!!!!!!!! An update!!!!! And a very good one at that. I love how Gobo is coming to the rescue for Red. I also loved the tender moment they shared when Red put her head on his shoulder and cried. And I'm so curious about this water mystery! I can't wait to read more!
 

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Yes... An excellent addition to the story.

Liked Red's line of how she learned the waterways are all connected... Reference to, though you probably haven't seen the episode yet, the one with the Merggles.
Also liked the moment Gobo and Red shared... Kind of reinforces the quiet beauty of Red you painted in the last chapter before this one.
And John's ashamed of what he's done, but he's still in hot water so to speak... Funny.

Hope to get some more soon, post when you can Sara.
 

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Poor Red, still so vulnerable. And Convincing John begining to realize what a huge mess it all is.

You've really captured the Fraggle world and how it all fits in together very well. That part of the show always left a huge imprint in my mind.
 

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Hmmm... Maybe by bringing this one back up topside Sara will remember to update it.

Come on... What do we want?!?
More please!!!
 

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Sissy? Come on, give us an update! We're dying over here!
Red: Please? I gotta know what happens to me!
 

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More tomorrow...I'm kinda in a funk cause I'm waiting for a typing evulation from Snelling Personel Services. :concern:

Sorry 'bout the non-update though. Just not sure...exactly how to take it from here. But I'll get it figured out. Another chapter before 10am tomorrow, EST.

Got it? Sorry about it again...
 

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That's OK Sara... We understand... Don't we guys?
*Looks glaringly at rest of MC gang, as if to get them to agree.

Just remember to post. Like I said, we're avid readers here and love a good story, which is what this is. Would hate to have another one chucked in half, when it's coming along so beautifully.
If you need to talk about story ideas or where to take the plot, LMK I'll be in my room downstairs.

*Pats Sara on shoulder, leaving her a small trinket.
Hope this brings you luck, meant to give to you on the B-Day you had.
*Box has a silver chain and a Scooter glasses charm.
 

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Oh great, then the next bit should be ready for me when I wake up, eh?
*wink* I love all of it so far, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
 
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