FanFic - Love is Neverending

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Well... I'd point out that Sara didn't kill off Emily Bear... Sara's just an observer and reports what happens around her... But since it's not my story, I'll let her continue with whatever's next. Rully well done, but I'm pulling for the Christian-Bear family to find a happy ending.
 

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*Ahem... Bringing this back up to the surface... Can't let it go till we get an ending... Already posted in my story, just waiting for some updates in these that I've enjoyed so far.
 

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Thanks. Trying to get everyone on spot with 'em. More on the ongoing story in a bit/soon/whenever the chapter I'm working on is done.

X_X But thanks though, Ed!
 

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Ah! This is sooo sad! ohmygoodness.

I need a hug
 

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Chapter Eighteen

Sorry it's kinda short and crappy. The well's run dry, and I'm scraping around for the last few drops.

Early Summer - 2005

Fozzie was milling about the theatre, trying to keep his mind off of all the chaos around him. He wished his Dad would come back from the store, as lately he wouldn't even practice his monologue unless Jerome was there to watch him.

He was more of an insecure bear then usual, after his mother died. Every little thing scared him, and he jumped at the slightest noise. He stared at the clock, and frowned again. He really wondered where Jerome had gotten too.

Kermit was walking backstage. An unwilling frog, who usually knew just about everything that sneezed, talked or walked around there.

"Kermit!" He dashed over to his frog, smiling sadly. "Oh, Kermmitt!"

"What Fozzie? What's going on?" Kermit asked, crossing his arms for a moment.

"I..where's Dad??" He asked, wringing his hands once more, looking at the frog of his heart with saddened eyes.

Kermit paused for a second, then he saw a calendar on the wall. He frowned softly, and looked back at Fozzie. "Don't you know what today is?"

"Today?" The worried bear echoed, as he turned to where Kermit's point of view fell. He saw what day it was. "..oh no! I've gotta go, Kermit!! See you later!!"

With that, Fozzie was out the door in a flash, grabbing his keys off of the desk and pratically flying into his studebaker. He began the thirty minute trip to the place he knew his Dad would be.

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"Hello Emily." Jerome said quite softly, as he eased himself slowly onto the ground beside the simple stone that bore her name. "I've missed you a lot." He said a bit brighter, as Sprocket snuggled close against his chest.

"I brought you some flowers, and your favorite sunhat." He smiled, setting the flowers, blue begonias on the ground. He gingerly set the sunhat on that simple stone, and smiled.

The soft rumble of the studebaker became louder, and then as suddenly as it came into hearing, it stopped. Jerome looked up and he smiled once more. It was his son, come to see the grave, or see him.

"Son...you came!" He said brightly, standing up from the ground somewhat slowly. "How did you know I'd be here?"

"I saw what the date was...on, on the calendar. I figured you had come here instead of the theatre."

"Well, son. That's true. I only wish you'd calm down a bit. Why are you so worried for me? You never let me out of your sight anymore.." He said, frowning softly.

The bear looked down at Sprocket, and petted his head gently. He'd come to doing that sometimes. He was getting to be a bit more like Jerome everyday, in those little ways people don't really notice, unless they look hard enough.

"I don't want you to leave me too." He said softly.

Jerome stopped cold, and smiled softly. "Well, I guess we'll certainly know each other wonderfully, when that day happens. Won't we?"

Fozzie agreed, and smiled as the two of them walked out from the gravesite, hand in hand.
 

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Hey, it was short but it was still really nice! I liked it, it's nice that they remember Emily and it's very nice the way Fozzie is now connected to Doc and thinks of him as a dad. Great job!
 

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Well... Since you're all online...
Lisa, if you could, please clear out your PM inbox... And post some more Flippersteps.
Sara... A nice chapter, but it's not the end is it? Just knock on my door if you need to speak with us for finishing the story ideas again.
Only thing... Fozzie thinks of Kermit as "the frog of his heart"? Thought that was Piggy territory.
Anyway, short and sweet but it rully comes across well.
 

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Well he's told to Kermit before "Oh frog of my heart" Piggy's intereptation of that line is way different then Fozzie of course. And no it's not the end, I'm just really struggling to finish this up. I've had a couple of ideas, but I think no one would like them....>>

It's...way too sad. Do you guys want to see the ending I've been struggling to do, or wait it out for a not so sad ending??
 

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In one sense It's up to you Sara. But personally I wouldn't want this story to turn into too much of a tearjerker. What do the rest of you all think?
 
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