This is great! Super fun to read. Pardon the long comment here, but I like to pick through my favorite stuff:
Wayne saying "I was topped on the Billboard, twice in Japan. I am the star!" This is a great detail, and so plausible! Ha!
"Why, I am an unbelieveable actor, and crooner. I--" I can SO hear Link saying this. You got his ego down pat, haha!
Sty High Theatre - really cute and clever!
Link drinking beer in front of the TV with his beer gut hanging out cracks me up. I just never thought about that before, I don't know why!
"Though, I do not understand french, and I am no Cher, of course. Though, I'd be Piggy's Sonny to her Cher. I'm a man. Wait, I think she'd meant thank you. I don't know." BRILLIANT.
Link busting out with "Wunderbar" is hilarious, as are Piggy and Kermit's reactions to his impromptu song.
Illiterate, broken and feeble Link makes me sad. Poor Link!
For some reason, Link picking the lint off of his tux pants makes me smile. Nice detail, there!
I think you wrote Piggy very well here. Her vacillations between sweet and feminine to DEADLY at the drop of a hat when Link says something dumb on their date is so true to form! His attempt at a romantic metaphor involving moons and "big pigs" is hilarious. Poor guy.
"I was the one who had to tip the chauffeur a twenty." LOL!
You write wonderful little details and I am really enjoying the overall story. I hope you continue this!
I approve this wonderful feedback. ~ <3
Thank you. :3
Hahaha... with Wayne, I didn't create that; one friend of mine writes WaynexWanda amazingly well. He asked me about Wayne, and Link having some kind of martial argument, and I said sure. He gets the credit for makin' Wayne more interesting. LOL!
Miss Piggy's feminine, flirtatous, sexy; faux french was fun to write, especially when Kermit, and Link make wisecracks to her... I'm really glad you're enjoying PiggyxLink, makes me want to write another installment with them.
A lot of my friends here gave me great inspiration and encouragement to continue writing, and I'll definitly have the fourth chapter up soon.
Thank you for reading.
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