- Oct 27, 2011
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You know....I had been thinking about that last night and realized, it need to read spring and not fall, cause that's the season that comes after winter, right?Where to begin...
The only thing that really didn't make sense to me was how you started the chapter, "winter months marked the start of fall"?
I made these guys much worse than my own invoice issue, but the guy really is nice, just really disorganized maybe.*Laughs at the people Amanda has to put up with from that other shipping company, from Nick's hitting to Courtney's spaceyness to Albert's wheedling. And these are characters we've only met through incidental mentioning, and already I'm finding they add such a funny dimension to Amanda's workload.
I'm sure Elmo would love the company.*Evil grin at the thought of Amanda actually bringing up these people to Kermit to have him take them to the street.
I have to admit that I was a bit worried about this and thought maybe I should be a rating of PG-13. I ultimately decided that I probably won't include the idea I had after...well just after.You have learned much from the masters of ushgush here at MC, I'm rully loving the play between Scoot and Mandy.
She's a vonderful addition to the Muppet OC community.
And you get brownie points for adding the oft-used quip from The Graduate.
Another great installment, keep it coming.
Yep. I see we are heading into ushygushland. Okay... *buckles on safety goggles* Ready!
Nice so far. This is the best chunk: "Kermit had finally been forced to face the very real possibility that his denials, his distance, and frankly, his reluctance on starting something that he was afraid wouldn’t last had caused the very thing he had feared." Well put.
That's the only downside to this particular forum, is that I'm unable to go back and change things. Often, I tend to make changes as I'm posting or when I've read what I've posted and I can't do that here. Which sucks, cause whenever I think of something to add, I can't go back and add it or worse, I don't add it to the Word version and then I forget it.Do please watch your word omissions, is my only critical gripe. But I am following happily overall. LOVE the suggestion that Kermit hook up the distributors with some, er, returning educational material? I may have to use that. In real life.