FanFic: Demon's Delight

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Chapter Nine

"Get off of me, Eli!!!" Scooter yelled, as the demon hugged him tightly. Eli seemed to be out of very badly just then. He just wished he would put him down, so he wouldn't get hurt. He could already start to feel a few of his stitches popping out again.

Eli started to hum, some nonseical lullaby to Scooter. He was obviously stuck in his memories of when Scooter was merely a baby, and he was the original owner of that theatre.

"Little baby, please hush as I hold you tight, for I love you so much, I'll never let you go.....and I wish no harm upon yourself, as you grow into the man I know...just love and let go, live and thrive, as I watch your soul from way up high.....just know your Uncle and Mother are safe, as we watch and we wait, for well good times..." Eli sang discorandily to Scooter, who just stopped struggling finally. He had figured, just let him finish, and then maybe he put him down, and he could away from him.

Eli dropped to his knees on the floor, still holding Scooter tightly to him, he started to sob. He laid the gofer down onto the floor, and just sobbed on his chest. Scooter was going to move, but....it just didn't seem right to him.

"Uh....there there...it'll...be okay, Eli." He patted Eli's head, feeling very out of place just then. He watched as the demon broke down, although....he had tried to take his soul before....and he had tried to kill Beauregard and Robin eariler. Somehow, Scooter felt some pity for him. It seemed the demon finally felt the weight of what he had done to them.

Eli stood up again, and gently placed Scooter back in his wheelchair, and wheeled him out into the living room, slowly. His wounds were taking him over, he could feel his was probably dying he figured. He looked around for a moment at the silent living room.

"...I'll be leaving now." He said somberly. Starting for the door, he limped slowly. Sadie stood in front of the door, glaring.

"Where are you going now?" She was ready to hurt him again.

"Back to the theatre, I intend to make amends, my dear." He replied softly, his eyes towards the floor. He shuffled slow, hoping she would move, letting him pass, he didn't feel like hurting anyone anymore.

"...You aren't going to hurt Deadly and Eleanor are you? What do you intend to do?"

He looked at her, his red eyes now a pale blue. He had no fangs when he smiled softly. No claw-like fingernails. No tail. He was stripped of his demonic presense. Death had stripped him clean of all of his powers. He was merely a man now, wishing to make right the wrongs he had done.

Sadie looked at him. Then she smiled. Quite an odd look he figured. "I'll wake up Kermit, then we'll go together."

He merely nodded, as Sadie went to wake up Kermit and a few of the others. Kermit walked outside, and yelled for whoever outside to follow them, they were going to the theatre again.

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"Man...you fight hard, Skeet." Clifford remarked to Skeeter as they walked inside the theatre. His ribs hurt and so did his legs.

"Sorry. Just too much pent up anger..." Skeeter smiled at Clifford, they followed the rest inside the theatre, and glanced around. It looked better then it was before.

"Deadly? Have you two done all of this?" Kermit pondered out loud, not seeing either of the ghouls around for the second.

Eleanor was the only one sitting on the stage, smiling. She beckoned them with her hand, no words said. She pointed to the backstage area, where Deadly and Death were arguing, with Life beside them, trying to break the fuss up.

"You will punish that boy to the fullest extent, Death!" Deadly shouted back at Death.

"FOR WHAT I'VE DONE TO THE BOY, HE'S DESERVED ENOUGH, DEADLY."

"He deserves more then what you've done. He deserves eternal heck for all I care."

"HE MAY HAVE BEEN ACTING AGAINST MY WISHES, BUT HE IS STILL MY SON. I CANNOT PUNISH HIM ANYMORE THEN I ALREADY HAVE."

"Well, then. Will you go ahead and tell me what you've done to him!! Two hours of fussing and you've never told me what you've DONE!!"

Death looked out over the stage. He saw the muppets, and Eli standing there, beside Eleanor. Beneath his hood you could see a hint of an evil, cruel smile.

"I'VE RELNQUISHED HIS RIGHT TO IMMORTALITY. WHEN HE DIES....HIS SOUL IS MINE."

Eli stood back, hearing that. He figured his Father had merely given him the ability to feel pain and emotion. Because before, other then anger it seemed, he felt nothing. He never cared before, memories of terrible things he had done never bothered him. He had wondered for so long, was he merely this cold and cruel? Or was it because his Father had graciously kept those emotions out of his grasp?

Death smiled, looking at his son.

"LIKE I SAID BEFORE. IF YOU TRIED TO TAKE ANOTHER SOUL....I WOULD HAVE YOURS."
 

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Ok, so are we supposed to start feeling bad for Eli? I'm starting to feel kind of bad for him! I don't know what I want Death to do to him! But, some more good writing going on again in this chapter, very suspensful, can't wait to see what happens next!
 

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I don't know. Whatever you guys feel for him is fine with me. I'm just simply the author, not the controller of your emotions.

Oh wait. I seem to be with this trilogy I've written. XD So, yeah, I'd guess so. Eli, he's finally felt the weight of what he's done. He's mortal now, so he feels pain, and he's in a lot of it too. He kinda lost his mind for a little bit, while he was cradling Scooter. The grown up Scooter in his arms. XD

So whatever you feel is fine.
 

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And Life went along with this? Well I guess so, he's alrady turned his own son mortal. Oh Renee... What to get you for an update...
 

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Chapter Ten

Eli stood rooted to the spot, as Death walked closer to him. Death was laughing, this cruel deep laugh. Everyone's blood ran cold when they heard that laugh echoing throughout the damaged theatre. Death stopped about a foot away from Eli. They all moved away from the two.

"...." Eli looked down at the ground. Death clamped a hand on his shoulder.

"YOU'VE DISSAPOINTED ME SON. YOU CRAVE WHAT I CAUSE TOO MUCH."

He was barely speaking, a soft whisper escaping his lips. "..please just make this quick, Father..."

"NO. I WILL NOT. YOU HAVE TORTURED THESE PEOPLE TOO MUCH." Death glared at Eli, frowning deeply. Again it went back to where it was merely the way of living, for Eli it had become a vengence.

Eli stood there, awaiting his punishment. Death held out his skeleton hand to his son.

"SON. I HAVE RELENQUISHED YOUR RIGHT TO IMMORTALITY. BUT...YOU MUST LEARN COMPASSION, LOVE, AND... A LOT OF OTHER THINGS." He never really liked saying those words, but Life jabbed him in his side, smiling. She stepped forward, smiling.

"Eli, dear. What Death is trying to say, is that you shall learn with these two. Eleanor and Deadly have agreed to watch over you."

Eli looked at his Mother's radiant face, he didn't understand. "I have to stay here, with them? I thought Father said my soul was his..."

"I HAVE NO USE FOR YOUR SOUL SON. YOU SHALL SERVE KERMIT AND HIS FRIENDS IN THE ONLY WAY WE COULD FIND. YOU SHALL DIE IN THIS THEATRE, AND YOU SHALL HAUNT THIS THEATRE, ALONG WITH ELEANOR AND DEADLY. THEY SHALL TEACH YOU WHAT YOU NEED TO KNOW."

Kermit stepped forward, frowning. "We've already got 2 phantoms in here. We...we really don't need anymore..."

Death glared at Kermit, he could feel his entire body going cold now. "HE SHALL DIE HERE KERMIT. IF HE EVER GIVES YOU ANY TROUBLE, TELL DEADLY OR ELEANOR, THEY SHALL SHOVE HIM OUT OF THE THEATRE, AND IN TURN HIS SPIRIT SHALL LEAVE THIS PLANE." He glared at his son again. "AND THEN HE SHALL TAKE UP RESIDENCE WITH ME."

Kermit just nodded, walking back beside Miss Piggy. Death reached out, and placed his hand on Eli's chest.

"YOU TORTURED THE BOY. YOU GAVE HIM PAIN, AND IF WERE NOT FOR YOUR SISTER, HE WOULD BE DEAD. YOU...SHALL DIE IN THE SAME WAY. ONLY MUCH MORE...." He smiled, gripping his bony hand into Eli's chest tightly. "...PAINFUL."

With that, Eli crumpled down onto the floor, a stretched scream coming from his mouth. Death was evaporating his organs, one by one. First his liver, then his intenstines....his stomach, then the only organs left were his brain, his lungs and his heart.

"...YOU FEEL HIS PAIN, DON'T YOU? YOUR SCREAMS BOTHER ME SON...THEY DIDN'T BOTHER YOU? BECAUSE OF YOU THE POOR BOY WAS AWAKE DURING SURGERY....HE WAS SCREAMING. YOU HEARD HIM DIDN'T YOU??"

Then his lungs, and finally his heart. Eli collasped on his side, just a moment before death's icy grip picked him up again. He stared at his son, and he frowned. Life patted his cheek softly, not smiling.

"We shall come back in a few days to see how you are sweetheart, as a phantom in this place."

With that, they left. Just a few seconds later, Eli died. He laid on the floor, still as a rock for what seemed like forever. It was only a few minutes, till he sat up once more. His skin was an ashy white. His hair had dulled to black with gray highlights, and his eyes were a milky white now. He looked at them, and looked around. Then he stood up.

"Um..." He stammered, looking at Kermit. He smiled a little bit. No one moved or even spoke. They were so stunned now.

Kermit just shook his head, looking up at Eli. "...you can help Beauregard with the...sets I guess...." He didn't really know what else to say to the used to be demon, who was now a phantom, a ghost. Eli smiled, and pointed to the backstage area.

"They're back there, arn't they?" He was eager to help them, he didn't want to go to his Father. For if he did...he would simply elimanate his existance. Eli floated off, with Deadly and Eleanor following him. Beau looked back at Kermit, and he shrugged, walking down behind the three phantoms.

Kermit looked back at his friends, and he opened his mouth for a moment, about to say something. But then he closed it, he didn't know what to say.

"Anymore spooks and we could rent ourselves out as a haunted house in Halloween." Rizzo simply stated, laughing.

Nearly everyone giggled or laughed hearing that. The still over them was broken, and they started making their way down the aisle, to help finish up repairs on the theatre. To get ready for their new season of shows.

Scooter went into the backstage area, and saw Eli holding his clipboard, flipping through it.

"Hey, that's mine.." Eli held his hand up to shush him, and he pointed out a few things.

"If you changed this around, and dropped this type of coverage..you'd get lower payments, you know. Oh! And for this, you need to update this permit...and....why do you guys have a topless bar permit?"

"Pepe got it." Scooter replied laughing. "We don't know why, but it's only like $50 so he keeps getting it for us."

Eli laughed, handing the clipboard to Scooter again, and he went off to the back to get some tools. He was going to put up wallpaper on the walls again, fix the theatre. Fix what he's done to them.

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It was a week later, when Kermit stood on the stage of the repaired theatre, and looked around. Scooter walked out on the stage and stopped beside Kermit. He looked around for a moment as well.

"He's repaid us hasn't he, Chief?"

"I'd guess so. But...he's such a great help, I don't really want to get rid of him."

"Yeah..."

Kermit smiled at Scooter for a moment. Then he just simply nodded, walking back over to the exit of the theatre.

'He's repaid his debt and then some.' Scooter mused, seeing Eli repairing on the last seats in the theatre. 'All that he's caused....all that he's done...'

'We're even more of a family because of it.'

Scooter smiled, and walked slowly off of the stage, smiling.

'His soul is clean, and he's learned love....he's learned what family is again.'


-~-~-THE END-~-~-
 

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The Count said:
And Life went along with this? Well I guess so, he's alrady turned his own son mortal. Oh Renee... What to get you for an update...
Well, the way I feel Life, is that she understands emotions, and the weight of signifnace of things. She understood that her son had to go through with this. Although I've posted THE END on pg. 4, I'll probably do an Epilogue. And it wasn't an ending just to get it done before Friday, I....I just couldn't figure how to extend it much further. XD So I'll be wrapping up any loose strings in the epilogue, just anyone give me ideas, or point out loose strings to me, and that will be taken care in the Epilogue.
 

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Well... *Leaves batch of little coconut kisses. Just shredded coconut sprinkled with sugar and glued together with a bit of oil.

Nice ending, though I kinda feel it could've had more. Maybe elaborate a bit on just what it is Eli had to learn for his spirit to groan... Maybe have his acceptance and understanding mature his spirit to the point where Life comes back to get him... In a few weeks worth of working with the gang at the theater?
And I hope we get another instant hit from your fingers... Maybe exploring Nancy's lost child.
 

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Thanks Ed! How did you know?? *has little bag of coconut kisses beside her now, munching on them.* (Really wish I had some now. XD)

As to his spirit growing....yes, perhaps. I've got to think out that epilogue some. I had intended this last story to be a bit shorter then the others, wrapping up all the loose ends from "Remembering the Good Times" and "The Search for Sadie" as well. Once I had realized, they could be a trilogy! :big_grin:

So yes, I will continute and write an epilogue to this story. This has to be the fastest written fanfiction in MC history. XD Under...a month, I've written close to....

Run-Down on Stories

"Remembering The Good Times We Had"
  • 14,790 words
  • Eighteen Chapters + Full Commentary
  • 2 days
  • Febuary 1 - 2, 2006

"The Search For Sadie"
  • 25,998 words
  • Epilogue, and Twenty Chapters + Half Commentary
  • 5 days
  • Febuary 2 - 7, 2006

"Demon's Delight"
  • 8,009 words
  • Prologue, Epilogue and 10 chapters
  • 2 days
  • Febuary 7 - 9, 2006
WOW. I'm suprised at myself, just when I tallyed these numbers up.

Less then ten days, and I've written 48,797 words. That's also not counting commentary either. O_O Just so suprised at myself. Wow....

And tommorrow I will write more commentary for Search For Sadie. Alright? And probably within the next couple days, perhaps next monday, I'll start on the commentary for Demon's Delight, once I write the epilogue for it as well. :big_grin:

Love all, Renee.
 

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Great ending! I really like how you ended this Renee, with Eli joining Deadly and Eleanor, he'll learn alot from them! Anxious to see the epilogue, but applause now for another job well done!
 
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