FanFic: Demon's Delight

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Epilogue

Eli sat in the balcony, looking over the set designs he had done. He felt that they would look wonderful for Miss Piggy's number. He watched as his now friends were all milling about, getting ready for tonights show. He smiled. He's stayed with for nearly a month now.

"What are you doing up there, Eli? We need you backstage before the show starts!!" Scooter yelled up at Eli, who floated down to him.

"Oh, I was just admiring the stage setup, that's all! I believe Miss Piggy would throughly enjoy it....the reds vibrantly clashing with the purples in her dress...it will look wonderful." He smiled, quite proud of his work. He had been doing sets for nearly the entire month, while also taking the time to finish up cleaning the entire backstage area. Those drawings were exceedingly hard to clean off. He was still working at it.

"Right. Well, get backstage before the audience comes in. Seeing a...ghost would drive them out of here." He nodded, walking backstage, with Eli following close after.

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Kermit was sitting in his office, looking over the papers again. The insurance, and the water bills. The setup for tonights show. Where everyone was going to be, the skits, the music. He never even noticed the lone, soft-stepped spirit enter his room.

The spirit, she sat softly in a large old battered armchair. She smoothed out it's dress, and pulled up it's socks, smiling.

"Kermit?" She asked, her voice as soft as a summer breeze.

Kermit muttered something, rummaging around in his desk for a pen, and started to sign some of those papers. "Yeah? If it's about the jokes tonight, or the....or Gonzo's act, I'll talk later...okay?"

She laughed, smiling. "Kermit? You're just too wrapped up as usual arn't you?"

Kermit stopped, and laid the pen down, he glanced slowly over his shoulder, hearing that soft sweet voice again. "N-Nanny?"

"Hello Kermit. I see my brother's been doing well, I take it."

"Yes! Very well....he's completely turned over a new leaf."

She nodded her head, looking down at her hands for a moment, before folding them up in her lap. She smiled at Kermit, quite happy to see him again.

"I heard your song. And I've watched your shows....my, you've grown up so well."

Kermit blushed a little bit, still seated in his chair, his pen leaking ink on the floor now. He saw it, and placed it back in it's holder. "Thanks. What are you doing here though?"

"Me and mother have come to take Eli back with us. He's done his time here. He's repaid his debt to all of you, as best he could."

The frog nodded, then looked Nancy straight in the face. "Has he repaid his debt to you though?"

"What do you mean? He has no debts to repay me. Why would he?"

He frowned, remembering when she had called him, a few years ago. "He caused that accident, you know. It was his fault."

She looked to the side, her hair starting to obsecure her face from him. "Oh...Kevin. No, that wasn't his fault at all. It was an accident, Kermit."

He stood up from the seat then, he was getting angry, but at what he wasn't even sure. "But...you lost your son. How could not feel anger towards him?"

"I know my brother...that's why. It was simply an accident, Kermit. He too was almost killed by it."

Kermit sighed, and sat back down heavily in the seat. He wished he could do more, but he wasn't sure what to do, how to help. It all seemed pointless sometimes.

Nancy stood up from the armchair, and walked over to Kermit. She smiled, reaching around his arms, and giving him a hug. She felt cold as ice, yet...somehow as warm as the sunlight filtering down from the summer sky. She smelled like roses, and the sweet marsh grasses Kermit remembered from when he was a little frog. He closed his eyes, and he smiled.

"I still need to get Eli, Kermit. Where is he?"

"Oh. He's downstairs, probably lineing up the costumes or something like that."

She nodded and walked downstairs, not too suprisingly, no one really noticed her. She walked over to Eli, and tapped him on the shoulder. Kermit watched from the door of his office, he smiled. Nancy smiled back at him, and the two walked down the hallway, talking as they simply dissapeared into nothingness.

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"What are you looking at, Kermie?" Piggy asked sweetly, as she leaned over in front of him, to show off her purple sequined dress to him. He just smiled, and gave her a kiss on the cheek.

"Ooh, Kermie! What's the special occasion, moi's froggy?"

"Everything's going to be alright, Miss Piggy."

She stopped for a second, and looked at him, quite puzzled. "Come again?"

He smiled, and closed the door, walking down the stairs with Piggy behind him.

"We've got a lot of people watching out for us, Piggy. Everything is going to be alright."


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"real" END-~-~-~

 

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*another standing ovation for job well done* Great ending! I'm glad to see that Eli has turned over a new leaf and that he will be with his sister and mother now. It was also nice to see Nanny make an appearance again. Anyway, this was another great story Renee, way to go!
 

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Yes... A nice quiet ending. Liked that Nanny was here, just sort of fading back into the ether of wherever she came from.
Kevin eh? Reference to Kevin Clash? Or Kevin the moderator?
Nice ending. Just hope we don't have to wait for either more commentary or your next story.
 

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Oh, actually no reference intended. :smile: It was just the first name that came to mind to tell the truth.
 

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Excellent work, Renee!

I love how the way this story first turned out. The title ("Demon's Delight") had me thinking for sure that the mood was going to be far darker than the previous one. The descriptions you made, with the blood and violence, made me shiver a little. And you had the Muppets actually bleed in one part of the story!:eek: When you look at the Muppets, you hardly ever wonder about their anatomy; but from your stories, Renee, you made them far more real than Jim did, especially with the references to Scooter's stitches.

I also appreciate the dogmatic outlook that I had while reading this story. Your interpretation of "Light versus Dark" is far greater than that of something out of Star Wars. You're kind of like the "Stephen King" of the Muppet fanfic world, Renee (and that's a good thing...believe me).:wink:

And I didn't know that there was a trilogy. I have to go and read the first story sometime. I can say this...you ended this particular trilogy better than the Walowski (sp?) brothers ended "The Matrix" saga.

Don't stop here, Renee. I believe you can turn this trilogy into an ongoing series. I'm sure there are other stories in the "Sadie Saga" to share.:smile:
 

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muppetwriter said:
I love how the way this story first turned out. The title ("Demon's Delight") had me thinking for sure that the mood was going to be far darker than the previous one. The descriptions you made, with the blood and violence, made me shiver a little. And you had the Muppets actually bleed in one part of the story! When you look at the Muppets, you hardly ever wonder about their anatomy; but from your stories, Renee, you made them far more real than Jim did, especially with the references to Scooter's stitches.

I also appreciate the dogmatic outlook that I had while reading this story. Your interpretation of "Light versus Dark" is far greater than that of something out of Star Wars. You're kind of like the "Stephen King" of the Muppet fanfic world, Renee (and that's a good thing...believe me).

And I didn't know that there was a trilogy. I have to go and read the first story sometime. I can say this...you ended this particular trilogy better than the Walowski (sp?) brothers ended "The Matrix" saga.

Don't stop here, Renee. I believe you can turn this trilogy into an ongoing series. I'm sure there are other stories in the "Sadie Saga" to share.
I just have to say, that that comment made my day today. I wasn't feeling too well when I woke up, and wow. I'm really smiling now, thank you. I'm the "Stephen King" of Muppet Fanfiction. Woah. That's quite something right there. See, I also don't believe that something that evil, could always be that evil either. There is always room to change, and room for compassion and love.

Yes, there may be continuing stories, a'la Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, but not just yet. I've got to collect my ideas, and thoughts, and continue on for a moment.
 

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- Skeeter was outside doing some karate with Clifford, just trying to keep her mind off of what happened. -
Squeee!!! Sory, forgive me if everyone thinks of Skeety as a Karatee-kid, but, I swear I thought of it first :stick_out_tongue: So that makes this a reference.
 

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Thank you. I've been tumbling around in my head for a while for a continuation to this "Trilogy" of mine. :big_grin: Just a little something interesting. :smile: I'll just give you a small simdgen of it.

'With death comes life, when it comes to fight or flight, some take wing, while others sing.'

Just a little thought I've been tumbling around for awhile. :smile:

Love all, Renee
 
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