Chasing Robin

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The next chapter? Well, to quote Pete in MTM: "Is coming, is coming! Got two hands only!"

And yeah, I knew that wild horses run in herds, I just wasn't sure if they were really refered to as herds. Or something like that.
 

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Yay! Now time for a detailed review of your chapter!

Here was a woman pushing a stroller, a man carrying groceries, some kids playing, a big yellow bird...[/]Quote]

A big yellow bird?!?

"Yeah," Robin said. "What are you doing here, Big Bird? This isn't Sesame Street."

Big Bird laughed. "We're on vacation," he said. "What are you doing here?"
Ironic that the Muppets were on vacation in RoE, and the SS gang is on vacation in your fan-fic isn't it?

Robin poked his head out of the yellow feathers.
That is such a beautiful picture! I love it!

"I'll call the theater," he said.
Yes Gordon! Go, call the theater!

"Here," a woman on the bus said. "I'll pay for you."
What a nice woman.

Scooter had cabin fever. It was burning in his brain.
Ha! That's funny!

Sam looked furious. "WHAT?" he said. "Get these- these foul things out of here! Immediately!"
Foul? Or Fowl?

Kermit hesitated another moment before answering. "I- I'm afraid of what might happen if they catch Robin," he said.
Poor Kermit. Get those guys out of the bathroom and find Robin!

"Gordan?" Miss Piggy asked.

"From Sesame Street," Kermit explained.

"Ohhh," they all said, and they pulled away.
They didn't even ask! So Muppety! I love it!

I'm postin' more RoE soon, so you give me more Chasing Robin!
 

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Since when do I take orders? At least pretend to be polite. :stick_out_tongue: And anyway, I already posted a chapter today. You know that, you just did a lovely (much appreciated) detailed review of it. So if you're waiting for me to post another chapter before you post your next chapter, you've got a long wait, because I'm not posting until you do.
 

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Together Again said:
So if you're waiting for me to post another chapter before you post your next chapter, you've got a long wait, because I'm not posting until you do.
Neither of us would finish if you did that! Oh well, I already posted mine.:big_grin:
 

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Nice, nice, nice! Lovely to see Sam and Scooter around still! They work so well together...not...he he!!!

Beau
 

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So who's looking forward to the next chapter? I know I am. There's two, yes TWO cameos, plus a challenge of a reference. And Robin... er... hitches a ride. Oh, and there's some funny stuff, too.
So. Anybody interested?
 

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I'm interested, but I'm also so caught up in my own story I am finidng it hard to concentrate on others, I must admit. I am going to have to go back and re-read them all one day, and really enjoy them. Because....my mind is soooo stuck over in the Visions thread, that I can't get it anywher eelse, not here, not in the Moppet Family, or even at home...which makes life difficult.

I so enjoy writing, that I rarely leave my room...which will get me into trouble sooner or later I know...
 

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That's okay, it sounds kind of like me. I'm about to get in trouble for not leaving my room all day, my dad just came home... uh oh...

EDIT: Aw, what the heck... next chapter coming up!

SECOND EDIT: <drops head on desk> Don't you hate it when you type, oh, say half a chapter or so, and then you hit a button by mistake and all of a sudden the window closes, thus undoing all that typing you've just done? <sigh>
 
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