muppetwriter
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It did. Thanks for pointing out that error, Count.The Count said:One little thing though.
Originally posted by MW: "“What the heck’s going on?!” Angelica yelled, and she & Angelica looked through the windows to see Sweetums and Doglion grinning and glaring at the both
of them."
You might want to change this to say she and Peter instead.
Hope this helps, hope for more story soon.
Also, this is another off-topic message, but I wanted to inform everyone that right after I finish this story, I'm going to be working on a tale that'll lead in to another summer blockbuster, Superman Returns.
I was wrong when I said that the characters from "Sesame Street" wouldn't be the main focus of the story, because they will be. And the characters from other franchises that'll be included in the story are ones from my favorite cartoons like "Scooby-Doo" and "Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends". You can also expect some Looney Tunes characters to be running around, since they're obviously owned by Warner Bros. as well.
And our little green pal, Kermit the Frog, will be in the story, but his role won't be as big as I originally planned for it to be.
I'll explain more once I finish "The Great X-Muppet Caper."