ReneeLouvier said:
That really struck me as a "WOW" moment. I was squealing when I read that. I could just see it....gotta ask, I guess Scooter has lost his glasses during this transformation?
Yeah, he did. I would've written the part where they fall off his nose and he stomps on them while heading to the stage, but I figured that it would've been best just to have him drop them and leave them behind, while he destroys San Francisco.
ReneeLouvier said:
A quirk: Why did you chose a glass abdomen? It's really interesting to me. I guess because his stomach is still so delicate with all the opening and closing and stuff like that.
Actually, that's one reason I gave him the glass abdomen. I pictured the nanomeds attached to Scooter's liver to be little round, metallic looking things with a glass center that glowed green once activated. When Scooter mutated into "The Abomination", those nanomeds mutated with him, thus creating the "Glass Stomach."
ReneeLouvier said:
The red claws.....goodness. He looks SUPER intimateding! Like, he could just RIP though anything he sets his hands on.
That's kind of a nod to Lady Deathstrike, an "X-Men" character, who--both in the comics and Bryan Singer's movie adaptation--had two-foot claws protruding from her fingers.
ReneeLouvier said:
Now I've seen ossocianlly on the TV show Hulk, that he sometimes became gentle? Or is that some other thing I've seen?? I'm not sure about that. Don't know why, but this scene just popped into my head:
Sadie saw Scooter transforming into his own version of the Hulk, and became very worried for her son's health. After the fight that will be ensuing, (he's still transformed of course) she comes over to his side, and just generally worries over him. He is about to harm his mother, perhaps he even does, but he realizes who she is, and somehow becomes gentle towards her.
That's just a small scene I was playing in my head, when I read the rampaging part of the story.
Nice. I love it.
As for the Hulk sometimes becoming gentle, you're right. In the first episode of the series, after realizing what David could do as the Hulk and fearing that he would hurt or kill someone as him, his girlfriend alerted him that because David Banner (whose name I still cannot stand--I like
Bruce) can't kill someone, the Hulk won't kill. That's why you won't see the Hulk in the movie, the TV series, or this fanfic kill anyone.
Now, in some comics (including the "Ultimate Avengers" series), the Hulk suddenly turns into this "Savage Hulk" (as the writers described him) and he is careless in his destruction, often killing a few people in the process. Earlier in the story, I mentioned something about the Hulk morphing into his savage self and causing ultimate destruction over San Francisco. I just want to make it clear that even though the Hulk was "Sleep-Rampaging", he
did not kill anyone, like he possibly did in his dream.
ReneeLouvier said:
Still, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! IT'S gotten SO exciting now!!!
We're coming close to the conclusion. So get ready for one heck of a ride!