Once Upon My Heart.

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There's a lot heartwarming and equally teary moments in that last segment. But I loved it all, even the brief muddling. You paint a very deep picture of Megan's home at nighttime... The stars and the light in her window both signals of how the light plays a comforting beacon role in that darkness. It's fascinating to see this semi-courtship Robin and Megan have going, I find it very enjoyable. My only concern is that... well... will more get posted? Soon? Please?
 

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Good job so far greenstuff. I anxiously await more.
 

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*pokes head in* anyone want some more story? Oh good, because after tomorrow, I'm on spring break, which leaves me absolutely no excuse not to post that insanely large chapter I've been promising. I just thought I'd let you know. But for now, I get to go lecture on Hamlet. Yaaaaaay!
 

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Good... We'll be waiting for that insanely long chapter you've been chatting up as soon as you can post it.
Just hope that Hamlet's not the one they lampooned on MST3K from 60's Germanmade-for-TV movie studios.
 

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Well, I think I've made you guys wait long enough, huh? Though I can make no promises, I'll probably be able to post that chapter today..I'll have to see when I can get access to the computer later on..so yeah, look for some chapter today, if not, later on.

Zaijian!
 

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Green stuff...I love this story...(Eduardo have you been sending me this? I cant' remember) Anyways, check out From the Mailbox soon to see your review.
 

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No... And I apologize for that Sis, though this was on the list of the stories I was going to send you.
Wanted to ask Nicee if she could send me a fixed-up copy of what she's got of this so far. Um, would that b too much to ask Nicee? LMK, cause I can always go back through the posts and knit the story together that way too.

Hope to hear from you soon though.
Sis, just review the ones you've gotten so far... More will be sent as I get it in due time.
 

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That's my plan. After all I got what five more or so to review as is? I've got plenty to keep me busy...not to mention that ditty of my own and the trilogy to work on.
 

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Just sent 'em. Oh sorry Nicee, go ahead and post more story when you can, we don't mind.

Muffin Sis?
 

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Don't mind if I do. *takes a bite* Yumm, blueberry.
 
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