My first movie

[Krazedmuppet]

That was a very awesome little film demonstration! I enjoyed it very much!

Thanks

 

[Barry Lee]

Stop motion is really tedious, or any animation in that fact. I created a short 40 second cartoon, that took me three days to shoot with each panel and the 15-20 shots. But getting every detail is key to creating a great animation peice. Period. It gives it even more life.

 

[Redsonga]

Your clay logo part is also a little too dark to me...it could be that I am on a mac, but the colors could be brighter and clearer

 

[muppetfan89]

I've just finsihed making my second film, The Green Wash. In this metaphor of the current situation in the USA of prices from gas to food being raised, a young man takes a shower. However, what starts out as a shower of water, truns into green...The Green Wash! Tell me what you think! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Uz8y5JZqeA

 

[Krazedmuppet]

NICE EDITING! good job, much better! can`t wait to see more!

 

[muppetfan89]

NICE EDITING! good job, much better! can`t wait to see more!

Thanks! I'll have more on the way!

 

[muppetfan89]

I just made my third film, Danger: Future. It's about a young man who has to fight through technology taking over people's lives. Enjoy! Here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yTVZ9UIM4s

I know you're probably thinkning how I make my films fast. Well, here's the deal. I filmed The Real Comics back in March and it wouldn't upload for some reason, until recently. Then, after I was finally able to upload it, I made The Green Wash. Then, I had another script I wrote a while ago, so that's when I made this.

 

[Krazedmuppet]

Good fliming and good editing!

I watched this film with out reading your discription on the side or the comments below, and I thought the movie was about (reading just the title) that you had a monotanous day, and I thought you were going to end it that you are doomed to this life forever if you dont act now! (lol, cuz well- thats my life anyway...) but after I read your side thing and didn't get it, watched it again, then realized why I didn't get that message or that other person didnt either- this is normal life, and anything elce is the not the norm. So I really didnt see you struggling to go against it taking over your life, I just saw that- well, that is normal life of someone in this day in age. So when I really get into it, your point comes across- that it has taken over so much that I dont even realize that your trying to say it has taken over our lives. But- as far as the movie goes, I think you need to have that break in the film, the character to come to a realization that thats whats happining- otherwise it just seems like everyday life on film.

 

[Krazedmuppet]

dont mean to steal your thunder, but here is a random movie of mine- not the greatest- but I wanted you to see!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KMsDt9Z46Tk

Its called "Bang"

we didnt have the editing program to make this look better

 

[muppetfan89]

Good fliming and good editing!

I watched this film with out reading your discription on the side or the comments below, and I thought the movie was about (reading just the title) that you had a monotanous day, and I thought you were going to end it that you are doomed to this life forever if you dont act now! (lol, cuz well- thats my life anyway...) but after I read your side thing and didn't get it, watched it again, then realized why I didn't get that message or that other person didnt either- this is normal life, and anything elce is the not the norm. So I really didnt see you struggling to go against it taking over your life, I just saw that- well, that is normal life of someone in this day in age. So when I really get into it, your point comes across- that it has taken over so much that I dont even realize that your trying to say it has taken over our lives. But- as far as the movie goes, I think you need to have that break in the film, the character to come to a realization that thats whats happining- otherwise it just seems like everyday life on film.

What meant to do was to show how the life of a present person vs. the life of a person who relies on technology. The reason I said that a young man fights through technology is becuase when he's walking outside, he's the only one there, becuase everyone is inside with their technology, just like the guy sitting on the couch. Also, when he plays basketball and misses and sighs and walks away, it shows that he feels alone and tries to make peace with it, throughout the rest of the film. That's what I meant.

Other then that, how was it?

dont mean to steal your thunder, but here is a random movie of mine- not the greatest- but I wanted you to see!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KMsDt9Z46Tk

Its called "Bang"

we didnt have the editing program to make this look better

I thought your film was quite good, I like the jump cut that was used from the shooting of the "gun" to the guy falling to the ground. Good work!

btw, you seem to have a good knowledge of filmmaking, do you make films too, besides this one?