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Sorry to bump again, but after watching tonight's episode... Lumiere's backstory soooo fits with what you did to Candlewick, though Rumple turned the former goblin soldier into his namesake whereas the Wicked Witch was responsible for Lumiere. Also, did Zilema take Rumple's brains? That means she only needs a symbol of someone's heart.

Oh, and I'll miss out on next week's episode since I'll be attending a certain event in Nawlans that night. :wink:
 

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LOL, I was thinking of Lumiere when I first wrote it, and then when that episode came out, I was like, "Well, I was close ..." Anyway, let's continue the story. The whole Zelena thing is REALLY inspiring....


There was a strange power outage in the suburban neighborhood. Tamara slinked through the shadows, stopping every once in a while to glance around and check to see if anyone was coming.

So far, so good. She leaned against the south wall of Sarah’s house, smiling as the shrill shrieking of an infant pierced the air, followed by the angry muffled voice of Sarah, trying desperately to shush it.

She managed to reach the back door and, picking the lock, slowly and quietly entered the house. She stopped cold in the kitchen. She could feel a presence.

“Who’s there?” she whispered.

“Me,” grumbled a garbled male voice, as a lighter flicked on in the hands of someone, someone really short.

“What the **** are you?” Tamara gasped, stumbling into the kitchen table.

“Is someone there?” Sarah asked from the second story.

The small, squat male with a severely wrinkled face, a large nose, and a fashion sense belonging to a cheap Renaissance Fair, scoffed. “You could be a little nicer!”

Tamara heard footsteps and flinched as the kitchen lights came on.

Sarah glanced around. “Dad? Are you guys home?”

Tamara stood there, motionless, while the dwarf paced back and forth, mocking Sarah’s gestures.

Tamara waved her arms, to no avail. She glanced at the dwarf. “What’s happening?”

“A little thing we like to call ‘hiding’. Didn’t think that light’d be out forever, didja?”

“She seriously can’t see us?” Tamara asked again, walking circles around Sarah, who then shrugged and ran back upstairs to deal with the baby. After she had gone, Tamara glared at the dwarf. “Don’t think I’m going to be grateful.”

“’Course not,” he replied with a shrug, turning his back on her. “No one ever is.”

“I’m going to take that child.”

“What for?” the dwarf asked, cocking his head in confusion.

“Why do you care?”

“Seems to me there’s easier ways of gettin’ kids, is all.”

Tamara sneered. “Do you think you’ll ever be in love? How could anyone love a little scab like you?”

The dwarf sighed and lowered his large head. “Doesn’t matter,” he mumbled softly. “Just ain’t no one takin’ this babe.”

“Well, I am,” Tamara remarked proudly.

The dwarf chuckled. “So sure of it, are ya?”

She pulled out a gun. “Yep.”

He smiled. “I hears it yer takin’ orders from some little snit who wants boys.”

Tamara frowned. “You’re wrong. I’m destroying magic. It doesn’t belong in this world.”

“And yet, here we are,” he replied, pacing around her nonchalantly, “hidin’ in plain sight an’ keepin’ ya aways from pryin’ eyes.”

“I don’t need magic!” Tamara screamed.

“Tamara?” Sarah asked, glancing at her classmate’s aimed gun, a gun aimed at … the fridge.

“Sarah! I heard a burglar!” she yelped, putting the gun away.

“What are you doing in my house?”

“Movie night …”

“There was a blackout.”

Tamara looked around, shrugged, and smiled. “Looks fixed to me.”

As Sarah cradled her young half-brother Toby, Tamara popped in the Betamax and flopped on to the couch after grabbing a bag of chips from the coffee table.

“Would … you … like … to … play … a … game?” asked an electronic voice.

After the movie, Tamara hugged Sarah and kissed young Toby on the head, making him cry. “Sorry,” Tamara said, sheepishly.

Sarah sighed. “It’s alright. He always cries.”

“Girl, I got an idea – let me take Toby for a few hours. You could use a break!”

Sarah stared wistfully at the sniveling infant. Suddenly smiling, she handed Tamara her half-brother. “Don’t shoot him, no matter how much you want to.”

Tamara laughed and winked. “Got it.” She turned away and exited the front door to the house, gasping to find herself in a lush garden in the bright daylight.

A tall man was gardening in leather boots that nearly reached his hips. He stood and turned towards her, smiling warmly, his short honey-brown hair gently curling across his scalp. He tossed a small trowel aside.

“Where am I?” Tamara asked.

“Got yerself a nice kid, there,” the gardener noted in a warm, almost hypnotic voice, his eyes sparkling in the daylight.

She put a gun to the baby’s head. “I’m not going to say this --.” She gasped as the gun vanished from her hand and ended up in his.

He coldly pulled the trigger. She flinched, instinctively crouching over the baby. She felt flowers spraying over her. Looking up, she saw the smiling gardner. “I – I don’t understand.”

He nodded and wisped the gun away in a puff of white smoke.

“What did you do with it?” she asked.

“It’s best left forgotten. Now, I find myself as confused as you. Here you are, taking some little boy away from his family, and have no qualms about threatening him to save your own skin before I’ve even made a single move. And yet, when the tables are turned, you risk your own life to protect such a little thing.”

He walked up to her and caressed the boy’s face, making him giggle and reach out to wrap his hand around the gardener’s finger. The gardener winked and glared at Tamara with a wicked grin. “Would you like to play a game?”
 

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Have to confess I haven't watched Once Upon since I left for NOLA in the beginning of the month, so I'm unaware of whatever showdowns have gone down since then. As for the installment... *Cheers at seeing Hoggle guarding Sarah and Toby. Little snit who wants boys, yeah, that pretty much covers it. And now Tamara finds herself in her own labyrinth. The games that will played, *insert Uncle Deadly "maniacal" smilie.

BTW: This is somewhat off-topic, but do you have thoughts on Pin possibly being the Chief Doozer of Doozer Creek from the new series, what with two little Doozers of her own, one named Spike?
 

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The WWW is still insanely jealous (hence her greenness) of Regina. She had turned the Wizard into a monkey, the one Emma was dating. Zelina has cursed Hook so that if he kisses Emma, our heroine will lose her magic, as apparently she is the only threat.

The original story was gonna have Tamara run off without Toby, but it was like Jareth was whispering my ear and I was like, LOL, yeah, that's hilarious. So now it's Tamara instead of Sarah. It will satisfy my criticism of these kinds of tales, where the heroine is always some spoiled white chick. LOL.

When you can catch up on Once, you'll realize why Jareth is posing as a gardener. I haven't seen it myself, as ABC is being a jerk and now forces a week's delay in watching for free, but I cheated and looked it up on its wiki. A gardener plays an important part of Zelena's past.

Off-topic, yes, I would like to see Pin be the new Architect or whatever. If Spike is her kid, a little part of me will smile, given the Hensonville stuff, LOL.
 

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I'll try to catch tomorrow's episode, but if Hub airs NBC at that time, my allegiances are bound to Jack the Pumpkin King.

Was able to catch Wonderland's finale though. Thought they'd have a full twenty-six episodes like Once Upon, but whatevs. It was way cool how they tied Wonderland's ending to the ending of Disney's Aladdin, having Nix turn Jafar into his slave genie form. Knew when Anastasia was saved at the end thanks to another dose of restorative waters she'd be turned from Red Queen into White Queen.

We can't tell if Pin is the new Chief for sure... All that's been said is that the leader of Doozer Creek is a redheaded female Doozer confident of her abilities to lead the new community. So there's a bit of fannish speculation on our parts that hasn't exactly been proven untrue as of yet.

Look forward to more story when you're able to post, glad always to read your wonderful stuff. :jim:
 

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Once Wonderland had unfortunately been cancelled, that's why it's shorter.
 

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Cancelled, that figures. At least it was enjoyable while it lasted and helped further pad the Once Upon universe.

The curse on Hook, that makes me think the WWW has all three Oz-based ingredients: a symbol of courage, brains, and heart. *Wonders if she's making some mystical form of haggas. :hungry:
 

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After watching tonight's episode, the most important thing I want to know is...

The door that led to Glinda's home in the Dark Forest: was it carved into the trunk of a tree? And what shape did the door have?
*Skeletal grin.
 

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The door was kinda reddish. Can't really remember, actually. The Disney wiki notes that the whole Glinda thing was supposed to homage the White Witch and Narnia. With the wraith, Pan's shadow, and this random door, it seems like we are getting closer and closer to Kingdom Hearts territory, which would be EPIC.

And now, the continuation of our tale:


The walls of the hospital were cold white. Everything felt so sterile, with no life reverberating whatsoever. The elderly woman sighed.

A stocky orderly came up to her and shook her hand. “She won’t make much sense. She keeps going on about seeing shadows and hearing singing in the walls.”

The woman, dressed in a white blouse accented with a large diamond brooch, smiled. “That kind of thing doesn’t scare me, young man.” She shrugged. “Sometimes someone has to be the storm cellar when someone else is going through a storm.”

As the woman sat down on a small chair next to the somewhat older dark-skinned lady as the latter fidgeted in bed, the latter finally sprang up and started yelling. “Get back from here, witch!”

The woman stood. “Look into my eyes,” she said calmly.

For a few seconds, the elderly patient tried to stumble across the bed but paused just as she reached the opposite end. She turned, no longer visibly panting. “You look like a decrepit Judy Garland.”

The woman laughed and motioned the patient to rest in the bed. “Nice to see you too, Tiana.”

The year was 1930. Little Dorothy, a dark-haired girl with little pigtails, held a bright pink balloon as the parade went by. Dust had been swirling all over Kansas and farms were dying off left and right, but Dorothy couldn’t understand being “poor”, for everyone else was as well.

This parade was the grandest thing Dorothy had ever seen: there were dancers, loud music, snacks of all kinds, and bright colors all around. One person even had painted his team of horses all kinds of different colors.

“Dorothy!” barked her mother, whose dark hair curled loosely down her red tight dress, her red hat tilting sharply forward. The woman grabbed the girl’s hand and jerked her out of the enlivened crowd. “What did I say about running around without your father and I?” she asked sternly. “These heathens will carry you off and … and … do just awful things to you!”

Dorothy struggled, her eyes misting. “Momma … please! There was music!”

The woman scoffed. “There’s ALWAYS music playing, day and night, with women and men cavorting like bunnies. It’s disgusting and something PROPER ladies don’t do!”

The two walked down Canal Street to get back to Dorothy’s father, who had taken them to New Orleans for seasonal work. They passed some women riding on bicycles, wearing bloomers. Dorothy gasped in awe.

Dorothy’s mother tightened her grip. “PROPER ladies dress modestly, just as the Good Lord teaches us.”

They soon heard sounds of a scuffle. A group of white men in white robes were hitting a dark-skinned woman with sticks. Dorothy tore away from her mother before the latter could respond, and started throwing rocks at the attackers. “Get away from her!” Dorothy screamed.

Her mother grabbed her and swept her into an alley, trying to shush her by clamping her hand over the girl’s mouth. She hissed, “We don’t get involved in these things, Dorothy. We must remain civilized, even when harlots are being chased through the streets.”

Dorothy bit her mother’s hand and tore herself away. “They’re attacking her! You can just sit there if you want, but someone needs our help!” She dashed away as her mother tried to grab her.

Back in the present, Tiana sat in her wheelchair, staring out the window. “How’s Kansas?”

Dorothy sighed and placed her hand gently on her friend’s. “I haven’t been since I don’t know how long, Tiana. What brings you to New York?”

Tiana shrugged. “Just had to walk after what happened to Naveen.”

“What about his parents? Didn’t they help you at all?”

Tiana sniffled, using the collar of her hospital gown to wipe away a tear. “They kicked out their own son, Dot” Tiana replied, finally working to create a smile. “He couldn’t wipe his own rear-end and they let him go. What makes you think they’d take care of me?”

As the young Dorothy kept pelting the angry mob with rocks, one of them turned around and called her a bunch of words she never heard before, before letting fly with a few rocks of his own.

Dorothy was knocked to the ground, reeling in pain, sobbing.

Shrieks and whistles pierced the air.

The mob stopped as a small group of policemen surrounded them. “Put down your weapons NOW!” they ordered.

“Just teachin’ her a lesson, now get out of our way,” they said. “You know her kind’s gotta pay!”

A shot rang out, forcing everyone to flinch. Out of an alley, a thin blonde-haired woman came strolling calmly out of the darkness, glaring darkly at the crowd as they stood in awe of the woman garbed in a slinky red sparkling dress. “Big Daddy says this here lovely’s called a Colt, an’ Ah reckon it prob’ly kicks ya in the head ‘bout as good.” She tightened her grip on the trigger and nodded to the police. “Turns out law enforcement may be friends o’ yours, but they get paid thanks to the LaBouff family, an’ if they wanna CONTINUE gettin’ their hands on the next meal, they’ll pry your ugly little hands off mah best friend!”

Dorothy sat on the cobblestone road, sobbing quietly, cradling her leg, which was bleeding somewhat now. It was like a fairy had just appeared and scattered a bunch of monsters. She even sparkled in the daylight.

After the crowd dispersed, including the onlookers, Tiana nursed her bruises with some ointment her friend Charlotte had given her. “This has to stop,” Tiana told her, sobbing.

Charlotte hugged her. “It’ll be alright, hon.”

Tiana shoved her away. “No, it WON’T! I’m a PRINCESS! I have a good business and a strong family! When’s it evah gonna be good enough?”

“There is something I need to discuss,” Dorothy told her elderly friend.

“Well, I ain’t a-goin’ anywhere anytime soon, ‘specially since mah little Tamara ran off an’ left me too.”

Dorothy gasped. “You had children after all?”

Tiana shook her head. “It was me jus’ tryin’ to be nice to some kid, jus’ like Lottie’d been nice to me. Girl didn’t have nothin’. I didn’t have much of nothin’, but I figured we could work it out together.”

Charlotte had been silenced by her friend’s anger, until she spied out of the corner of her eye a little girl cringing in the street. She gasped and leapt over to her, checking out her wounds. “Did those little rat snakes take a bite outta you?”

Dorothy cried, but stared at Tiana. “Are you alright, Ma’am?”

Tiana stopped sulking and fuming long enough to glance over at the child. “Come to gawk, girl?”

Dorothy broke away from a protesting Charlotte to stand closer to Tiana, bowing. “No, ma’am, Miss Princess, ma’am. Ah’m just Dorothy Gale, from Kansas. I saw them an’ Ah tried to throw some rocks, but then they got me instead.”

Charlotte kissed her forehead. “Well, ain’t you just the little spitfire?” She smiled at Tiana. “Ain’t this little bit o’ sunshine jus’ brave as a mountain lion near a rabbit?”

Tiana wobbled and stood up, frowning. “Now, Ah’m saved by a little farmgirl,” she grumbled before limping away.

Charlotte hugged Dorothy close. “Don’t pay her no mind, Dottie, hon. She jus’ don’t like to feel like a possum under the tires of an automobile.”

Tiana sighed. “Ah’m gettin’ kinda sleepy, Dot.”

Dorothy nodded and started to help her friend towards the hospital bed. “You get some rest.”

“What is it you needed?”

Dorothy kissed Tiana on the forehead and silently walked out the door.
 

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Sorry to read and reply soooo late, was rereading Sadie's Stories and adding them to my faves list at my fanfiction.net profile.

Yes, Canal Street! That's basically the main street we used when walking through the French Quarters, that and, crud, my memory's slipping. Oh, Calliope Street. I wonder if they have streets named after all nine of the Greek muses.

Dorothy and Tiana being friends. Heh, ironic given that Dorothy showed up basically playing her role from the story when she wound up in Oz making Zelena feel displaced for the second time in her life.

Also, it's kind of dunno what word to use, but I recognize Regina and Zelena wanting the same thing, to finally feel like they belonged somewhere that they were loved by someone.

As for the door into Glinda's hideout... C'mon, door? In a tree trunk? That leads to another world? That's practically signaling the holiday decoration trees in the Tree Circle that lead to their respective realms, and one I happen to be such an uberfan of behind the one shaped like a jack o' lantern.
*Skeletal grin.

BTW: Watched the Season 3 finale... Rumple killed Zelena causing a timewarp portal that sucked Emma and Hook into the past. The funny thing is that when Hook asked how they'd get back, Emma said "who do I look like, Marty McFly?" And of course, that led to her actually playing Marty's role in having to help her parents get together changing a few little things... Like bringing Maid Marian back with them to the future/present, shattering Regina's second chance at love with Robin Hood. Like mother like daughter.

Tried doing a Google search for the second-half episode of the finale with a Disney Wiki tag because if I go straight to the Disney Wiki it starts playing some fairy-type music that crashes my computer. And there's no real info about the last couple of minutes where it was hinted what next season's plotpoint would be... Though I read that Will Scarlet/Knave of Hearts would be part of the cast, he wasn't listed now. *Shrugs.

Post when you can, I enjoy your fabled fragments. :smile:
 
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