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You know I look forwar to it eagerly as always.
One thing in this last chapter though... When the Electric Mayhem's practicing... "The music always had soothed this collection of savage "brests"?"
Um, perhaps you meant "savage "beasts""?
Huge chunk yes... But you know it was so soothing to find another chapter for this epic of yours. So Brenda knows who the culprit is, and she's bothered by the puzzle... Janice chatting it up with the girls, Clifford uneasy about his arrangement with the guitarist, Bunsen giddy over his dancing date... It's all so weeeeeee!
And I have to give you points for the line where the girls say "wrong base player", acknowledging Clifford's days playing with the Solid Foam.
Oh Ru, please post more when you can!
One thing in this last chapter though... When the Electric Mayhem's practicing... "The music always had soothed this collection of savage "brests"?"
Um, perhaps you meant "savage "beasts""?
Huge chunk yes... But you know it was so soothing to find another chapter for this epic of yours. So Brenda knows who the culprit is, and she's bothered by the puzzle... Janice chatting it up with the girls, Clifford uneasy about his arrangement with the guitarist, Bunsen giddy over his dancing date... It's all so weeeeeee!
And I have to give you points for the line where the girls say "wrong base player", acknowledging Clifford's days playing with the Solid Foam.
Oh Ru, please post more when you can!