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Oh, I didn't mean that Boober neglected to say please and thank you. Rather, I think I kind of slighted Matt in the writing. I hardly showed his viewpoint at all, and mentions of him were mainly of the "He's trying, though it's bloody unlikely he'll do much good" kind. At that point every little bit counted, and he was willing to endure a lot of time in the cold without complaining to fetch whatever he could. I kinda feel that, as a narrator, I let him down. However, he's probably oblivious enough not to notice, and can provide his own narration, so no harm done, I suppose.
It sounds like you have about as much vision as my college roommate. She could see sharp contrasts - the border between the sidewalk and street, for example--and she could read print if it was blown up so huge that two letters filled the monitor screen.
Heh, one time a group of my friends went to an event at the student center. I put on a wig and used some makeup to make myself look completely different and sat near them. After a while my friends kept glancing back, and finally one asked "Do I know you?" My roommate said, "What? That's Kim!" She wasn't fooled by my looks; she knew me by voice.
It sounds like you have about as much vision as my college roommate. She could see sharp contrasts - the border between the sidewalk and street, for example--and she could read print if it was blown up so huge that two letters filled the monitor screen.
Heh, one time a group of my friends went to an event at the student center. I put on a wig and used some makeup to make myself look completely different and sat near them. After a while my friends kept glancing back, and finally one asked "Do I know you?" My roommate said, "What? That's Kim!" She wasn't fooled by my looks; she knew me by voice.