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This was a definite treat to read through, all of it, the long and long of it.
But there are a coupla things I question.
"country friend steak and eggs"
Does that mean the beef and yolks will be invited to coffee at the diva's home next Sunday?
"want you want"
Me thinks you mean "w-h-at."
Brian: What.
Meg: W-h-at.
Brian: What.
Meg: W-h-at.
Brian: What.
Meg: Stop being w-h-eird Brian.
Brian: Oh come on, that doesn't even have an "h" in it!
Babs: I can't help myself.
Dennis Miller: You cwazy wabbit.
And the one thing I rully have to point out...
"The next morning, the sun began its slow decent into the sky, lighting the land and everything on it."
1 Do you mean "descent"?
2 If the above is true, then mayhaps you be stuck in Looking Glass Land listening to the Tweedles' recitation of The Walrus and The Carpenter.
The sun's descent (going down) and it being morning at the same time, can that be right?
Yes, and the moon was out as well, for you see it was the middle of the night.
Other than that, me <333 the chapter as a whole and hope for more when you're able to post it.
*Leaves some cheesecake squares to cheer up Gina on this off-on-again rainy day.
But there are a coupla things I question.
"country friend steak and eggs"
Does that mean the beef and yolks will be invited to coffee at the diva's home next Sunday?
"want you want"
Me thinks you mean "w-h-at."
Brian: What.
Meg: W-h-at.
Brian: What.
Meg: W-h-at.
Brian: What.
Meg: Stop being w-h-eird Brian.
Brian: Oh come on, that doesn't even have an "h" in it!
Babs: I can't help myself.
Dennis Miller: You cwazy wabbit.
And the one thing I rully have to point out...
"The next morning, the sun began its slow decent into the sky, lighting the land and everything on it."
1 Do you mean "descent"?
2 If the above is true, then mayhaps you be stuck in Looking Glass Land listening to the Tweedles' recitation of The Walrus and The Carpenter.
The sun's descent (going down) and it being morning at the same time, can that be right?
Yes, and the moon was out as well, for you see it was the middle of the night.
Other than that, me <333 the chapter as a whole and hope for more when you're able to post it.
*Leaves some cheesecake squares to cheer up Gina on this off-on-again rainy day.