FanFic: The Predicament

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Chapter Ten

-~- Sorry for the long time in posting a new chapter! I promise I will try to keep up on a somewhat-regular basis guys! Enjoy!! -~-

John had usually taken to walking around the caverns to clear his head. He was one of the most revered and feared fraggles in Fraggle Rock. But that came with a price. No one could know that he was a wembler, yet it helped him. Ambling along the pathways, he found himself going farther then he had ever gone before. Well, as he remembered at least. He saw a cavern up ahead that seemed to sparkle and glitter with an otherworldly presense. He wembled to himself for nearly ten minutes, until he finally decided he would see what it was.

"Is anyone in these caverns?" He called out, becoming more afraid as his own voice echoed back upon him. "Hello??"

"Helllooooo....." Was the etheral sounding echo. The only other voice present he figured. So he trundled on ahead.

When he came to the middle of the caverns he saw what the glitter was coming from. The Night and Day Lilies. The tokens of love of Fraggledom. More love then a rollie ever was, but still a simple token of everlasting love to one another. He knelt down in front of a patch of the lilies and he plucked one of the day lilies carefully. A soft spray of pollen gushed forth into his face. He remembered the scent well. A soft, heady scent; evoking strong memories in the poor, bedraggled convincer.

***

"Oh John....I can't believe it. You...you picked this....for me?" A young fraggle replied happily, to her deeply-blushing friend.

"Yes, Glenda. I...I got it for you." He nodded, as if affirming what he said even more. Glenda clutched the beautiful day lily to her chest, and sighed; the strong scent wafting up to her nose.

Smiling, she leaned in towards John and gave him a deep kiss. He almost fainted, but she caught him tightly in her strong grip. "I still can't believe such a feeble fraggle like yourself would want anything to do with me." She sighed softly, still smiling. "Most of the boys are scared of me. They don't like being challenged."

"I love you just the way you are Glenda. I mean, you're the strongest of the firefighters! You've helped us many times you know that..." He gently wrapped his arms around her, as she was nearly twice his strength. "You're just perfect for me, Glenda. Don't ever change, you hear me? Please...don't ever change."

She smirked, and ran her strong hand through his black, bushy hair. "No matter what you say, Mr. Convincer?"

He nodded exurbantly. "No matter what I or anyone else says, Glenda. Never change."

"Alright then, John. I promise, I'll never change." With that, she hugged him tightly; not enough to hurt him, but enough so he could definately feel it.


Glenda was a strange fraggle...years of working as a Volunteer Firefighter and Cavern Excaveator had made her strong, and slightly muscular. She was not like the other female fraggles; who loved to play and dance all day long. Now, don't get me wrong; she loved that as much as the next Fraggle...but instead of only working 30 minutes a week...she worked 30 minutes every day. Alternating days of working with the firefighters, and other days of working in the caverns. She didn't map them...she opened them up. With her hammer and pick-axe. It was hard work; but she enjoyed it. Many of the females wouldn't have anything to do with her, and the males normally were fearful of her. She was almost as tall as Large Marvin was wide; and she could protect her friends...what few she had....if the chance ever arose.

It was said that once she tripped up Pa Gorg so Patinka; little Mokey's mother, could get the radishes they so sorely needed. Many didn't believe it, but Patinka always was happy that Glenda helped her get radishes. She was the sort-of bodyguard for the radish picker, and they never had any trouble from the Gorgs; so long as Glenda was around.

But how a short, feeble-appearing, bucktoothed fraggle would want to marry her was strange in anyone's mind. She could crush him like a poison cackler, they all said. But she was gentle and careful around John. She never wanted to hurt her love, and he never tried to convince her or anyone else of anything they never wanted to do. If she objected, he let her. He never abused his power around her or towards her; or even towards any other fraggle in Fraggle Rock.

That was their vows. And they always had kept them...up until her unfortunate death.

***

His memories ended on quite a sad note, and he was vaulted back towards reality. Looking down he noticed, he had crushed the beautiful day lily in his hands. He never wore his ring after it had happened. He always kept it in the breast pocket of his jacket, close to his heart.

It always stayed near him, but he could never wear it again. He was too painful, those memories; good and bad were permantly attached to that acursed yet beloved ring. A smooth, simple band of silver. He remembered that her's had a beautiful small chunk of a rainbow rock inset into it. He stayed where he was, crying until he passed out from exhaustion.
 

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Ohhhhhh.....wow, that was an amazing look into the character of Convincing John and perhaps some insight into why he is the way he is. Simply amazing and well worth the wait. Very tragic what must have happened to him though, losing his wife and all. Wow. Just wow. Thanks for updating, can't wait to read more.
 

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It'll get more interesting tomorrow, for the next chapter! But it'll have to wait till tomorrow, as I go off to work in about 40 minutes. (That's not nearly enough time for today. I don't want to rush of course.)
 

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First of all... Yaey! Update!

Posted by Renee: John had usually taken to walking around the caverns to clear his head. He was one of the most revered and feared fraggles in Fraggle Rock.
Ooh... Good start, it makes you fear and feel for him at the same time.

Posted by Louvier: But that came with a price. No one could know that he was a wembler, yet it helped him.
A wembler? Yes, it helps sometimes I guess.

Posted by Ms. Vines: Ambling along the pathways, he found himself going farther then he had ever gone before. Well, as he remembered at least. He saw a cavern up ahead that seemed to sparkle and glitter with an otherworldly presense.
"presense" should be "presence".
Hmmm... Wonder what this cavern may be... You don't suppose...

Posted by Sara: He wembled to himself for nearly ten minutes, until he finally decided he would see what it was.
Ooh, let's go exploring!

Posted by Library's Middle Flame:
"Is anyone in these caverns?" He called out, becoming more afraid as his own voice echoed back upon him. "Hello??"

"Helllooooo....." Was the etheral sounding echo. The only other voice present he figured. So he trundled on ahead.
"etheral" should be "etherial" instead.
Heh, funny, being afraid of one's own echo.

Posted by Scooter's Girl: When he came to the middle of the caverns he saw what the glitter was coming from. The Night and Day Lilies. The tokens of love of Fraggledom. More love then a rollie ever was, but still a simple token of everlasting love to one another. He knelt down in front of a patch of the lilies and he plucked one of the day lilies carefully. A soft spray of pollen gushed forth into his face. He remembered the scent well. A soft, heady scent; evoking strong memories in the poor, bedraggled convincer.
"then" should be "than" instead.
Oh wow! The Cavern of the Sparkling Lilies!
Awesome reference to Beth's works of Fragglish fictiondom... And it was a day lily he picked... Good, shows that the day lilies have different properties from the night lilies which were so crucial to Red in Part Of Me.

Posted by Hunt's other niece: "Oh John....I can't believe it. You...you picked this....for me?" A young fraggle replied happily, to her deeply-blushing friend.

"Yes, Glenda. I...I got it for you." He nodded, as if affirming what he said even more. Glenda clutched the beautiful day lily to her chest, and sighed; the strong scent wafting up to her nose.
Wow, the power of flashback can be fun and wonderful sometimes...

Posted by RHL: Smiling, she leaned in towards John and gave him a deep kiss. He almost fainted, but she caught him tightly in her strong grip.
*Melty moment... Nice job li'l cuz.

Posted by Gofer's Roomie: "I still can't believe such a feeble fraggle like yourself would want anything to do with me." She sighed softly, still smiling. "Most of the boys are scared of me. They don't like being challenged."

"I love you just the way you are Glenda. I mean, you're the strongest of the firefighters! You've helped us many times you know that..." He gently wrapped his arms around her, as she was nearly twice his strength. "You're just perfect for me, Glenda. Don't ever change, you hear me? Please...don't ever change."
And the magic continues... Who'd've thought of Convincing John as the romantic.

Posted by Sadie's Stories' scribe: She smirked, and ran her strong hand through his black, bushy hair. "No matter what you say, Mr. Convincer?"

He nodded exurbantly. "No matter what I or anyone else says, Glenda. Never change."

"Alright then, John. I promise, I'll never change." With that, she hugged him tightly; not enough to hurt him, but enough so he could definately feel it.
"exurbantly" should be "exuberantly" instead.
Aw, this I loved... To see both playfully teasing each other, given his convincing nature... And he's subtly convincing her not to change, even if he's not outright going into one of his elaborate convincing songs.

Posted by Beth's "Sissy": Glenda was a strange fraggle...years of working as a Volunteer Firefighter and Cavern Excaveator had made her strong, and slightly muscular. She was not like the other female fraggles; who loved to play and dance all day long. Now, don't get me wrong; she loved that as much as the next Fraggle...but instead of only working 30 minutes a week...she worked 30 minutes every day. Alternating days of working with the firefighters, and other days of working in the caverns. She didn't map them...she opened them up. With her hammer and pick-axe. It was hard work; but she enjoyed it. Many of the females wouldn't have anything to do with her, and the males normally were fearful of her. She was almost as tall as Large Marvin was wide; and she could protect her friends...what few she had....if the chance ever arose.
"Excaveator" should be "excavator"instead.
Simply love the backstory you're giving Glenda, though I'd like to know more about how you envision her looking like in terms of hair and skin color, clothing, all of that.

Posted by Exposition Reporter: It was said that once she tripped up Pa Gorg so Patinka; little Mokey's mother, could get the radishes they so sorely needed. Many didn't believe it, but Patinka always was happy that Glenda helped her get radishes. She was the sort-of bodyguard for the radish picker, and they never had any trouble from the Gorgs; so long as Glenda was around.
Oh! Love this reference to Mokey's childhood... Gobo's the only one whose familial ancestry's been explored in fanfic to date... And of course, I'm a lover of Mokey, which saddens me a little she's getting no love regarding the current Fraggly merch...

Posted by Mapper of Hensonville and Fraggle Rock's past: But how a short, feeble-appearing, bucktoothed fraggle would want to marry her was strange in anyone's mind. She could crush him like a poison cackler, they all said. But she was gentle and careful around John. She never wanted to hurt her love, and he never tried to convince her or anyone else of anything they never wanted to do. If she objected, he let her. He never abused his power around her or towards her; or even towards any other fraggle in Fraggle Rock.
*Sigh... This is very heavy duty stuff Doc...
It sets up a staunch echo to his powers/duties as convincer, contrasting with what's at the heart of the story in the present as he convinced all the other Fraggles to invade the swimming hole usurping Red's place as the weekly watery washer.

Posted by Room #5's main occupant: That was their vows. And they always had kept them...up until her unfortunate death.
Me thinks it should be "Those were their vows" instead.
Her death?!? Oh, you've been taking lessons in how to stab our hearts from Lisa... Haven't you?
***

Posted by the new Witch of the West: His memories ended on quite a sad note, and he was vaulted back towards reality. Looking down he noticed, he had crushed the beautiful day lily in his hands. He never wore his ring after it had happened. He always kept it in the breast pocket of his jacket, close to his heart.

It always stayed near him, but he could never wear it again. He was too painful, those memories; good and bad were permantly attached to that acursed yet beloved ring. A smooth, simple band of silver. He remembered that her's had a beautiful small chunk of a rainbow rock inset into it. He stayed where he was, crying until he passed out from exhaustion.
Me thinks that "He was too painful" should be reworded, maybe something like "He was too full of pain" or "He was filled with pain", something like that.
You sly little heartstabber you...
He crushed the day lily... Sometimes we crush that which we hold in our hands, reminding us of the painful past.
A rainbow rock in Glenda's wedding ring? Reference to that mystical rainbow we always come back to within the realm of Muppetdom?
Oh, this was such a good and boo-tiful and slightly weepy update, giving us a glimpse of Convincing John's powers... How he's come to where he's currently at in his life and the potentially looming danger in his future.
Please Sara... Post more soon!
 

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Chapter Eleven

Gobo ran as quickly as his legs would take him. His heart was full to bursting with love, and he wanted to get that most pure of tokens to express it as soon as he was able. He stumbled over rocks and small dips and rises in the rocks face, getting nearer and nearer to his destination. The Cavern of Sparkling Lilies.

"I've gotta pick her the best Nightlily I can find!" He told himself, as he finally got to the caverns enterance. He thought he saw another Fraggle sleeping, but he thought nothing of it, as he made his way to where a patch of the black as night lilies grew. Kneeling down, he plucked one that he thought was the most gorgeous, and held it close to him.

"It's beautiful..." He whispered, taking in the strong, sweet scent. "She'll love it."

As he made sure he had picked the perfect one, he never noticed the other fraggle walking over towards him.

***

John stood up, and saw the familiar pinkish-red hair, and that silly (in his own opinion) purple striped sweater and brown vest. He let the crushed lily fall to the ground, and he began to walk over to him. John's eyes were bloodshot, and he was fingering that old ring of his as he continued on. Past Gobo, past the patches of lilies, almost out to the opening of the cavern itself.

"Convincing John? What are you doing here?" Gobo demanded, as he stood up tall. Why was John in this almost holy of places? Did he follow him here? Did he want to destroy the only chance of finally making Red happy?

"What is your problem?" The young fraggle voiced his last question directly at the older one. "Why are you here?"

"Remembering. Just let me leave in peace, okay?" Came John's weary response. "I am not intending to bother you, so just let me leave..."

Gobo tucked the nightlily into his hair, and he stormed over close to John. Whipping around in front of him, his acid words lost to that expression on the old fraggles' face. He saw years of worry, etching across the normally zealous elder's face. He noticed the gray hair coming out at the roots on his head. He hadn't colored it in awhile, Gobo mused for only a moment. He closed his eyes for a moment, thinking.

'What would Convincing John be doing down here? I don't think he's ever been married...' His thoughts were cut short, as John gently pushed him to the side so he could get by.

"Convincing John?" Gobo asked, in a small voice. He was a bit worried for him, he had never seemed this down before.

John chuckled softly. An ironic chuckle, but a chuckle nonetheless. "It's been awhile since anyone's called me that. They all want to tar and feather me. Or throw me down the bottomless hole."

"Well, I may want to...but I won't. Something is bothering you, and I'd like to know why."

"You don't want to make her wait. You're all she has." He shook his head gently, turning his back to Gobo and continuing on out of the cavern. He almost started to sing, it had seemed; a soft etheral tuneless song.

"You're all she has, don't leave her side.
She'll always love you, and be the perfect bride.
She's on a thread, hanging oh so dear.
Don't leave her side, for her end may be near.
She loves you like the world itself, so love her back and don't be selfish..."As he left the caverns, meandering his way down another one, his voice began to echo back...

"Don't leave her side, you're all she has..."

With that short tune, he was gone. Gobo didn't move, he was unknowningly captivated by the song. He couldn't see where John had went to, but the words gripped his heart in a vice.

"I-I'm all she has!" He looked this way and that, becoming frantic for only a moment, until the nightlily fell from his hair. Seeing the beautiful onyx flower on the cold, brown and gray stone floor jerked him back to reality. "I am all she has!!"

"I'M COMING RED!!!"
 

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Awww...that was actually really sweet. Convincing John doling out advice! And Gobo wanting to profess love to Red! I love it! I love that you're using the Cavern of the Sparkling Lilies but I also love that you've got your own take on how Gobo and Red could get together. It's just really great. And as I mentioned after the previous chapter, we're seeing Convincing John in this whole new light all of a sudden. Wonderful. More please!
 

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well, if you go to the Muppet Wiki, and look up Convincing John (or you may notice this in the show) His tail is gray, yet his head hair is black! I've always wondered, why is he the only fraggle with differing colors?

Because he COLORS it! Somehow...So I got into my head, he's way older then the younger fraggles think! As old as Uncle Traveling Matt! (Forgot if it was you or someone else...) But they did put John in the same boat as Gobo's parents/Traveling Matts ages. So I figured he colors his hair to look younger...and it just flew from there!

Another chapter possibly today!
 

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Me thinks you're probably thinking of Prawny's fic Where The Magic Began.
Great chapter, will gush over it later, gotta jet.
 

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We can't let this one sink any further into the depths of the fanfic shelves... Come on Sara, please post more!
 
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