FanFic: Is That A Song There?

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Yep... Clocking in at a mere 36 chapters, Lisa's Swamp Call is the next longest fan fic here on MC.

And Skeeter's back story is finally being done some justice here... Left and never heard of again in Columbia? But how does she join the athletics team of whatever...
Oh wait, I think there's a blurb about that in some of the other stories. Keep it comin', we wanna get back to the future... Or present, or whatever time it is.
Hopefully, time for more story.
 

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Chapter Thirty Nine

Skeeter woke up, feeling quite dazed, and exhausted. She looked around, expecting to see the jungles of the amazon around her once more. But instead, she saw her Mother, standing over her. She turned her head, and saw her brother, who was awake. He was watching her, sitting up on the table beside her. He looked worried.

"I thought you'd never wake up Skeeter." He said, rubbing his eyes a little bit. He looked just as tired as she felt. He gently stepped down onto the stage, and helped her sit up. "What happened? Did he try to get you again?"

She nodded, as she stepped off from her little table as well. She looked around the theatre, it seemed to be quite empty now. Until she heard the racuous snoring. Looking over the orchestra pit, she noticed everyone, snoozing in the seats.

"What time is it, Scooter?" She asked him, curious as to how long she'd been out.

"It's nearly 2 am in the morning. We didnt' want to move you anymore, so we just kept you up here on the stage, waiting for you to wake up. Mom hasn't left your side the entire time either."

She nodded, and the three of them, they walked around waking everyone up, so they could get back to the boarding house, and sleep in their own beds for once.

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Nancy was sitting outside, underneath the pale moonlight, as Jessica finished up telling her what had happened to Skeeter. She was shocked...antonished...for a moment she realized if she had a beating heart it would have stopped for what she had heard.

"All of that....happened to her!? And...she didnt' turn out any worse then she is?" She barely whispered to Jessica, who nodded gravely.

"She's purged herself of Steve's teachings for the most part it's seemed. But when she got lost in those jungles, it seems that it's what saved her from dying out there."

"Well...how did she get back here? To Hensonville and all?"

"Her death was publicised and everything, as one of those mass-reporter deaths, no one really noticed at all. But Eli, he really took great pleasure in it..."

Nancy cut her off, grabbing her hand. "Eli? That wouldn't happen to be Eli Tatakshi, would it?"

"Why yes. Eli Takashi...he...he helped with most of the children, I mean, getting them for our militia."

Nancy wished her brother was alive. So she could kill him, for the atrocites that he had done. It all made sense now!! It all connected in her mind, finally. Why didnt' she see this before? Eli helped her find children to watch over and take care of, while he tried to get his pick of the strongest ones. That's why he was delighted to find children...that had no parents.

She stopped cold, and looked back towards her house for a moment. She was a part...of this....She shook her head, she didnt' want to think of it anymore. It was too disheartening to even think of.

Jessica understood, and she turned away from Nancy, floating away. Nancy flew in front of her. "Where are you going, Jessica?"

"I must leave. I am a free-roaming spirit, and I cannot stay in one place for more then 24 hours at a time. Please, I must be leaving."

With that, Jessica left in a small puff of whispy smoke. Nancy then floated back to her house, and she sat in the new nursery. She smiled when she saw all the new renovated stuff inside.

"It's good he has the house now. He'll put this house to great use for once."
 

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The Count said:
Yep... Clocking in at a mere 36 chapters, Lisa's Swamp Call is the next longest fan fic here on MC.

And Skeeter's back story is finally being done some justice here... Left and never heard of again in Columbia? But how does she join the athletics team of whatever...
Oh wait, I think there's a blurb about that in some of the other stories. Keep it comin', we wanna get back to the future... Or present, or whatever time it is.
Hopefully, time for more story.
Sorry about throwing you guys everywhere in timeline with this story. It's just how I'm starting to do things. These conficting story parts are battling for a part of the story, and I can't seem to figure out how to do it properly. So this part of the story is getting kind of outta whack.

And this is how I've always envisioned Skeeter. She does love sports, but she isn't professional by any means. And she's never actually played on a real sports team. ....HOLY CRAP!!!

I just had this...HUGE REVEALTION...about my own story!!!!

The soccer match...in spanish....and....Colombia.....OH WOW.

Try to figure it out yourself!!

I'll be back on tommorrow morning!!!

PS: I was wondering, if anyone could perhaps be so kind as to try to attempt drawing some kind of a cover, and a nice over-all title for these stories? My mom brought it up that perhaps, I should make a title for the entire "book" of these stories. And that I should have some cover artwork for it as well.

I'm at a loss for the title, and for the artwork as well.
 

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Another good short chapter. And the inclusion of Travelling Matt Fraggle was another stroke of brilliance.

But Jessica left just like that? Well, Nancy had probably heard enough and Jessica's already shown remorse...
Now what to do with the house... Hope to find out next time.
 

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Yeah, funny thing is, she dosnt' believe Fraggles exist. XD At least I don't think so. :smile: She thought he was a hallucnation, because she was so sick. I hope he sounded alright.

I wasn't sure how to make Matt sound. I've only watched a few episodes of Fraggle Rock, that I remember. But apperently some christian channel had not Fraggle Rock, but a lot of those Intersistals with Traveling Matt in other parts of the world and stuff. Overdubbed by Dave himself too. Pretty cool.
 

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So sorry I haven't been on much to read and comment on this wonderful story Renee! I can't tell you how excited I was to read about Skeeter's story and then Doc and Sprocket were there and then Traveling Matt! It was awesome! You're really diving in deep with many different concepts and it's just so great! Anyway, I'm not going to be on very much over the weekend, but know when I am on, I will be reading updates from you for sure and if I have a chance to comment I will. But, I just have to say again, this is brilliant! It's fantastic!
 

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I loved the background story on Skeeter. At first it was confusing but that's actually how some of the writers for the Star Wars series tell their stories too. Eventually at the end every thread is tied together and it all makes sense. I am so happy to hear about your surgery, I'll be praying for ya. Hey maybe you can get someone on the forum to make you a cover. There are some amazing artists on here. :smile: Can't wait to hear more of your story. :excited:
 

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Chapter Forty

Skeeter sat in the windowseat, reading a book. She had an old backpack beside her, it full of books. The house was somewhat quiet, but...not without it's problems. Fozzie was trying out jokes to the Electric Mayhem, who were all but pelting him with tomatoes.

Gonzo and Scooter were working on his cannon outside, while Beau was cleaning up in the kitchen, as well as helping Sadie and Chef with lunch. It was peaceful, she thought. Not quiet, by any stretch, but very peaceful.

"Hey, Gonzo. How did it go out there?" She asked, as she saw her brother blackened from his head to the middle of his chest. Scooter coughed softly, and a puff of soot escaped from his mouth.

"It was a bang, Skeet. Simply a blasting good time..." He said, smiling a little bit, as he grabbed a towel and wiped the soot off of him.

"That cannon had too much powder in it. Maybe we should try another ratio then, huh, Scooter?"

"Yeah...that sounds great Gonzo. Another test.."

Skeeter laughed, and then as her brother left the room, she tapped Gonzo on the shoulder. "Hey, what did you do with Nanny's house? It was all fixed up...and you didn't want it?"

Gonzo smiled a little bit, laughing. He simply handed Skeeter a folded up piece of paper, and a set of keys. Then he walked away up the stairs, still smiling.

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Nancy sat in the nursery, and she frowned; looking down towards the floor.

"I do not want to leave this plane. Please, let me stay." She shook her head, disbelief entering into her thoughts. A strong pair of hands rested on her shoulders, his pale blue eyes piercing her strong green ones.

"You must let them be. You have done all that you can do. Your work is finished, sister. Follow me, we'll go this together."

Nancy pulled away from her brother, she wanted with all her heart to stay in this place. "Let me stay in the theatre, I'll haunt this house if need be!!"

"You did not die in this house."

"What about the hosptial?" She pleaded.

"That hospital will do you no good if you wished to stay with the children. They only truely are around that theatre, and the boarding house. They do not stay around the hospital too often."

She looked down towards the floor, tears streaming down her face. She had done her duty to her charges, and she knew it was her time to finally leave this plane of existance. She started for the door, to go and see them one last time. The man looked into Nancy's eyes, and he softly smirked; standing in front of her only way out of the house.

"It is your time. Do not cause them anymore grief then has already passed. Let them not know you have watched them, and cared for them. They should never know, Nancy."

"But...Gonzo. Eli, he...." She stammered, looking longingly out of the window.

Eli shook his head, and grasped her hand. "As you led me, sister. I will lead you. Say your goodbyes now."

"They won't hear me. They won't know anything is happening!"

"They will. Say your goodbyes, they shall know it in their hearts. You have a strong connection to them, you should know that already."

Nancy walked over, and sat down on the new couch, in the nursery, and she held a small pillow, already starting to weep softly; as she told the children, that she imagined were in front of her goodbye.

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The beautiful blue wedding dress hung on a dress dummy in Piggy's room. She glared at it. Shaking her head, she walked over and ripped the sleeves out of the dress angrily. Then she smiled at her handiwork. She stopped cold in her room, and she smiled. She suddenly felt just so happy right then, and she slipped on her powder blue gloves; starting to get ready for that night.

Kermit was pacing the room, with Fozzie, Gonzo, and Scooter sitting on his bed. The other three were already dressed in black tuxedoes, full spats and everything. Kermit only had his waistcoat and pants on so far. He was furious, he never actually wanted to have this wedding. It was only to calm Piggy down and to make her happy. When he said it, he thought he must've been out of his mind.

"Well, Boss. Just tell her you don't want to get mar---" Scooter's sentence was suddenly cut short by Fozzie's paw.

"You will be minced gofer if she hears that, Scooter." Fozzie looked a bit worried, as Kermit just stared at them both.

Scooter glared over at Fozzie, and pried his paw off of his mouth. "Bleh. Just tell her the truth, Chief! She won't kill you over that!"

Kermit suddenly looked three shades of a lighter green. "She'd kill me over less then that!" He gulped, looking out the window for a moment. He shook his head, and pulled his jacket on, buttoning it up.

"Just explain what's happened. You were so worked up getting worried over Scooter here, you didn't know what you were saying to her!" Gonzo replied, as to which Scooter glared at him.

"You want ME to get killed now, Gonzo?" He exclaimed, finally buttoning his jacket up once more.

Gonzo just shook his head, and he started to walk down the hall. "I'm going to go check up on the ladies, see how the're doing."

He stopped in front of Piggy's room, and saw her standing in her camisole and slip, examinging her wedding dress. Skeeter had some pins and some binding tape in her hands, fixing a small rip in Piggy's dress. Gonzo knocked on the door. Immediately Piggy got this furious look on her face, and was about to scream. Skeeter looked a little angry as well. Then Janice just shoved herself right up to the door, as she started to close it.

"Now, come on Gonzo! Like...the men arn't supposed to see the bride, till she...like goes down the aisle. So, shoo! Go away! We'll tell you menfolk when she's ready and everything."

"It's the groom that's not supposed to be able to see her. Everybody else can see her." He simply replied to her.

She frowned a bit, trying to think about that, until Piggy slammed herself beside Janice. "Weirdo! Weather or not your the groom or not, get yourself away from moi's room as she is DRESSING!!!"

Piggy slammed the door on his nose, actually; and he pulled it out, crooked. He laughed a bit, and walked back to Kermit's room. He was still pacing, but they were ready to try this, again. But this time, for real.
 

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Sorry bout that Ed! I was at the doctor's offices all day today, and I finally got some rest. I'm at the hospital as we speak, with a laptop on my lap. Quite interesting. I just wish I had a camera or something ya know? So, wireless internet at the hospital. Whee..they'll be taking me back about 8 or 9 pm tonight.

Also, my new avatar is what I call "Anime Scooter". I made it myself!
*No offense to Ed, please. I love you man.*

((HUGS)) to redBoobergurl, The Count, Froggiegirl18, theprawncracker, togetheragain, Beauregard, Bill Bubble Guy, and a lot of other people I've probably forgotten!

Edit'd: I'm going in NOW. See you......in a few hours most likely, maybe tommorrow morning!! WISH ME LUCK GUYS!!! LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
 
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