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ReneeLouvier

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Thanks. :wink:

Check out Contributation thread, I've posted an audio clip of "Remembering The Good Times We Had" Chapter Four. I personally recorded it.
 

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Thanks Beth... I'll just dive into your profile and check through the "Find All Threads Started By (Insert User)".

And Renee... A rully nice chapter there. The star on Gonzo's dressing room, or mop closet...
The fight at the prison...
Scooter and Sara...

Rully good stuff here.
 

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You know, I haven't been around for a while, but... Well, I did occasionally sneak on and read, and I've been enjoying it... But, wow, chapter ten... I... Well, I... um... <gulp> Robin?.... <sniff> Robin......... And Gonzo......... <squeezes teddy bears>

But, aside from that, I love it! And it's funny! And it's spectacular! And I'm back, I'm here, I'm alive, and I'm NAGGING! So give us more, please! Please oh pretty pretty please, MORE!

Thank you.
 

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Chapter Thirteen

It was time for Scooter to leave, and Sara looked like she was going to cry. She always felt like crying when he left her. She had been wrongly imprisoned for nearly 6 months now, and she hated it.

She hated it all, and she wished she could leave, get bailed out. Something. But that wasn't possible, for that company had their hands in everything, and they controlled the police. She leaned over and hugged him tightly, not wanting to let him go.

"Honey...they won't let me stay here. If I could...I certainly would, and you know that." He whispered softly, while hugging her back. She sniffled holding him again. She started to let go slowly, until they were just holding each other's hands.

The female guard watched them, smiliing. Another guard came up, and was about to yell at her for keeping someone past visiting hours. She held a hand up.

The woman had a light british accent, as she blocked the doorway from the other guard. "Mrs. Grosse is our star prisoner. Now we let her have a few more minutes, she always hates to leave him."

"Star Prisoner? She isn't a diva or anything you know." The other guard crossed her arms, ready to barge through if this one didn't let her pass.

"No. But she's never given us any problems, and she's always done what she's told too. Heck sometimes we even forget she's here."

"Never caused a problem? What about that fight in the mess hall? I've heard that she had started it."

The brit guard shook her head, looking back at them. "Look at 'em. Two lovebirds they are. He's part of that group you know...the Muppets. And she was the Head of the Hensonville Observer too. Co-Owner of that lovely little bookshop."

The other guard opened her eyes a bit, looking inside. Sara was disheleved, wearing a baige prison issue jumpsuit, her hair was a mess it tangled and matted, and she looked like she hadn't slept in two weeks. This was the Head Reporter? "Wow, she looks horrible."

Sighing, the guard rapped on the door. "Alright then. I've given you 20 extra minutes now. Anymore and the warden'll have my head, Grosse. Get back to your cell now. She'll ascort you."

Sara nodded, and walked slowly out from the room with Scooter beside her. He held her hand as they walked down towards the metal barricaded doors. He could go no further then those. She stopped and looked back at him.

"You'll come next week?" She smiled softly.

"As usual, hun. I..." He stammered, he now felt just saying 'It was the theatre' wasn't a really good reason at all.

"The theatre. I know. It's a big thing, a big responsibity. So...I guess this is goodbye for now."

Scooter nodded as the guard input a security code, and the doors swung open, while Sara walked inside. He could hear the clamor of the women who knew she was given some kind of a special privilage. He could hear they were angry too.

As the doors closed, he walked a little closer and watched through the small windows, as she was led to her cell and the heard the bars opening with a loud metallic creak, then the familiar bang as they shut.

"...yeah...till we're together again sweetheart." He whispered to himself, as he slowly walked outside.

Fozzie was sleeping in the studebaker, his feet up on the dashboard; and his hat was on his face, while he was snoring away.
 

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Aw man... Isn't there anything Doc Brown can do to help? Wonder if...
Fine chapter Renee, and it tugs at the heartstrings.

Oh, BTW... You got two Chapter Elevens. The one that starts with Scooter going to the women's prison should be Chapter Twelve.
Have a good day.
 

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Ok, as usual I arrived late...so I have only read the first few chapters so far, but, it's hilarious! I mean, whoah man! Doc and Piggy! *laughs* A perfect porcine couple.
 

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Chapter Fourteen

They got back to the house, and it was dark outside by that time. Doc was sitting out on the roof of the Delorean watching the stars with Marty and the little kids sitting out on the grass.

Scooter stepped out from the car, and he stretched a little bit. It was days like this when he just wished he could be that annoying little boy again, bugging Kermit all the time to get on stage. He shook his head, the past was the past and the future is now, might as well live it.

About four children heard the soft rumbling of the studebaker, and they all stood up from the grass, and nearly trampled onto Scooter. He laughed, and picked them all up.

"Hey! You guys waited up for me?" He stood up, and looked down at them, trying not to smile. "You should all be in bed. And you know it."

They looked down, and Jane pulled at Scooter's pants leg. Scooter kneeled down to her height, and looked at her smiling. "You're lying Uncle Scooter. You knew we'd stay up for you and Fozzie! And Dr. Brown was showing us...contsee...the stars in the sky!" She then hugged his leg tightly, and he hugged them all back.

Out of the four children, were Kermit and Piggy's children, James and Jane. Then there was Skeeter and Cliffords little boy, Kevin. He looked like an orange skinned baby Clifford. He was undenyablely cute.

"Ucna Scoot! Unca Scooot!!" He squealed, stamping his little feet on the ground, while lifting his tiny hands upwards, to be picked up. He was only two years old.

He scooped Kevin up, and with the children in tow, he walked back into the house. The last child was outside, and he was the eldest of all of them, about 10 years old. He smirked and hugged Fozzie.

"Hey Dad. Long time no see huh?"

"Yeah...you must've spent a good time hibernating at your Mother's then.." He smiled softly, walking beside his son; Frank as they walked inside.

"Great time Dad...great time....oh wow! Listen to this Dad, this one is a sure ringer! Oh....Okay, here it goes..."


He backed up, and was acting almost like he was on a stage, he was a really great comic, compared to his Dad.
"One day a policeman stopped a motorist who had just gone through a four way stop sign and was about to give him a ticket when the motorist said. "Officer you can't give me a ticket for that!'" He laughed a bit before going on.

"Why not" said the officer. "Because although I did not stop I slowed right down and its almost the same." "But you did not stop" replied the officer, "and the sign says STOP." "But the way was clear and it was safe" replied the motorist. The officer then pulls out his batton and starts hitting the motorist. "What are you doing!" yells the motorist in surprise. "Do you want me to slow down or stop" says the officer."

Fozzie laughed really deeply, that was a great joke. "Ahhh!!! Great joke, Frank! You should do the monologue this week!" He put his arm around his son, as they continued walking inside the house. Frank looked up at his Dad, he was wearing his blue necktie, and a black porkpie hat, like his Father. He smiled broadly.

"Really, Dad? That was great?" He asked him. "You really liked that one?"

"Yeah, yeah. That was a really funnee joke, you should tell that on stage this week. I can't come up with anything that funny."

"I guess I'm taking after you then, huh?" He replied, as he opened the door for a moment, letting Fozzie walk inside before him.

"Yeah, just like your Dad. I'll talk to Kermit about it, maybe we could do some comedy sthick together! We'd be a great team on stage!"

Frank smiled, and took his hat off for a moment, playing with it in his hands; and he looked up his Dad, smiling. "But we're already a great team Dad. We just gotta show everyone else, right?"

Fozzie nodded. "Yeah, just show everyone else how good we are."
 

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Another good piece there Renee... That explains why Kermit and Piggy's kids are Jane and James. Woulda thought Frank would be better for the little boy pig, but you went and used it here.
A few nitpicks though...

There's one moment where you say Kevin was wearing a blue necktie and black porkney hat like his father. Did you mean Frank, Fozzie's son there instead?

And as for the chapter numbering... Now we have two Elevens and two Thirteens.
The way I see/read it, and please correct me if I'm wrong, is this.
Chapter Eleven: Sara in the women's prison talking to Bets, and Skeeter reminds Scooter to see his wife.
Chapter Twelve: Scooter goes down to see his wife at the women's prison.
Chapter Thirteen: Scooter and Sara, who eventually have to be separated as she's led back to her cell.
Chapter Fourteen: The one you posted, with the four children.

So, Chapter Fifteen would be next, if that's right.
Hope this helps.
 
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