A Heart of Gold

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Loved that we finally came back to Jerry's Pizza Shop with its three tenderers. The decision's been cast? Oh Kermiiiiiiiiit!
Please, post more!
 

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Jerry's Pizza Place was always a cheerful place.

Except, of course, for when it wasn't.
Of course it isn't right now. Why bring it up otherwise. I just love when you use this type of wording to open a chapter.

And what is there to say about the other chapters you have posted since my last review other than "Wow." Loving them Lisa. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.
 

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"Oh this is nothing," Kermit said. "You should see when Ryan and Lisa give each other a high-five." Bob and Craig raised their eyebrows, and Kermit shrugged. "I don't get it either."

Does it make me strange that I actually do get this?

I adore the lightness of this chapter, mixed with the serious issues. And the moment when they "shrugged the joke away" caught me off guard, and was beautifully fitting.
 

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Another fine chapter, so nice to see this lovely story updated but man, I can't stop thinking about the line "the decisions been made" Oy. Kermit. Wow. More. Please.
 

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What ladies? Are you two-timing on Mother? Cause if you are... You'll be spending some infinity in limbo, worse than what Benny got.
 

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Mother...Dan...I can't keep up with the people I'm married to at this place...

Er...yeah...you better take that apron Prawnie...
 

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Oh, wish I could find out more about that decision...
 

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Given that Lisa's online and existing today, on a Wednesday... We'd like to have more of this story please. Please, please, please. With a teddy bear on top.
 
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