beaker
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It's ok, I agree to some extent...such is why I am very grateful to be gifted with the scribe and thought of a thousand ancient scholars and the bard of all ages.Originally posted by StarlitAngel
"Poetic" and "Rhymes with a lot of stuff" are two COMPLETELY seperate discriptions, lol...poetic is more like..."sounds pretty," or "I'm a guy and I'm trying to flirt with you but I'm a guy so I have the romantic vocabulary of a............................................................well.............a guy....."
Sorry, I'm an English major with a huge SAT verbal score, I get picky about these things just kiddin with ya, everybody...
*clears throat* ahem...
This one is called "entropy: my only valentines;
or the extrapolated balance of life bends backwards to appease"
outside of thinking and beyond all the clocks
dreaming of sleeping of a most unusual thought
of wanderers of ports and the less traveled way
down the road of antiquity and ammorous array
past the trumpeted halls of Aurelius and rhyme
into the backbone of love and squishy fun time
a curious portal thats like nothing you'll see
an emporium of balance and imperious glee
Tearing down the farbic of time and the age
the monolithic triumph of each written page
And oh to be free of the present and past
to the future that becons me at last
a blueprint for a brand new emerging...
whats yet to be revealed and still to come
When our minds connect it's ancient dialect
my love for you is like a timeless relic
...things are quite large in the cosmic of thing
tiny rooms filled with possibilities...
~.c//0ry