Philip Kippel said:
And because of the time period that this outline takes place in, is the music in "At the Dance" the tango version that accompanied the "At the Dance" segments in the Sandy Duncan and Candice Bergen episodes and part of the dance marathon in the Carol Burnett episode?
I hadn't thought of that. Actually, the way it played out in my head, no. Make it the same as the Bruce Forsyth episode's "At the Dance", not the two episodes that followed.
TotallySpiesFan said:
Since Jerry had to return to the U.S. for five weeks because of his daughter's illness, that would leave Dr. Teeth, Zoot, Animal, and Janice.
Or it could leave another performer playing Floyd just on guitar, not on vocals. Truthfully, what you're saying did cross my mind, but as it is a fan fiction, I would just as soon not quibble. I did my part to leave Nelson out when I was setting the characters in the panel discussion, I figure with Floyd's inclusion I can allow myself this much leeway since he doesn't have a vocal line. Now all of the EM shouts at a couple of points ("I could've danced-" "DANCED!" "Danced!" "DANCED!" "Danced all night!"), but really, how can you discern all of the voices in a shout? I figure I can get away with putting Floyd in here, basically.
And I just caught a typo- Mildred in AtD should say "My cousin, the research scientist, has been in a bad humor lately", implying that he still is, not "had been", implying that he was and is no longer. And I think Zoot's fire sale line should probably go "No thanks, I can set my own fires cheaper!" just for clarity's sake.
David "Gorgon Heap" Ebersole