Hey, I've been finding some Sesame Street-themed stories to read as inspiration for future stories out of my "Sesame, DC" series, and this one really caught my interest.
The story you have here is marvelous, Beth. Never have I read such powerful drama out of a Sesame Street story, with all of the characters (especially Oscar the Grouch) so affected by Cookie Monster's accident and condition. And you've really got me curious to know how the SS residents find Oscar and get C.M.'s memory back.
Having so much fun reading, and whenever you get the free time to get back to writing again, I look forward to reading what you have in store next.