Here is a better chapter, and the reason for that is because it is spaced out more, and quotation marks are used correctly.
Chapter Nine
As night began to slowly creep it way to the Hillsville train station Kermit and the rest of the Muppets started loading some of there equipment back into there boxcars. Scooter Robin, and Fozzie feed all the animals and made sure that they had fresh water and enough hay for the night. Dr.Teeth, Floyd and the rest of the band put all there musical instruments away and made sure that the boxcar was locked. As the rest of the Muppets finished loading everything Kermit gathered them together for one final speech.
“Well gang.” he said, “Tomorrow is going to be a big day, We are going to smart organizing and trying out all of our new acts. We are also going to star planning for a big parade that we will do right down Main Street. I'm sure we all know by now the state of the town, and that is alright, because we are still going to give this town the best darn circus we can! So I want everyone to try and get a good night sleep, and we will see you in the morning.”
As Kermit started walking towards his boxcar he stopped where Grover was chatting with Rowlf about where he was going to sleep. “Grover?”, he said. How has your first day with us been?” Grover turned and with a smile said “Oh froggy, it has been so great, and I have made a lot of new friends today. I also think I have found what act I'm going to be into.” “That is wonderful Grover!” . Kermit said, “You can sleep in my boxcar tonight Grover, but if you will excuse me I need to make a phone call.” The two left, and Grover headed for the boxcar and Kermit headed for the nearby pay phone.
As he picked up the phone receiver, Kermit really did not quite know what to expect, or say for that matter. Still in his heart he knew that he had to try to make things right with Piggy. It had been two days since he last saw her, or even talk to her.. As he nervously dialed the number that he knew all to well. He thought about what he was going to say, and how he was going to say it. After several long rings there was no answer, and sadly Kermit placed the receiver back on the phone. As he slowly walked back to the boxcar. He wondered where Piggy could be at this late hour, and more importantly if she was ok.