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Good stuff here Christy. Loved the part about Christy sneaking off to the lab to finish her homework... And the mad scientistry going on at the lab next over.
What? Scientistry isn't a word? Well, if Vibs can get away with tacking -ish and -ness to the end of everything, what's a -try here or there.
And I'm a bit more satisfied with all the character development here, the bit near the end rully touched me.
Look forward to Chapter 3, whenever it goes up.
So... about that next chapter.
What? Scientistry isn't a word? Well, if Vibs can get away with tacking -ish and -ness to the end of everything, what's a -try here or there.
And I'm a bit more satisfied with all the character development here, the bit near the end rully touched me.
Look forward to Chapter 3, whenever it goes up.
So... about that next chapter.