The 2nd MopFam Tale - Honey, I'm Home

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(ooops, thought it was Kelly! My mistake...hehe..maybe she taught Kelly to say it...lol)

Bea:zany:{btw, Lisa, have you checked out Muppet vs Las Vegas?}regard
 

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Hi guys. I just popped in. (ok so I'm not supposed to be here. I gotta get my behind home). To say that I hope you're enjoying the next chapter in the Moppet Saga.

Mother: I'm not saying if I approve.

Me: Uh huh...yeah...Anyways enjoy this story. I gotta say that my sequel...er...triquel...ok my story. Is offically started.

Mother: You call a sentence a start????

Me: Shush you they're not supposed to know that! Anyways miss you guys. Bye!!
 

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*Vigorous and boisterous applause for this chapter.

Bravo! Encore!
Bo, you outdid yourself. Minor quibbles include as Lisa pointed out, Ann's line and not Kelly's but is hokay. And did Angie poke Adam in the dormitory bed with his or her wand?
But so much happened, wherer to start...

How about here.
The girls appeared next to Vibs surprising her. Yes, and at least now we know they're safe.
All four girls agreeing to rescue Viq... And then the action plan.

Viq: But I didn't! I can still hear you in here!"
Yes, and so can we hear you out here giving yourself away again.

And when the girls launched their attack... So much so...
Then Ron disappearing and the Coles appearing, leading to a quick look of fear in Abu's eyes... Nice and intimidating.

Everyone coming back home and finding the note... Along with Christy almost connecting the dots but not being interested in the news shows...
So great, when's the next chapter? J/K, post when ready.
 

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Chapter 7: Plans…

Father lifted the door-hammer, and let it fall. He knocked with his knuckles, and then waited. His brother should be home. He was a quiet type. Liked to keep himself to himself, and made delicious pancakes.

The door opened, and Bob stood in a nightcap, yawning. “Bo? Come in.”

Bob was Bo’s older brother, and had inherited the family house. As Father gazed around the spare bedroom, formerly his bedroom, he felt a stream of memories. He looked down, down from the window into their garden. The old tree had been cut, replaced by small shrubs. And the garden next door had a water fountain that had never been there before.

He remembered Christy. How she had walked through that garden, the girl next-door, swinging a short stick with a couple of leaves. He remembered how she had looked up at him, but not seen him, then had scrambled over their fence and climbed the tree. Daring herself to climb higher, to take a greater risk. As she neared the top, she had looked straight at him, into the window. And she had gasped, embarrassed and flustered. She’d shimmied down the tree truck as fast as lightning. Bo had run from his room, and down the stairs. He’d tripped on the carpet, and by the time he reached the garden, she was gone. Like now. She was gone. Gone. His no longer.

“Why are you here?” Bob asked, standing in the doorway. “And why so early?”

“I came because I had to get away,” Father said.

Bob shrugged. “Good enough for me. I’ll be downstairs making pancakes for breakfast.”

Father took a shower, turning the heat as high as he could take it. The rivulets of water washed over his skin, washed away his problems.

Father dressed, and stood before the bedroom mirror, comb in hand. And the face he saw there was not too dissimilar to his own. Moppet.

“Why are you here, Father?” the reflection asked.

“Like I said, I had to get away.”

The face remained the same, but the eyes changed. Held a glow. “And why are you really here.” Moppet asked again.

“Because, I’m afraid.” He looked at his feet. “I am afraid to lose her, afraid to be hurt again, broken again.”

He stared at himself in the mirror. “Where are you? Where have you gone? Where is the you I once loved so very much?”

“I am here. Right here.”

“No,” Moppet shook his head. “You are not. You are letting her escape you, and you are not fighting for her back.”

“I can’t fight any longer…”

“Yes, you can. You can. And you will. Go back, Father, go back. Go back and fight.”

The door opened. The spell was broken. “Still speaking to yourself?” Bob asked.

“I’m leaving,” Father said.

“Why? You only just got here.”

“I have to get back,” Father said. “I have to get her back.”

*****​

The shrill ring of a telephone broke Jack from his sleep. He scrambled out of bed, and grabbed the phone. “Yup, Jack here.”

“Hi, it’s Don Canolli. About that scheme of yours?”

Jack dug for a way to put it that would sound sincere, yet vague. “Er, it’s still boiling, Mr Canolli. But it hasn’t brewed yet.”

“Are we talking about business, here, or tea, Jack?”

Ok. Maybe a little too vague. “Business, of course. Big business.”

“Well, whatever it is, I want results. And soon.”

“Of course, Mr Canolli. Of course.”

“Good bye, Jack. I’m sure we’ll talk soon.”

Jack hung up the phone, and went in search of his clothes that he had dumped here and there while getting ready for bed. Why did he agree to this plan of his sister’s? What did he have to show for it? Nada. He’d have to think of something better. Get some results. And money to back up his lie. And soon.

*****​

Anne awoke first, and slipped out of her bed and into a thin nightgown. She stepped lightly down the stairs, and climbed up onto a chair beside the table, where her dad sat working on a problem on a piece of paper. “Daddy,” she said. “Can I talk to you?”

Adam looked up. “Of course.”

“Was it all a dream?”

Adam Cole thought about this for a few minutes. He folded his hands in front of him on the table. “No,” he said. “It was not a dream. What happened was real. What do you remember?”

She scratched her head. “There was a danger in your study. And then we found Vibs, and went to save Viq.”

“To save him?” Adam frowned. “Was he in danger?”

She looked up at him through large eyes. “He was locked in the cellar. Didn’t Vibs tell you?”

“No. No, she did not.”

“And there were the two men.”

Mr Cole leant forward, thoughtfully. “Two of them?”

“Yes. A dark man, and a light man. But the light one disappeared, like you do sometimes, Daddy. And you captured the other man.”

“Do you remember who this first man was?”

Anne shook her head. “Uh, uh.”

Adam reached forward. “Hold still a moment, Anne.” He placed his hand over her head. And listened. “It was Ron,” he said. “Abu Fletcher was an evil man.”

“Yes, he was. He put us in bag and we couldn’t breathe,” Anne said.

“But he did have one good thing. He could save lives.”

Anne dipped her head. “How, Daddy?”

“He used to use a strange medicine. But it was very dangerous, and he used it for bad, not good.”

“But he did save this person, Ron?”

“Yes. Yes, he did. But that means your Aunt is in trouble. Big trouble.”

“As big as we were when we broke the potion case?”

“Yes,” Adam said smiling at the innocence of youth. “In fact much worse.”

*****​

“That’s it. I’m outta here,” Christy Moppet said, grabbing her coat from the bed, and leaving the hotel room. Mac caught up with her in the hallway.

“Do you know what you will do?”

Christy sighed. “No. Not yet.”

“What can you do?”

“Well, I can start by getting home to my children.”

She strode out of the hotel, leaving Mac to pay and sign them out. She took his car. And he caught a taxi back to his own home.

“Knock, knock,” Mother said, stepping into the house. “Hello? Is anyone awake?”

“Hello Mummy,” Vibs said from the kitchen.

Christy gasped, and burst into a smile. “You’re home!” she squealed, grabbing her up into a hug. Viq frowned. “And, you too,” Christy said tousling his hair. “Where’s Father?”

“I don’t know,” Vibs answered sweetly, as Vic dug into his cereals. Literally.

Mother strode up the stairs. “Father? Bo?”

Vic’s door was open, so she stepped inside. Vic was sat on the bed. He didn’t look as though he has slept much, though from the state of his hair, he had slept some.

“Mum,” Vic said, the single word holding more meaning than a hundred. He knew. She knew he knew. “Mum, is it all true? About Dad?”

Mother paused for only a moment, then moved to him, sitting down. He rested his head on her shoulder. “I’m sorry,” she said.

“Don’t be sorry, mum. You did what you could. I don’t blame you.”

“I was trying to protect you.”

“I know, mum. Mum?”

“Yeah?”

“Is it true about Dad. That he’s still alive?”

And to that, she didn’t know what to say. Luckily she was interrupted by a scream from outside. Rushing downstairs, she found Aunt Dan-Dan trying to eat the twins. She separated them quickly, calming Dan with a pair of pliers that she handed him to sort his hair out with. “These will make an fabulous edition to my toiletries,”” Dan-Dan exclaimed, running away down the road on his hands. “I shall place it next to the fan of the Boeing 747 that I use as a toe dryer.”

Christy shook her head, and went into the living room, where she saw the note.

*****​

Ron pressed the intercom to Jack’s flat. “Who’s there?” Jack called down through the fuzzy speaker.

“A friend of the family.”

“Which?”

“The Moppet Family.”

“Oh. Come on up.” The door buzzed open, and Ron stepped into the lobby. He took the stairs two at a time, and knocked on Jack’s door. It opened almost immediately.

“Hi,” Jack said. “And you are?”

“Ron Demetri. I understand you are looking up family history.”

“How’d you…”

“Never mind that. Can I come in?”

“Er, sure, step inside.” Jack moved over, as Ron stepped past him. “Hey, there’s a thing,” Jack said. He pinched a piece of pink dust out of Ron’s black hair. “Now, what did you want to talk about?”

“You probably know my wife, Christy?”

*****​

Father shovelled his way past assorted strings and sticks. “What is this a gift wrapping shop?” He called.

Mr Harvey waved from the inner office. “No,” he said. “Kite testing. However, the kites aren’t passing many tests. So far they have find the written report particularly gruelling.”

“Oh, um…”

“Never mind. A little pun, there.”

Father frowned. He’d never quite understood his colleague. “I’m looking for a lawyer, you wouldn’t happen to know of a good one?”

“Is there such a thing? As a good lawyer? Matter of fact, I trained in law. Took the bar exam. I named twenty-three of the twenty-five different drinks, and passed with an MDA in my system, a Moderate Degree of Alcohol. What do you need? Oh, by the way, Miss Mingo-something was around here yesterday, wanted to know something about you.”

“What about me?” Father asked suddenly alarmed.

“Everything about you.”

*****​

Miss Mingostone placed the files back into the folder. She should return them to Harvey immediately. Or, better still, to Father. If it was true what Jack had said, that this was the only copy, and that this was the only proof of the Moppet’s marriage, then it was vital to keep it –

A knock on the door interrupted her thoughts. Miss Mingostone crossed the thin carpet of her flat, and peered out the fish-eye peephole inlaid in the door. “Jack?” She quickly undid the latch, and pulled the door open full. “Hey, come in. Who is- Why did you bring Ron here?”

“Sis, this is vitally important. You still have the marriage certificate?”

She glanced at the folder on the bed-sofa, snapping her eyes to it and away, like a lizard flicking its tongue in and out. “No, I, took them back. Yesterday.”

She heard a muffled thud, and turned again, quickly. The folder was on the floor, the certificate half out of it. Ron crossed the room quickly, and snatched it up. “It’s true then,” he said.

“Of course it is true,” Jack said.

Mingostone’s eyes burned fiercely. “You told this man about the certificate?”

Jack started to speak, but Ron spoke quicker and louder. “Don’t you think I deserved to know?”

Miss Mingostone frowned. A sudden fear hit her. “Jack, you didn’t tell him that-” She stopped, and her face flushed. She looked at Ron.

“That it’s the only copy?” Ron said. “Of course he did. Remember, dear, you did make him grovel to his boss, and mob-boss’s need payment. In fact, I’d say I helped him more than you did in this instance.”

She opened and shut her mouth. How could he, after all she’d done? To betray her trust just like that?

Jack moved over closer to her, almost protectively. “Sis, I didn’t mean, well, what difference does it make?”

“None,” Ron said, folding the certificate, and placing it in the breast pocket of his light jacket. “It makes no difference to you, Liza. Only to me.”

He strode past her, and out the open door. Miss Mingostone stared after him open mouthed. She turned back to the folder on the floor, then bent to inspect something beside it. Pink dust.

To be continued...
 

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Superb. The scene with Christy coming home and fending off DanDan's attack... And then the scene with Christy and Vic, so touching.
Good references all around to the Moppet history, with Bob's famous pancakes...

And then Liza getting betrayed like that by Jack. Would hate to see what happens next...
But we need to see what happens next. And this pink dust...
Me thinks there's a clue there.
 

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Chapter 8: Lives…

Mother was sat alone on the porch swing when he arrived. Vic had left the house for school with their neighbour, the boy next door. Vic was strangely silent. Even the Dog sensed his mood, and walked with his ears drooped. The twins were inside, playing. Or, hopefully just playing, maybe planning world domination.

The thin swing chain squeaked as Mother propelled herself gently back and forth. How had it come to this?

“Nicky, you look at beautiful as ever.”

Mother felt a tingle run through her. Nicky...Christy Nicky Cole-Demetri. Her pirate name was Nicky, a name only one man could say with such feeling. No, there were two. Two men... The swing idled. She turned her head to face him.

He leant on the white-painted fence surrounding the house. His grin was intoxicating, one thing that had attracted her to him in the beginning. His hair moved, ruffled by a breath of wind.

“Ron,” Mother said, no, not Mother. Nicky. Nicky said it. So many times, so many lives ago.

Ron vaulted over the fence, and walked purposefully across the front lawn. The green grass was mown in stripes. They’d hired a gardener.

Nicky stood up. “Hey,” she said.

Ron jumped up the porch steps, close to her now. How easy it would be to go back, step past so many obstacles, and re-live the glory days. Nicky stepped towards him. He touched her shoulder. “Hey yourself,” he said.

“So, I didn’t dream it,” Nicky said. “You really have come back. From the grave. For years I knew, if anyone could, you would. But now...”

Ron moved closer still. His arm encircled her waist. Mother knew it was happening too fast. “No,” Ron said. “I did not return from the grave. I never died.” He spoke, his voice close to her ear. “After the fight, after the battle, when Hevej killed me, I knew I should die. And I made you obey your promise.”

“My promise,” Nicky whispered. She’d felt the wait of his body in her arms as she said her goodbye, a silent and final I love you, and she had cut back the tears when she heard the splash as his body sunk beneath the waves.

“But I was saved from the waves,” Ron said. “By a man.”

“Abu,” Nicky said.

“You saw the news.”

“Yes. He was a dangerous man.”

“But I owed him,” Ron said. “He saved my life.”

Mother drew back. Mother now, not Nicky. “Saved yours, but destroyed others.”

“I never helped him,” Ron said. “Never. I just kept silent. Is that such a sin?”

“You kept silent,” as the words left Mother’s lips she heard them deeper in her soul. So many years, he had been alive. Where had he been? Why?

Ron sensed her questions, felt her move from his embrace. “Don’t do this,” he said.

“Why did you keep silent? Why did you never contact me?”

“I didn’t know how. I wished to, so many times. But I was dead, Nicky. As far as you were concerned, I was gone. I left it too late. I couldn’t just turn up on your doorstep, and shout Honey, I’m home.”

Mother moved back another step. “But now you have. Why now?”

“Because.” Ron covered his mouth with the back of his hand. “Because I love you, Nicky. Get it? I couldn’t live without you any longer. You thought I was dead, and I was dead, Nicky. Without you I was dead.”

A fire burned in Mother’s eyes. Hot tears that stung. “Ron, I am married. I have a family. Perhaps, sometimes, I wish I didn’t...But I do. And I can’t change that.” She shook her head. She rubbed at the tears angrily. “No matter how much you wish it, or even, maybe, if I wish it. We can’t change life, Ron. It doesn’t work that way.” She backed away further, and felt the doorframe behind her. “It doesn’t work that way.” She stepped into the house. Closed the door.

Ron stood still, and silent, for a long time. Finally he moved. He found a pencil, thick paper, and wrote.

“Nicky. It can work that way. Ron.” He slipped it into a large envelope, with the burnt corner of a document, a document authenticated by a sea captain.

*****​

Father pressed the doorbell, despite the “Out of Order” message stuck to it with tape. He rapped his knuckles on the door. Miss Mingostone opened it up from inside. “Mr Moppet,” she said.

“Miss Mangostone, what did you do with them?” Father asked, fast and clear.

Jack appeared behind her shoulder. Miss Mingostone stepped back, showing Father into the flat. She glanced at Jack before she spoke. It was no use pretending that she didn’t know what he was talking about. “I...” She stopped, took a moment to compose herself, and spoke. “I gave them to Ron.”

Father gasped for breath, falling back onto her sofa bed, feeling weak. “No,” he said.

Her voice was quiet. “I’m sorry.”

Father leapt up, and yelled, his face close to hers. “No. Sorry is not enough, it’s never enough. You gave my life into the hands of that Pirate! You’re fired, Miss Mingostone, matter of fact, I never even called for you in the first place.”

Fired. Mingostone blinked. “Father, Bo, Mr Moppet, I beg you to reconsider, please.”

“You are fired, Miss Mingostone.” His voice changed from angry to bitter. “And I hope I never see you in my house again.”

Jack started forward, but Miss Mingostone laid a hand on his arm, holding him back.

The door slammed, and Father was gone.

“What have I done?” Jack whispered hoarsely.

Miss Liza Eewopp Mingostone rounded on him, her eyes flashing. “Nothing you haven’t done before,” she said. “You have ruined my life. Again. And I won’t take it any longer, Jack. No further. From now on, you are on your own.” She would have stormed from the flat, but it was her own. Instead she dropped onto the sofa-bed, and wept. After a moment, Jack left the house, and as the door closed softly behind him, he felt as if his heart had shattered into a thousand pieces.


*****​

Aunt Dan-Dan swallowed the snail, burped, and hung from a tree limb by his toes. It was a random ritual, but, he was a very random kind of person.

*****​

“The fact is,” Christy said, pacing once again in Adam’s study. “The fact is, legally, we are not married.”

Adam rested back in a squeaky leather chair. “Oh,” he said.

“Which basically means,” Christy went on. “You know what? I don’t know what it means.” She placed a hand over her forehead. “I’m confused again, Adam. I don’t know what to do.”

“What does your heart tell you?” Adam asked.

“I don’t know. It tells me too many things. It tells me one thing, then does a One Eighty and yells at me for listening to it in the first place!”

Izzy, the brilliant white cat, leapt elegantly from the top shelf of the bookcase, and formed into Isabelle. “You should slow down,” she said. “Doctor’s orders.”

“Izzy, you are not a Doctor. Your not even a Quack. You’re not even a dog.”

Izzy clawed at Adam’s leg, then jumped into his lap. “Maybe not,” she said. “But I know what I want.” She rubbed her head against Adam’s chest. “And you don’t.”

“You’re right,” Christy said, holding her palms flat out in front of her. “I don’t know what the heck I want. And I don’t even know if I want it.” She shoved her hands into the back pockets of her jeans. “Adam, what do you do if you love more than one person with all your heart?”

Adam stroked Izzy’s soft fur. “You can only love one person with all of your heart,” he said.

Christy gave him a sceptical glance, and perched on the edge of his desk. “What do you do?”

“You find the greater love,” Adam answered.

“I wish, for once, that I knew what you were talking about.”

Adam spoke quietly in his deep voice. “Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life.”

“Ron?” Christy questioned.

“Ron didn’t lay down his life,” Adam replied. “It was taken from him.”

“You know what?” Christy stood up, and walked to the door. “That didn’t really help much.” She walked out, and the door banged shut.

*****​

“It’s over,” Father said, bursting through the doors of the Wilson’s company.

“Over so soon, and we hadn’t even begun?” Mr Harvey said. He pointed to a stack of law books on the desk. “I was just beginning.”

Suzan entered with a mug of tea for Mr Harvey. Father took it from her and drank deeply. “I needed that,” he said. Suzan rolled her eyes and left the office to get another.

“The document is gone,” Father said. “It’s gone.”

“And with it, apparently, your only hope,” Mr Harvey stated.

“Without it, Mother and I...Christy and I are not married. Not legally.”

“Then marry her,” Mr Harvey said.

“What?! How?”

“I don’t know much about such matters, but traditionally, you ask a woman.”

Father drained the tea in one gulp. “She’s already married,” he said sadly.

“I thought you just said...”

“Not to me! To Ron!”

“Ahh. Aah.” Mr Harvey frowned deeply. “Then you shall have to un-marry her.”

Suzan came in with another tea. Father took it. “Keep them coming,” he said. “And get Mr Harvey one next time, too.”

*****​

Vic tossed a stick for the Dog. It was later. They were at the park. The Dog dashed away, and caught it in his teeth. “Arf rand and ricky?” Dog shouted. Interpreted, What’s brown and sticky. When Vic didn’t respond, the Dog answered his own question. “Rey Rick!” A stick. Very droll. He rolled over in the grass, and panted with his tongue out.

Vic sat under an oak tree, watching the shadows lengthen.

He felt the presence of another person beside him, and turned suddenly. It was the man with dark glasses, only this time he was not wearing them. “Hello Vic,” the man said.

“Hi.” Vic looked away.

The man crouched beside him. “Mind if I join you?”

Vic shifted over a bit, and the man sat, leaning against the foot of the tree. They didn’t say anything for a while, just watched The Dog chewing the bark off the stick. Eventually, it was Vic who broached the subject. “I know who my dad is,” he said. “It’s you, isn’t it?”

The man nodded. “Yes. Yes, it is.”

“Why’d you never come before?” Vic asked.

Ron smiled sadly. “Oh, I wanted to,” he said. “But, things always got in the way.”

“Things?”

“Life, and its acquaintances.”

“Yeah. Huh.” Vic stared straight ahead of him. The Dog ripped a sizable chuck of bark off the bone of the stick, and bared his teeth teasingly at Vic.

“But it didn’t mean I’d forgotten you, Vic. I often thought of you.”

“Yeah, well, it wasn’t enough was it?” Vic stood up. “Dad, you weren’t there for me. Father was.”

“What?” Ron’s face crumpled. He got up quickly. “Bo Moppet is no more your father, than this tree is a watermelon, Vic.”

“So? He may not be all that, but,” Vic stopped. “He was there none the same.”

Ron threw up his hands, the sleeves of his light brown jacket falling back over a gold watch. “I don’t believe this!”

“Believe it,” Vic said. “I already chose my Dad, and...” He swallowed. He stood up quickly. "And it isn’t you.” He ran, past the Dog who chased at his heals. Ron stood watching them, then folded his arms, and rested his chin on his hands.

“I’m your dad, Vic,” he muttered, though the boy could certainly not hear him. “Whether you like it or not, I can’t change that.”
 

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You know... I'm getting fascinated with these chapters of yours Bo.

The bit with Harvey makes me laugh. And DanDan was that kind of a random person, funny.

The scenes with Christy and Ron and then Vic and Ron were especially well done. Both retreating from the life they can't have for the life they already have.

And the scene with the Coles... Another hexcellent scene.
And it sums up my own feelings regarding my character-creation plans. Sometimes I feel like I don't know what I want when I know just a little part of what I want.
But enough of me... The scene at the Cole household was another boo-tiful part of the story.

Keep it coming, we can take it. Wonder if I should get some tissues or teddy bears for the rest of the group.
Hey Liiiiissssa! We're gonna need those teddy bears again!
 

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Hey Bo... Finished my story... Now, then...
Could you please finish this one of yours? By that, please post the rest?
Look forward to reading it hopefully soon.
 

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A really short chapter!!!

Chapter 9: Stars…

Night fell. Crickets chirped. Father fell asleep at the desk in his office. He’d been poring over the law books until the room grew dark, then he’d switched on a overhead lamp and kept reading. Suzan had been pouring tea until Father fell asleep, then she slipped off home. Mr Harvey snored with his feet up on the table.

Mr Cole lay awake under the thin sheets, listening to the sort purring breath of his wife beside him, and the quiet snores of the triplets in the next room. His sister’s problems kept him awake, staring at the hazy darkness.

Miss Mingostone sat in front of the tv switching channel each minute, watching but not seeing. Jack lay on a beat-up old double bed in his flat, thinking of Liza, and Don Canolli, and Ron. He wondered when life had become so complicated.

Vic tossed and turned under his quilt, fighting an inner battle. Viq had fallen asleep upside down, tangled in his covers. Vibs snored loudly with an open mouth.

Aunt Dan-Dan slept in an upside down umbrella, and dreamed of cows and walking sticks.

Above, in her room, Mother sat wide-awake on a window seat, looking out through the glass at the stars far above.

At Wilson’s, Father jolted out of sleep. It took him a moment to find his bearings, then he stood up, and felt himself walking to the exit. He pushed the door open slowly, and stood outside in the bracing chill of the night air, watching the stars.

Ron lay on his couch, asleep. But he too seemed to feel a call, and woke. He pulled back the curtains, and looked up above. The crystal clear sky shone with a scattering of stars, as if some unseen hand had thrown them there to bring light to darkness.

A shooting star rushed overhead. Mother saw it. Father. Ron.

Some say that when two people stand together beneath a shooting star, they are destined to be together forever, but what of three apart? Do they pass by on a street, disappear into the night, never to be seen again. Mother closed her eyes. She welcomed the soothing blackness, and slept.

To Be COntinued...
 

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There's something soothing about this chapter. Short, but gets across a message of its own. Everybody in their own homes, at night, individually... Yet connected by the unfathomable sprawl of night as they ponder their troubles.
Nice Bo... Bring on the next part.
 
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