Onath, I really like your puppets. I think that your original video is well shot, but it seems to play on the college stereotype that doesn't really exist. I just graduated from college (though mine was defined by nerdiness, not the typical college scene), and I think that your dorm idea sounds good. College students are certainly vulgar, but not even close to the amount that the video portrays. It seems to be vulgarity for the sake of shock value. I think that college students respond to two types of comedy: that which pertains to them (weird roommates, parties, staying at the library, fun memories on the quads) and that which is really awkward (see The Office for that type of humor; lots of silent moments and inappropriate comments. Political incorrectness is certainly a hit for people in their late teens and early twenties). If you make it relevant to them, they'll respond. I, for example, have a roommate that just bought a squirrel trap and plans to catch, skin, and eat squirrels. I'm still reeling from the whole concept. We live in a city, no less! Anyway, that's an example of something weird (but true) that gets tons of laughs.
Best of luck!