Prawnie, that was a fantastic last chapter! I like how you included a bunch of us as brothers and sisters, with just slight changes to our names (Eddy, David, Elizabeth - I'm guessing that's me, if I'm wayyy off base, well oops). The touching things he said about his friends, so sweet. The looking down past the floor to Steve, love it.
Great stuff, I really can't wait for the next story!