Misskermie
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Sorry! But you know what? Here is part two...No... NO! WHY WOULD YOU STOP AT....
AGHHHHH!!!
Because of you, I have to be Piggy's bodyguard, because I don't know what's going to happen next!
Hooray for police!!!Sorry! But you know what? Here is part two...
Chapter 9: The Arrest, The Vicory, The Love
"FREEZE! YOU'RE UNDER ARREST!!!"
It was a police officer! Thank goodness, thought Miss Piggy. "B-But how did you get here?" "Didn't think I had a cell phone, dearie?" Said Piggy. "NOOOOOOOO!!!!!" screamed Autumn.
"It's time to announce the winner of the Miss Bogen County beauty pageant!" Here it comes, she thought. "First runner up: Debbie Sue Anderson!" The crowd cheered. "And the winner is..." Here it is... She thought. "MISS PIGGY!!!!" "Thank you! Thank you! Oh, Debbie Sue! Oh, Mary Jane! Thank you! I would just like to say. This is he happiest moment, of my-". And then she saw Him. The most wonderful thing she had ever seen. It was a handsome frog (and if you've seen TMM you know who it is!)
WoW! Autumn DOES die! YaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaY!!!this was awesome this was gonna be my ending but you did it every well in my ending piggy had aged and her and autumn remeet and she shoves autumn in to a pot of molted lava...I'm a bit dark...
sorry I don't getta lot of spare time and I'm a really slow writer.The chapters are just too short and mostly consist of dialog. If you would add more descriptions to what's happening, the fanfic would be much more enjoyable. I'm not saying the story's bad, not at all, but it could be much better.