Bride of Labyrinth

Leyla

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BEEEEAAAAUUUUREGARD!

HI! You're writing a story! That's great! I'm really very very happy to see you writing again! That's very fun! And I would LOVE to review it... but I have two itty bitty problems.

I haven't seen Labryrinth since I was seven. I think. I'm not sure. It's been a while though. So... I don't really remember who anyone is. I think David Bowie was in it. Maybe he was Jareth. Maybe he was Sarah. The fact is, if you hadn't mentioned the name Sarah to me recenty, I woud have no idea there was a Sarah. There's a big fury cute thing in there too some where. And the scary guy with the snow globes. Was he good? Evil? I don't know that either.

So, that's one itty bitty problem. The other one is that I have not, technically, read more than the title. The Bride of Labyrinth.

So, I have to review based on that.
First of all... "The" I have always like the word "the" except for that brief period in Grade 1 when I forgoet how to spell it,and wanted to spell it "teh". But after that, we were cool. It is a useful article, AND it can be pronounced in two ways, depending of if there's a vowel involved, or if Kermit wants to be flashy.

Second of all... Bride, well now. HEre we go. I like brides. I want to be one, which is definitely and influence. And... even if the bride isn't PIggy... well, I still approve. <applauds> Bride. Good.

Of... ah, of. You are short and come out as to on my cell phone when I am texting. You are another gramatical thing. I don't know what in english. I learned all my grammar in french. In french, you are de, which is sometimes and article, and sometimes a conjunction, and often times a real headache. Even the french are guessing... yes, that's true. Ah, de. Which has also just two letters, even though two has three, and three has five, and five has four, which makes no sense to me.

Finally... Labyrinth. Labyrinth...we've had our rocky times, my friend. Mostly becasue it took me three attempts to spell you the first time. You are a fun word though... a party word, especially if we get into the extensions, such as when you are an adjective, and are thus called labyrinthine. And I like that word. Even though it too is hard to spell.

So...in short, Beau... your title held worlds of meaning for me, and my exhaustion has nothing to do with that. Oh, look at the time.... two hours, 56 minutes left for possible sleep, hooray!
 
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