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hey all, this is my first fanficton, basicly describing how my fan character, Midnight, came to be with the muppets.
chapter 1: The Nightmare Begins
It was a cool fall evening in Canterlot. The sun began to sink below the horizon, and the moon would soon be out, full in all of its glory. This story starts off with our, with our main herione, Midnight, walking peacefully down the road to the royal canterlot palace. She lived here with her mother, Princess Luna. Her aunt Celestia also made short aprences, randomly at times. She had her own palace in the main part of Canterlot. She had not been over lately, however. it seemed that Luna and Celestai were almost worlds away, the only thing keeping them lightly in touch were their duties to raise the sun and moon every day. But tonight seemed, diferent somehow. Midnight could not place what was wrong with the world, but she knew deep down: somthing was about to happen. As she started to walk the steps to her mother's palace, she stopped to listen. Two ponies were inside, yelling at the top of their lungs at each other. Them she reconized the voices: they were her aunt Celestia and her mother, Luna! Slowly, she crouched to the ground, waiting till the sisters calmed themselves. But that calm never came. Insted, Midnight heard the whole argument: "Why must my night be so short! Screamed Luna, "and yet you, dear sister, get the best part of the day: the day itself!" This is when her aunt got mad. " How dare YOU complain about our duties!" Celestia yelled. "We both agreed that i would get the day, and you the night!"
"well, Celestia, all i am asking is the night to be a little longer than the day."
"By how many minetes?"
"Well, how about..... 5 hours."
"5 HOURS?!"
"Yes, that is my final offer: take it or leave it."
"And what if i refuse?"
Midnight's mother let out a dark chuckle: "Then, my dear sister, i will not lower the moon in the sky!"
MIdnight was shocked. her eyes glazed over in horror. how could her mother say these things?
Her thoughts were cutt of by Celestia's response
"Luna, um, sister... what is that.... gahering by your mane?"
"Oh, dear sister." her mother began "think of it as a, how should i say it, business partner. He will give me the power to resist you, take over our kingdom, and all he asks for in return is for me to banish you to the moon."
Midnight was cowering in fear. she started to shake. She didnt realize, however, that the constant shaking was moving her closer to the palace common room where the too sisters were debating. soon, she was noticlbe, away from her hiding place.
"Ah, Midnight. NIce of You to join us."
Celestia turned to her niece.
"Midnight, go to Sr. Starswirl The Bearded house. now!"
"Celestia, silence your self! My daughter wants to be with me! Come here, sweetie. come closer to mommy."
"You aare nott my mom!" Midnight stuttered
"Well, of corse i am!"
" i know you look like my mommy, but you are diferent. My mommy would never talk to aunt Celestia like that!
"NONSENSE!" Luna roared! "you shall come with me and like it!"
NO!
Midnight turned to see her aunt sheilding her with magic
"GO NOW!"
she started to leave. she ran down the steps, out into the main plaza of canterlot. when her hooves started to ached from running to hard, she started to fly. somtimes being an alicorn had its benifits.
However, right before she got to her old mentors house, a black, starry mist stopped her path. She looked, horrified at the mass. She started to back away, then a familar, but altered, voice filled her ears.
" Come to your mommy, darling"
Then, the mist cleared to give the view of where the voice was coming from: it was her mother. but, she looked so diferent. First, she had fangs. Her color was from pulelish blue to a dark, almost black purple. Her eyes were like a snakes. And the worst part: her hair. it was made up of the same starry mist that had blocked Midnight to her mentors home. Then, it finaly dawned on her: that was also the same substance that was on her mane earlier!
She started to back away again.Then, the mass reached out. and it.... started to grow up her leg. It was changing her aparance, just like it had done to her mom. It changed her coat from a dark pink to a complete black. Next, it changed her mane color from a light green to a deep purple, with light blue stripes streaking acrossed. And finaly, her eyes changed from a green to a dark blue.
The power that coarsed through her veins was intense. It was too intense.
The last thing she remebered was looking up at her mom's satified glare.
more to come later!
chapter 1: The Nightmare Begins
It was a cool fall evening in Canterlot. The sun began to sink below the horizon, and the moon would soon be out, full in all of its glory. This story starts off with our, with our main herione, Midnight, walking peacefully down the road to the royal canterlot palace. She lived here with her mother, Princess Luna. Her aunt Celestia also made short aprences, randomly at times. She had her own palace in the main part of Canterlot. She had not been over lately, however. it seemed that Luna and Celestai were almost worlds away, the only thing keeping them lightly in touch were their duties to raise the sun and moon every day. But tonight seemed, diferent somehow. Midnight could not place what was wrong with the world, but she knew deep down: somthing was about to happen. As she started to walk the steps to her mother's palace, she stopped to listen. Two ponies were inside, yelling at the top of their lungs at each other. Them she reconized the voices: they were her aunt Celestia and her mother, Luna! Slowly, she crouched to the ground, waiting till the sisters calmed themselves. But that calm never came. Insted, Midnight heard the whole argument: "Why must my night be so short! Screamed Luna, "and yet you, dear sister, get the best part of the day: the day itself!" This is when her aunt got mad. " How dare YOU complain about our duties!" Celestia yelled. "We both agreed that i would get the day, and you the night!"
"well, Celestia, all i am asking is the night to be a little longer than the day."
"By how many minetes?"
"Well, how about..... 5 hours."
"5 HOURS?!"
"Yes, that is my final offer: take it or leave it."
"And what if i refuse?"
Midnight's mother let out a dark chuckle: "Then, my dear sister, i will not lower the moon in the sky!"
MIdnight was shocked. her eyes glazed over in horror. how could her mother say these things?
Her thoughts were cutt of by Celestia's response
"Luna, um, sister... what is that.... gahering by your mane?"
"Oh, dear sister." her mother began "think of it as a, how should i say it, business partner. He will give me the power to resist you, take over our kingdom, and all he asks for in return is for me to banish you to the moon."
Midnight was cowering in fear. she started to shake. She didnt realize, however, that the constant shaking was moving her closer to the palace common room where the too sisters were debating. soon, she was noticlbe, away from her hiding place.
"Ah, Midnight. NIce of You to join us."
Celestia turned to her niece.
"Midnight, go to Sr. Starswirl The Bearded house. now!"
"Celestia, silence your self! My daughter wants to be with me! Come here, sweetie. come closer to mommy."
"You aare nott my mom!" Midnight stuttered
"Well, of corse i am!"
" i know you look like my mommy, but you are diferent. My mommy would never talk to aunt Celestia like that!
"NONSENSE!" Luna roared! "you shall come with me and like it!"
NO!
Midnight turned to see her aunt sheilding her with magic
"GO NOW!"
she started to leave. she ran down the steps, out into the main plaza of canterlot. when her hooves started to ached from running to hard, she started to fly. somtimes being an alicorn had its benifits.
However, right before she got to her old mentors house, a black, starry mist stopped her path. She looked, horrified at the mass. She started to back away, then a familar, but altered, voice filled her ears.
" Come to your mommy, darling"
Then, the mist cleared to give the view of where the voice was coming from: it was her mother. but, she looked so diferent. First, she had fangs. Her color was from pulelish blue to a dark, almost black purple. Her eyes were like a snakes. And the worst part: her hair. it was made up of the same starry mist that had blocked Midnight to her mentors home. Then, it finaly dawned on her: that was also the same substance that was on her mane earlier!
She started to back away again.Then, the mass reached out. and it.... started to grow up her leg. It was changing her aparance, just like it had done to her mom. It changed her coat from a dark pink to a complete black. Next, it changed her mane color from a light green to a deep purple, with light blue stripes streaking acrossed. And finaly, her eyes changed from a green to a dark blue.
The power that coarsed through her veins was intense. It was too intense.
The last thing she remebered was looking up at her mom's satified glare.
more to come later!