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*sighs* I really hate to do this, but I think I'm gonna put this story on hold for the time being. It's just that...well...when I started writing this, I was basically a new member, new to the fan fiction board. I wanted to get a story I was comfortable writing, so I came up with this. But the...

I actually want to say this regarding registration: You don't have to post everyday. This is a fun thing, so if you can only post every couple days, that is fine. You never have to feel obligated to post on this.

Looks pretty good so far...something I really like is the playfulness and teasing between the band members that you displayed. It really gives a great picture of how close they are to each other. One other thing...pay extra attention to your tenses. It seemed that you kept switching back...

Some songs, anyone?

Finally...my vision is back here...it took quite awhile. Anyone up for a campfire?

That is a good idea, Vincent...we can teleport back to our camping spot

Oh great, now not only do we have to worry about Grace starting trouble, but now Yuna! :p EDIT: Z-z-z-z-z-z

(I thought the fish thing wasn't evil...) Ziffeled. (But OK, Let's just go with that, then)

(I thought you already were insane? So the crystal fixed itself, then?)

(I'm officially confused)

(We do have that Q&A/info page...)

(I think so...except I don't think it's been determined yet as to whether the crystal destruction worked to destroy the illusion)

(In that case, why don't we make it an illusion that somehow only Sarge and Grace could see, so we broke the crystal in an attempt to try to stop it.) EDIT: ziffeled.

(But when I was in the water I couldn't see them either.)

(But are they actually there, or are they illusions? And why can Grace see them?)

(Wait...so the bat demons are real? I thought they were just illusions that Sarge and grace had somehow seen)

(Elizabeth never actually appeared to me in my eyes. So I dunno. I thought only Sarge and Grace could see the illusion) EDIT: I was ziffeled. And am I the only one rollling on the floor laughing about how we don't know our own storyline?

I'm still waiting to regain my vision...I'm blind temporarily...

*falls to ground at sight of the blue light, shielding eyes* Woah! It's practically blinding me!

*blasts pure energy toward the crystal*