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Thanks Ru! I've always felt aspects of the Muppet monsters could be horrific if treated more seriously...perhaps it only takes a good Hitler rant to bring out the beast in them, hm? I give you... Part Thirty-two The sounds of whining power drills driving home screws, shouts and footsteps...

------------- That is absolutely a boss hat. -------------

----------------- Heh...when you live around Muppets, some of it rubs off. I believe it's called the Rube Goldberg Muppatronic Effect. Cute beginning...my only gripe is that you have a bad tendency to mix verb tenses (past, present, etc) -- stick to one. Preferably simple past tense. Thanks...

------------ Er...the fact that there still exists such a thing as the "teen birth rate" proves the world is still very, very messed up, guys... ------------

Was it doing the backstroke or the crawl? --------------

--------------- Welcome in Karamazova! Neat screenname. Suddenly I am picturing the Russian Cossack pigs dancing from TMS... :concern: ---------------

------------- You KNOW this made me laugh. :news: Although I always pictured Newsie's robe collection to be longer...he'd be mortified to indecently show off his knees! VERY cute drawing... and the pouty snout looks about right to me! (I can just hear Fozzie in the background in the...

------------ Aaaaaaand we start off, leggies and jecklefins, with Rizzo and Gonzo as Pinky and the Brain! Always love the buddy jibing between those two. ALL the dialogue, as usual, is perfectly captured here; you really have a handle on the interwoven relationships between our favorite troupe...

------------- Blue: Mm. Cow. Nom nom. Yip yip yip. Cow. Mmmm. Pink: Mmm mmm cow. Yip yip yip. *noticing the martians are chewing up all the chocolate bunnies butt-first* Uh...guys...generally we start with the ears... *they stare up, mouths open, chocolate dribbling out, perplexed* ...Never...

------------------ As far as editing goes -- yes, PLEASE do so BEFORE posting. I usually let mine sit a day or two before a re-read and edit then. It does tend to stop the grammatical errors which a spellcheck won't notice. But that's the only quibble I have with these two segments. Gonzo being...

----------- Just no ELP...please, no.... ------------

I personally know at least two people who would LOVE those. --------------

---------------- "Firefly" still rules. Shiny. --------------

-------------- "Nothing is foolproof to a sufficiently talented fool." ---------------

------------- LOL got a power girdle to go with that? ------------

What's your fave? I still love "Hamlet" the best. Everybody dies. Hee hee... ----------------------

--------------- Heh heh heh heh...like, totally, y'know? :sing: Ah, Muppet gossip. The bane of everyone's existence except Fleet Scribbler. VERY cute that the longtime steady couple should have to face a bunch of snotnosed gossiphounds...or mongeese...whatever. Nothing matters but the tuneage...

http://www.boneroom.com/bone/bone.html Not all that expensive. ---------------

------------ The frog/pig breakup scene MAY have been filmed, as in the Blooper Reel there is a flubbed scene which is clearly taken from that (which also has Kermit giving Piggy a kiss when she messes up her line). Also, the bit at the movie's end where Piggy is holding the UNTORN wedding pic...

------------------ Er...what exactly is "concrit"? I don't find it in the OED...:confused: A promising start, though I too will quibble at the largess of run-on sentences. Everyone's guilty of those, myself included -- but try to be conscious about your style as you go, or at least in editing...