YAY! Another song. EXCELLENT!
I think, once again, you did a great job! NOW I get to give you some advice. It's free, so it's your lucky day. Hahaha
BELT it out! I think you have a great potential...but when you hold back, you can't get the full range of your voice. NO hesitation! I'll use my teacher's ruler and thwack the hesitation out of you.
If you're gonna sing, be PROUD and BELT! ^_^
So now take that, go back out there and do it again! Cause I wanna hear more.
I still say we should all do karaoke. Singing's too fun to be all self concious about it!