They are almost always like this:"I lost something real important, only no one ever said why it was," He placed the empty chest flat with its open depth making an almost level surface, silently willing the last five items to stop swaying with his hands. "…and now my daddy's mad at me..again."
"Lost somethin'?" The pink fraggle asked as a smaller green fraggle stole another peek around his yellow tufted tail.
"Yup." The gorg replied, adding a broken trumpet and a blackened cauldron.
"Up…up…in the..the…" The fraggle pointed at the strangle new blue span above them.
"Sky. " Junior yelled from above as he started to climb yet again. "Yeah, I threw it away up n' here so I figure all I have to do is get up to the spot it disappeared and pull it out! Easy as garlic peach pie."
"Ew…" The fraggle wrinkled his nose at the thought of the two tastes together. "Papa says high places..dan..ger..ous…"
"Aw, that's 'cause your daddy's a fraggle," Junior said with a laugh, carrying up a last heavy looking book. "Everything's scary to them 'cause they're tiny..You're real tiny to, should you be out here? Your mommies and daddies must be worried."
Only sometimes a bit worst with the dialogue and paragraphs not even starting on any sort of a new line and broken code from text formatting that no longer works ."I lost something real important, only no one ever said why it was," He placed the empty chest flat with its open depth making an almost level surface, silently willing the last five items to stop swaying with his hands. "…and now my daddy's mad at me..again."
"Lost somethin'?" The pink fraggle asked as a smaller green fraggle stole another peek around his yellow tufted tail.
"Yup." The gorg replied, adding a broken trumpet and a blackened cauldron.
"Up…up…in the..the…" The fraggle pointed at the strangle new blue span above them.
"Sky. " Junior yelled from above as he started to climb yet again. "Yeah, I threw it away up n' here so I figure all I have to do is get up to the spot it disappeared and pull it out! Easy as garlic peach pie."
"Ew…" The fraggle wrinkled his nose at the thought of the two tastes together. "Papa says high places..dan..ger..ous…"
"Aw, that's 'cause your daddy's a fraggle," Junior said with a laugh, carrying up a last heavy looking book. "Everything's scary to them 'cause they're tiny..You're real tiny to, should you be out here? Your mommies and daddies must be worried."
This is more all the older FR fics that I've found (most of them at least)...Well, if you're referring to My Harmonica, and Fraggle stories written by Effy...well, they have a very specific format. I actually found that was the very magic of them. The strange grammar (due to Russian influence), and the formatting. That was what made them special to me. But I can also understand why they would be hard to read.
It's weird that I have the trouble I do because my actual reading comprehension level itself has always been very very high..It's just, I can't see the words so much to use my understanding when they are all mushed together . (And while speech to text is good for writing sometimes, I don't like a text to speech reading program if I can help it because 1) With spaces in a story I don't need the extra help and 2) Golly, most of their voices are annoyingI don't have that problem ... but I dislike having to imagine where the sentence or the paragraph ends. Imagine reading ancient texts, which didn't use punctuation or line breaks or word breaks at all. THAT is something that I admire (or pity) people who study that sort of thing. That would drive me insane.
It looks like there are only twoHow many stories are there in the "My Harmonica" fanfic series? I've read the first two, and they were amazing!