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Jareht Kidnaps A Fanfiction Author...it had Jareth kidnapping me for his own amusment....and I'd made friends with Gobo and Hoggle and Kermit.
Well, I have read this, but it's imcomplete. Why did you stop after Chapter 7? I said in my review that I loved it and to post more chapters. What's going on?
 

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Oh ! I kind of ofelt awkward iwith my own writng after the kissing scene . You know where Jareth was repeatedly kissing me....I was unsure on how to make it clear no romance was happening and he was still evil .
 

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Ch. 16
"Hi! I'm Bean!"said Bean Bunny. "And these are my siblings Lugsley and Twitch!"
"Hi Bean I loved The Tale of the Bunny Picnic!"said Dominic.
"It's pretty good even though it's pretty rare and unknown!"Lani agreed.
"Yeah!"Dominic agreed.
"I'm glad you think so!"said Lugsley. "Only Bean was charasmatic enough to become a recurring character though all though Babble and Bebopdadiddildogbop (not sure if I spelled it right) have made some cameos!"
"You could have said carratsmatic!"Dominic told Bean's brother. All the bunnies groaned at Dominic's weak pun.
"Sorry I spend a bit too much time with the bear,"Dominic said shrugging his sholders.
 

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Ch. 16
"Hi! I'm Bean!"said Bean Bunny. "And these are my siblings Lugsley and Twitch!"
"Hi Bean I loved The Tale of the Bunny Picnic!"said Dominic.
"It's pretty good even though it's pretty rare and unknown!"Lani agreed.
"Yeah!"Dominic agreed.
"I'm glad you think so!"said Lugsley. "Only Bean was charasmatic enough to become a recurring character though all though Babble and Bebopdadiddildogbop (not sure if I spelled it right) have made some cameos!"
"You could have said carratsmatic!"Dominic told Bean's brother. All the bunnies groaned at Dominic's weak pun.
"Sorry I spend a bit too much time with the bear,"Dominic said shrugging his sholders.
Too much time with Fozzie? (LOL!) Good one Dom!

MORE PLEASE!

Wha??

:concern:: I said I would like more of an amazing story with stunts, cannons...

Gonzo, this story is different. We are not into that fun... yet.

:concern:: Put that would be part of my act.

Geez, Gonzo! You can't wait! You're really impatient!

GRRRRRR! Now I hear a crazy man in the background. Ugh!
 

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Too much time with Fozzie? (LOL!) Good one Dom!

MORE PLEASE!

Wha??

:concern:: I said I would like more of an amazing story with stunts, cannons...

Gonzo, this story is different. We are not into that fun... yet.

:concern:: Put that would be part of my act.

Geez, Gonzo! You can't wait! You're really impatient!

GRRRRRR! Now I hear a crazy man in the background. Ugh!
How about that for the big rescue scene later in the story?
 

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Pssst! Hey Dom! There has to be more story. I'm waaiting!
 

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Ok ok! Next Chapter!
"Hello,"Dominic..."Hoggle!"
"Why hello there,"Hoggle said. "You must be Dominic and Lani...welcome welcome!"
"Thank you!"Dominic said. "It's so nice to meet you all....."Dominic was cut off rform his greeting as clouds formed over his head...and the wind picked up, and blew Lani and Dominic off!
"Hold on!"Lani said grabbing his arm.
"Yes!"Dominic said. "DOn't be afraid!"
"I'm not!"Lani said nervously....but she knew it was a lie.
"Gotcha!"Jareth said smirking evilly. "Well I do believe I have the two biggest Muppet fans in existence.."He laughed evily stroking each of their heads with one hand....
 
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