The Fall of the Great Gorg Empire

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PROLOGUE

Thousands and thousands of years ago there once existed a race of ogre-like creatures known as Gorgs. They all lived independantly together in clusters of small clans in a spacious countryside. They had built makeshift tents out of sticks and large pieces of fabric material. The males all cut the wood to form the sticks and the females sewed the coverings and they were all very pleased with their shelters.

During the day the Gorg children loved to play games together while the adults did all the work including cooking, washing and supervising the kids so they didn't start fighting or getting into any other mischief. Some of the kids, particularly the boys, liked to try to catch and play with tiny creatures called Fraggles, who lived in a great big rock filled with catacombs that sat nearby. The adults didn't really care much for the Fraggles, but they did always watch the children to make sure they were not cruel to the little things. They tried to teach them to respect and be humane towards all other species and most of the kids listened to the adults.
However some of them were naughty and loved to torment the poor things. Of course they were immediately reprimanded and punished but still the Fraggles were terrified of the Gorgs and tried their best to avoid being caught.

The Gorgs grew their own food. Nice fresh vegetables. Lettuce, carrots and even radishes.
If it wasn't for the fact that the Fraggles loved the taste of those vegetables, especially the radishes, they probably would have stayed inside their rock and never given the Gorg kids any opportunity to play with them. But the bravest ones always had to sneak an occasional radish out of one of the garden beds and often they were caught and played with. Or sometimes the bravest ones would act as decoys, getting the kids to chase them while their friends collected their food.
Well like I said, the Gorgs didn't really care directly for the Fraggles as such, but they knew they needed to eat too, and there really was plenty for all. So the adults didn't really try to stop them from taking their veggies occasionally. If one of them was in a generous mood he or she might even place a radish right on top of the rock for a Fraggle to find and save them from having to cope with the giant children.

Thus things went on for countless millenia and the Gorgs were a very happy self-contained empire with no one individual Gorg ruling over any of the others. But one day a young boy Gorg said to a young girl Gorg privately, "One day I shall appoint myself as King of our race and you dear Grundlestitch shall become my Queen when we are wed."
"You're so sweet Bronkton." She embraced him tenderly adding, "And when our reign is established you must pass some laws that will put a stop to all this kindness towards those tiny Fraggles. I can't stand the little wretches."
"Anything to make you happy Grundlestitch," said he kissing her on one cheek. "I'll do absolutely anything at all for you my darling. And who knows? One day we may even be able to rule the universe as well as our own Gorg empire."

But of course enough time needed to pass first until they both grew up and were married. And of course it did eventually.

END OF PROLOGUE
 

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Very good and interesting so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! Great creativity on the Gorg names, by the way!
 

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Actually my friends I wrote this off the top of my head last night however while I'm not familiar with Fraggle Rock in full I do remember watching the first season regularly at least. I've remembered that there was an episode that spoke about how a creature half the size of a Gorg called Sir Hubris ruled the universe and the legend was that he went away leaving the Gorgs to rule in his place until the day he returned whereupon the Gorgs were to pack up their possessions and become wanderers throughout the universe giving the crown back to Sir Hubris.
Hmmm. I think I'll put this project on hold and think about it. Maybe I can rewrite the whole start so that it'll tie in more faithfully with the background story presented in the television series.
 

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Well, as I see it, the legend of Sir Huberus SP? is more ancient, and your story may have taken place a bit more recently. Perhaps the gorgs you mentioned in the story are Ma and Pa from the series when they were younger? This would be after Huberus's time, of course. Just making suggestions; take them or leave them as you like.
This is really good, especially for coming off the top of your head quickly! No offense, but I never figured you for the FR type person, so I was surprised when I saw this. It's just that it is so good, that it would be a shame to ditch it.

Have a nice rest of the day,
Kate
 

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I have read something on the net in muppet wiki that has got me thinking.

It says that other Gorgs apparently did indeed exist once but we only ever see the three regular ones that form the family unit. There have been references to Ma's own mother and an ancestor named King Gorgus the Great but no other Gorgs ever appear on the show at all.
I don't intend to abandon my story but I think I should wait awhile and hopefully the season sets will come to Australia soon or some day I'll be able to order them from overseas and if I watch some of the early series through I might get more clear ideas how to present it.
I have an idea of slightly re-writing the prologue so Sir Hubris is the ruler of the universe and the Gorg clans are his respectful subjects and the Gorg reign begins when he goes away appointing the first Gorg king in his stead.
But if God is willing I'll watch Fraggle Rock in sequence some day and get more confidence.

Sorry to disappoint you my friends but I hope I'll be able to let you read the story one day.
 

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You've worked up a pretty interesting story so far, BBG. Take all the time you need to think up more of what to write or revise on. And if you need any help on any FR stuff, you can come to either me or other FR fans on the board.:smile:
 

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That goes for me too. I'm a Fraggle fanatic. lol Nice start though even if some stuff was off I liked where it was heading. Looking foward to seing what else you have in mind.
 

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Gorgs? Where? I was just kidding (Groans)! Great story, Bill bubble Guy. The story sounded more like it was the Storyteller Fraggle's point of view. I will give everyone and Bill Bubble Guy the patience mode. Until then, that was a great start.
 
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