my song

[chestermcdragon]

tell me what you think of this song i wrote
its called "because of her"



who knew that only one day could change my life?
who knew i would cry so hard for saying goodbye?
i think its amazing how one person could leave me completely breathless.
its hard to think that we may never see eachother ever again.

because of you,every car i see i look in to see if its you.
because of you,my whole life has changed.i feel older,i fell wiser,bolder just because of that 1 day.
because of you,everytime i pick up the phone im wishin it was you...


everynight i go to bed,wishin i was with you instead.
they say that there is beauty in goodbyes,but all that is ,is a pack of lies.
just thinking of you,makes me wanna cry.


because of you,every girl i see,i wish she were you.
because of you,i have the feelings i have never had before,wierd,great,sad ones,its messin with my head.
because of you,i cry everyday missing you,depressed,sad,it kinda makes me mad.


everyday when im feeling down,i look at a picture of you,and it makes better inside.
theres not 3 seconds that go by without me thinking of you,i miss so bad,oh its so sad...

because of you,every car i see i look in to see if its you.
because of you,my whole life has changed.i feel older,i fell wiser,bolder just because of that 1 day.
because of you,everytime i pick up the phone im wishin it was you
because of you,every girl i see,i wish she were you.
because of you,i have the feelings i have never had before,wierd,great,sad ones,its messin with my head.
because of you,i cry everyday missing you,depressed,sad,it kinda makes me mad....

because of her...
because of her...
because of her.

 

[Fragglemuppet]

The lyrics were good as far as I could see, but it is pretty hard to tell for sure without music. Maybe you should PM Dan-Dan, him being a musician. He might be able to give you a more educated assessment.

 

[chestermcdragon]

The lyrics were good as far as I could see, but it is pretty hard to tell for sure without music. Maybe you should PM Dan-Dan, him being a musician. He might be able to give you a more educated assessment.

oh ok.thanks!

 

[DanDanStrawberry]

The lyrics are really good, especially considering your age (no offence). Is it based on anything in particular or a particular event? But as our dear chum fragglemuppet states, it's hard to tell without music.

 

[chestermcdragon]

The lyrics are really good, especially considering your age (no offence). Is it based on anything in particular or a particular event? But as our dear chum fragglemuppet states, it's hard to tell without music.

yes,i went to my best friends house.i met this girl.she was pretty,funny,nice,and...now...i REALLY like her.so this song is dedicated to her.thanks for the support.

 

[Fragglemuppet]

Sorry it took me a while to get back to this.
Dear chum, Dan? Aww, thanks!
Chester, have you ever written any type of songs or music before?

 

[ILuVERNIE]

I seriously love that song!!! I write songs, too... but they aren't any good!! And with the song, I would suggest that it go with a rock sound, like, for example, Teddy Geiger or The
Fray!! You know, a style similar to theirs.

 

[chestermcdragon]

Sorry it took me a while to get back to this.
Dear chum, Dan? Aww, thanks!
Chester, have you ever written any type of songs or music before?

no,i havent.

 

[chestermcdragon]

I seriously love that song!!! I write songs, too... but they aren't any good!! And with the song, I would suggest that it go with a rock sound, like, for example, Teddy Geiger or The
Fray!! You know, a style similar to theirs.

lol,thanks!i love the fray.

 

[chestermcdragon]

i wrote another one...i will most likely post it tonight.