ZootyCutie
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Yay! My first non-TMS outline!
What seemed to be just a normal, empty desert was strangely being walked on by ten small children. Well, actually they were Muppets. The leading one was a frog in a leather jacket with sunglasses and fedora. He was known in these parts as Gunhaver. Following him were a whatever in a vest and helmet, a bear with headphones and dogtags, a female pig in a grey jumpsuit, an animal in a red headband, two twins; the male in camoflage and the girl in a red ninja outfit, a green human with no eyes,yet glasses with a red tie, a timid taller one with a black sweater and ski cap and a dog in a grey jacket with five buttons and mirrored sunglasses. They were a group known as the Cheat Commandos. Unknow to them, a young girl a little older than them wearing a blue jumpsuit and eyepatch was spying on them. With her was a bunny wearing the same jumpsuit but wearing a visor. They were known as Blue Lazer, and they wanted to crush the Cheat Commandos.
"How long until we find the Blue Lazer's base, Gunhaver?" asked the whatever. "Pretty soon, Silent Rip. I read about their place on the internet." replied Gunhaver. They weren't even able to move a foot, when out of nowhere a lazer beam headed straight for them. Luckily, it bounced of of the bear, who was know as Crackotage's dogtags. "CHEAT COMMANDOS! PREPARE YOURSELVES!" yelled the Blue Lazer commander. She was the one who fired the lazer. Firebert, the timid one, was so scared from that attack that he ran away meeping like crazy. He didn't pay attention and ran into a rock. Soon a shatter was heard. A lamp was broken. No longer was there a desert scene, it was now a nursery. Action figures shaped like yellow anvils in their costumes were scattered all over the floor. All of them were no longer in the costumes. They were in their normal clothing. They knew they'd be in trouble.
Oooh! Climax! What will happen next?
(Cheat Commandos figures, names and costumes are from homestarrunner.com.)
What seemed to be just a normal, empty desert was strangely being walked on by ten small children. Well, actually they were Muppets. The leading one was a frog in a leather jacket with sunglasses and fedora. He was known in these parts as Gunhaver. Following him were a whatever in a vest and helmet, a bear with headphones and dogtags, a female pig in a grey jumpsuit, an animal in a red headband, two twins; the male in camoflage and the girl in a red ninja outfit, a green human with no eyes,yet glasses with a red tie, a timid taller one with a black sweater and ski cap and a dog in a grey jacket with five buttons and mirrored sunglasses. They were a group known as the Cheat Commandos. Unknow to them, a young girl a little older than them wearing a blue jumpsuit and eyepatch was spying on them. With her was a bunny wearing the same jumpsuit but wearing a visor. They were known as Blue Lazer, and they wanted to crush the Cheat Commandos.
"How long until we find the Blue Lazer's base, Gunhaver?" asked the whatever. "Pretty soon, Silent Rip. I read about their place on the internet." replied Gunhaver. They weren't even able to move a foot, when out of nowhere a lazer beam headed straight for them. Luckily, it bounced of of the bear, who was know as Crackotage's dogtags. "CHEAT COMMANDOS! PREPARE YOURSELVES!" yelled the Blue Lazer commander. She was the one who fired the lazer. Firebert, the timid one, was so scared from that attack that he ran away meeping like crazy. He didn't pay attention and ran into a rock. Soon a shatter was heard. A lamp was broken. No longer was there a desert scene, it was now a nursery. Action figures shaped like yellow anvils in their costumes were scattered all over the floor. All of them were no longer in the costumes. They were in their normal clothing. They knew they'd be in trouble.
Oooh! Climax! What will happen next?
(Cheat Commandos figures, names and costumes are from homestarrunner.com.)