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Hey guys/gals, I made a new fan-fic Please comment what you think and if I should continue, and can you comment what I could do to make it better? Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Introduction
It was a dark and stormy night; the rain was pounding against the rock out in Gorgs’ garden. The path to the radishes was all muddy, so it was unable to cross. This didn’t bother any Fraggle, because they were all in their caves, sound asleep. The rain was good though, it ran down the well and into to pond, helping the Fraggles with all the water sports they did.
All the Fraggles were asleep, having sweet dreams; all except one Fraggle. Mokey sat in her bed, looking up at the colourful painting her special feather. She had a lot of thoughts on her mind, and they were all leading to just one topic. She sighed, putting her hand on her stomach and turning over. She felt a sharp pain in her stomach and groaned, tightening her hand, and then letting it loose stroking her tummy. She tried to be silent by holding her breath when she heard her roommate, Red, start to move.
“Mokey? Are you alright” Mokey closed her eyes, and let out a breath of air,
“Yeah Red, I just can’t seem to fall asleep, that’s all” The sweet voice calmly said.
“Are you sure? With something this big, I know it’s not only about falling asleep, trust me, I think I would know. Do you want me to go and get Boober?”
“It’s alright Red” She groaned, and clenched her stomach again and squeezing her eyes shut.
“I know it’s not alright Mokey, I’m going to get Boober whether you like it or not” The red haired Fraggle got up out of her bed and went to get the Fraggle that Mokey was dating. Mokey reached out to Red,
“Please, Red, please don’t” But she was already gone.
A moment later the two Fraggles appeared, and saw that Mokey was curled up in her bed in pain.
“Mokey!” The moppy haired Fraggle ran over to her and grabbed her hand. “Are you alright Mokey?”
“Yes, I’m alright!” Mokey tried to act like everything was normal, but nothing was normal. Her stomach was filled with pain, and it wouldn’t stop for another week or two, it would just get worse.
Boober looked at the pink Fraggle, and stood in silent for a moment then looked at her stomach. “…How’s the baby?”
Mokey put her light brown coat over her larger-than-usual stomach. “She’s fine” Mokey frowned and tried to look away. But Boober grabbed her head with his hand.
“Look, I know you didn’t want to have a baby, but it’ll be alright. We’ll make sure that she has a lovely life” Boober lightly kissed her forehead, “When is she due again?”
“She’s due in just a couple weeks”
“Well until then, try to get some rest” Boober gave her a small smile and walked out the door.
“You see Mokey, I told you Boober would make it better, now go to sleep, you have a big day coming up” Red winked at Mokey and climbed into her bed.
Mokey sat in her bed with her hand still on her stomach. She closed her eyes and tried to think about everything, it was hard though. Everything was coming so fast. She almost just started going out with Boober, and now she’s pregnant. She just moved caves with Red; her old one was getting too cramped. Her favourite plant Landford had just passed away. It was just too much stuff at one time. Mokey closed her eyes, the only thing she hoped right now was that her baby turned out to be just perfect, and had an amazing life.
Chapter 1: Introduction
It was a dark and stormy night; the rain was pounding against the rock out in Gorgs’ garden. The path to the radishes was all muddy, so it was unable to cross. This didn’t bother any Fraggle, because they were all in their caves, sound asleep. The rain was good though, it ran down the well and into to pond, helping the Fraggles with all the water sports they did.
All the Fraggles were asleep, having sweet dreams; all except one Fraggle. Mokey sat in her bed, looking up at the colourful painting her special feather. She had a lot of thoughts on her mind, and they were all leading to just one topic. She sighed, putting her hand on her stomach and turning over. She felt a sharp pain in her stomach and groaned, tightening her hand, and then letting it loose stroking her tummy. She tried to be silent by holding her breath when she heard her roommate, Red, start to move.
“Mokey? Are you alright” Mokey closed her eyes, and let out a breath of air,
“Yeah Red, I just can’t seem to fall asleep, that’s all” The sweet voice calmly said.
“Are you sure? With something this big, I know it’s not only about falling asleep, trust me, I think I would know. Do you want me to go and get Boober?”
“It’s alright Red” She groaned, and clenched her stomach again and squeezing her eyes shut.
“I know it’s not alright Mokey, I’m going to get Boober whether you like it or not” The red haired Fraggle got up out of her bed and went to get the Fraggle that Mokey was dating. Mokey reached out to Red,
“Please, Red, please don’t” But she was already gone.
A moment later the two Fraggles appeared, and saw that Mokey was curled up in her bed in pain.
“Mokey!” The moppy haired Fraggle ran over to her and grabbed her hand. “Are you alright Mokey?”
“Yes, I’m alright!” Mokey tried to act like everything was normal, but nothing was normal. Her stomach was filled with pain, and it wouldn’t stop for another week or two, it would just get worse.
Boober looked at the pink Fraggle, and stood in silent for a moment then looked at her stomach. “…How’s the baby?”
Mokey put her light brown coat over her larger-than-usual stomach. “She’s fine” Mokey frowned and tried to look away. But Boober grabbed her head with his hand.
“Look, I know you didn’t want to have a baby, but it’ll be alright. We’ll make sure that she has a lovely life” Boober lightly kissed her forehead, “When is she due again?”
“She’s due in just a couple weeks”
“Well until then, try to get some rest” Boober gave her a small smile and walked out the door.
“You see Mokey, I told you Boober would make it better, now go to sleep, you have a big day coming up” Red winked at Mokey and climbed into her bed.
Mokey sat in her bed with her hand still on her stomach. She closed her eyes and tried to think about everything, it was hard though. Everything was coming so fast. She almost just started going out with Boober, and now she’s pregnant. She just moved caves with Red; her old one was getting too cramped. Her favourite plant Landford had just passed away. It was just too much stuff at one time. Mokey closed her eyes, the only thing she hoped right now was that her baby turned out to be just perfect, and had an amazing life.