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This fic may not be what people pave come to expect from me, but sometimes I really feel strongly about something, and I have to express it somehow. And with Earth Day a few weeks away, well, this is the right time for it.
I'll be posting this story one part per day until it's finished. This story's going to be rough enough without long lags to exacerbate the tension.
So...Enjoy. If possible.
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Part 1: Things That Go Blomp in The Night
*
Poncle struggled in Red's hands. "No! NO!"
Red had been diving with her daughter all day, and now she decided to balk? She set the little brown-and-blonde Fraggle down on her feet. "What's the matter?"
"You go!" Poncle commanded, pointing at the pool.
The kid was up to something. She usually was. Red jumped in with a satisfactory but not spectacular splash—she wasn't on the clock at the moment—then surfaced and shook the water out of her face.
"Mama! Catch me!" Poncle cried.
Without waiting for confirmation Poncle leapt. Red dodged back so Poncle wouldn't land on her head, and let the water do most of the catching. After the initial splash she grabbed Poncle up and threw her into the air. The Fragling kicked and squealed with glee before smacking face-down into the water.
Mokey was sitting back, doodling in her diary. The picture had begun as a sketch of the swimming hole with a few Fraggles in it, and had expanded to include all of the Great Hall. Wembley was watching, his tail wagging slowly and peacefully. Sometimes it seemed that whole sections of the picture appeared suddenly, as if by magic. When that happened he knew he had dozed off. Which was okay; it was a fine day to be lazy.
Gobo was with Mokey and Wembley, partly watching the rumpus in the swimming hole and partly just sitting back and enjoying his family's company. Wembley's tail stilled, and when Gobo looked at his friend's face his eyes were closed. Mischievously Gobo positioned himself so he was almost nose to nose with Wembley, careful not to touch him and wake him up. Then he waited.
Wembley's eyelids soon fluttered. When he saw Gobo staring at him at point-blank range he squawked with surprise, bumping Gobo's nose. Gobo laughed. "Still having trouble sleeping at night, Wembley?"
"Nah, not any longer," Wembley said.
Mokey paused in her drawing and asked, "Have you been sleeping badly?"
"Well, I was for a little while. I kept hearing weird sounds."
"What kind of sounds?" Mokey asked.
"Well, first something like cracking rocks. SPACK! And then a slurping water noise, blomp blomp blomp blomp. The water sounds go on and on."
Mokey asked Gobo, "Have you heard it too?"
He shook his head. "Not me. Wembley's got the best ears in the rock. He can hear stuff that the rest of us can't. Like water in rocks."
"What do you think it is?" she asked.
Wembley shrugged. "I don't know. It sounds far away, deep down, so I guess it's got nothing to do with us. And it's been going on for days, so I'm used to it. It still wakes me up, but I go right back to sleep again."
*
In his kitchen, Boober was making soup. The water had come to a boil, and he was about to scrape a load of chopped vegetables from the cutting board into the pot when he stopped and sniffed. Something didn't smell right. Was it the wood in the stove? He opened the door, and the smoke seemed to be normal. With the pot lid he fanned the steam toward his face, and, yes, there was a strange quality to it. He didn't like it, and he wouldn't permit it in his food. He put on a pair of mitts and carefully lifted the large pot off the stove. He carried it to a blind tunnel that led to a crack leading both up and down into darkness, and poured the water out.
Then he carried the pot through the Great Hall and to the source of the stream that fed the swimming hole. He set the pot under a ledge and watched the water flow into it.
Was it his imagination, or was it...kind of fizzy?
Nah, he thought, it was just turbulence making the water look bubbly. He let the pot fill, then carried it to the kitchen and set it on the stove. The water looked all right. He stirred it. It still fizzed a little, but it didn't smell like Whoopie Water. He got a little with a wooden spoon, and was about to taste it when a drop fell onto the oven top and splattered the burner below the pot. Orange flame puffed out. Boober yelped and jumped back, shocked.
The flame died out in moments. Unable to believe what he had seen, Boober scooped some more water—gingerly, with the spoon held out at arm's length—and then flicked it onto the stovetop. This time he saw the flame burst from the water itself. When it burned out, the water was left.
*
"Out of the swimming hole! Everybody out of the water! Now!"
Everybody turned to stare at Boober, who had run into the Great Hall in a panic. Red, who was treading water, said, "What's your problem, Boober?"
"Get out of there! Hurry! Hand Poncle to me! How do you feel?" He held out his arms insistently.
He was really freaking out. She lifted Poncle up to him. He was examining the little girl when Red climbed out. "What's the big fuss? We were having a good time!"
"The water's contaminated!" he shouted. "Dry yourself off! And don't go in the kitchen!"
Gobo joined them. "Contaminated? Are you sure? It seems fine to me."
Boober stared at him. Then he looked at Red. He didn't have time to debate the issue with them. "Wait here."
He went back to the kitchen. When he returned he had a coal from the oven in a pair of tongs. He said, "Stand back!" Then, with all the Fraggles watching, he tossed the coal into the swimming hole. Instead of disappearing beneath the surface with a hiss and a wisp of steam, it ignited the water.
Fraggles screamed as the surface of the water erupted into flame. The fire lasted for only a few seconds, but that was enough to terrify them. Boober said, "Now do you believe me?"
Gobo, the first to recover, asked, "How long has it been contaminated?"
"I don't know! I just found out myself! Does anyone feel sick? Throat tickly? Eyes itchy? Stomach ache?" He looked at Red and Poncle, who were dripping wet and horrified.
"I'm fine. How about you?" Red asked Poncle anxiously.
Poncle said, "I'm fine!"
"It must have just happened. Otherwise Boober would have noticed it sooner," Wembley said.
Mokey spoke. "We can't live without water!"
Gobo said, "Maybe there's clean water somewhere else. There are streams and springs all over the Rock. Boober, get some empty jars. We'll get samples."
"Yes!" Boober said, relieved that Gobo was taking charge.
*
Boober gathered an armload of empty jars from the kitchen and pantry. Gobo gave them out to the Fraggles he sent to take water samples from sources they had trusted in the past. Meanwhile, Red was toweling herself off as fast as she could, and Wembley was drying Poncle.
Sage, who had only caught the end of the panic, asked Boober, "What happened to the water?"
The others were listening for his answer too. He said, "Something has gotten into the water and fouled it."
"How?" Poncle wanted to know.
Boober shook his head. "I don't know. This has only happened once before."
Gobo, Boober, Red, Wembley, and Mokey exchanged glances. This was a frightening tale, one they had never told in full to their children because it was too terrifying. But now they needed to know, so they would understand the danger they were in and stay out of the water. Gobo said, "You know the story best, Boober."
Mokey patted her lap. "Come here, Sage."
Sage sat on her mother's lap. Mokey put her arms around her as if to protect her. Gobo held Poncle. Boober began, "Many many many days ago, when we were young and you hadn't been born yet, the water became contaminated. The Silly Creatures in Outer space, who didn't know we lived down here, began putting poisons in the earth. Those poisons got into the water and made us very sick. As sick as the worst flu you've ever had. If we swam or drank water, we drank more of the poison and got sicker."
"No swimming?" Poncle asked, wide-eyed.
Boober said, "There was no clean water for swimming or even to drink for a while. I didn't get sick because I didn't swim in the water, and I could smell it so I didn't drink it. It even hurt the Gorgs. And the radishes they watered with it turned yellow and died."
Sage asked, "How did the water get clean again?"
Boober said, "I went up to where the Silly Creature lived and begged him to stop poisoning us. I gave him back Gobo's postcards because I thought he was angry that we'd been taking them. And he made them wash the poison away with clean water."
Wembley put in, "This was before we met Doc. He wasn't the one who poisoned us, but he did make them stop it. Doc would never hurt us!"
Now Sage was glad she was in her mother's lap, enfolded by her mother's arms. Poncle looked frightened. She said, "I don't want the water to poison me!"
Red told her, "Don't worry. We won't let anything happen to you." Words alone could not reassure a little Fraggle, so she and Gobo hugged their daughter between themselves.
Boober said, "That's right. We'll all keep you safe." He glanced over to Mokey. She beckoned to him. He joined her and Sage in a comforting three-way embrace.
Nobody was holding Wembley. He sat alone, feeling very small and worried, and wondered if the thing he had heard in the night was poisoning the water.
*****
Tomorrow: Watership Fraggles
I'll be posting this story one part per day until it's finished. This story's going to be rough enough without long lags to exacerbate the tension.
So...Enjoy. If possible.
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The Death of Fraggle Rock
by Kim McFarland
*****
Part 1: Things That Go Blomp in The Night
*
Poncle struggled in Red's hands. "No! NO!"
Red had been diving with her daughter all day, and now she decided to balk? She set the little brown-and-blonde Fraggle down on her feet. "What's the matter?"
"You go!" Poncle commanded, pointing at the pool.
The kid was up to something. She usually was. Red jumped in with a satisfactory but not spectacular splash—she wasn't on the clock at the moment—then surfaced and shook the water out of her face.
"Mama! Catch me!" Poncle cried.
Without waiting for confirmation Poncle leapt. Red dodged back so Poncle wouldn't land on her head, and let the water do most of the catching. After the initial splash she grabbed Poncle up and threw her into the air. The Fragling kicked and squealed with glee before smacking face-down into the water.
Mokey was sitting back, doodling in her diary. The picture had begun as a sketch of the swimming hole with a few Fraggles in it, and had expanded to include all of the Great Hall. Wembley was watching, his tail wagging slowly and peacefully. Sometimes it seemed that whole sections of the picture appeared suddenly, as if by magic. When that happened he knew he had dozed off. Which was okay; it was a fine day to be lazy.
Gobo was with Mokey and Wembley, partly watching the rumpus in the swimming hole and partly just sitting back and enjoying his family's company. Wembley's tail stilled, and when Gobo looked at his friend's face his eyes were closed. Mischievously Gobo positioned himself so he was almost nose to nose with Wembley, careful not to touch him and wake him up. Then he waited.
Wembley's eyelids soon fluttered. When he saw Gobo staring at him at point-blank range he squawked with surprise, bumping Gobo's nose. Gobo laughed. "Still having trouble sleeping at night, Wembley?"
"Nah, not any longer," Wembley said.
Mokey paused in her drawing and asked, "Have you been sleeping badly?"
"Well, I was for a little while. I kept hearing weird sounds."
"What kind of sounds?" Mokey asked.
"Well, first something like cracking rocks. SPACK! And then a slurping water noise, blomp blomp blomp blomp. The water sounds go on and on."
Mokey asked Gobo, "Have you heard it too?"
He shook his head. "Not me. Wembley's got the best ears in the rock. He can hear stuff that the rest of us can't. Like water in rocks."
"What do you think it is?" she asked.
Wembley shrugged. "I don't know. It sounds far away, deep down, so I guess it's got nothing to do with us. And it's been going on for days, so I'm used to it. It still wakes me up, but I go right back to sleep again."
*
In his kitchen, Boober was making soup. The water had come to a boil, and he was about to scrape a load of chopped vegetables from the cutting board into the pot when he stopped and sniffed. Something didn't smell right. Was it the wood in the stove? He opened the door, and the smoke seemed to be normal. With the pot lid he fanned the steam toward his face, and, yes, there was a strange quality to it. He didn't like it, and he wouldn't permit it in his food. He put on a pair of mitts and carefully lifted the large pot off the stove. He carried it to a blind tunnel that led to a crack leading both up and down into darkness, and poured the water out.
Then he carried the pot through the Great Hall and to the source of the stream that fed the swimming hole. He set the pot under a ledge and watched the water flow into it.
Was it his imagination, or was it...kind of fizzy?
Nah, he thought, it was just turbulence making the water look bubbly. He let the pot fill, then carried it to the kitchen and set it on the stove. The water looked all right. He stirred it. It still fizzed a little, but it didn't smell like Whoopie Water. He got a little with a wooden spoon, and was about to taste it when a drop fell onto the oven top and splattered the burner below the pot. Orange flame puffed out. Boober yelped and jumped back, shocked.
The flame died out in moments. Unable to believe what he had seen, Boober scooped some more water—gingerly, with the spoon held out at arm's length—and then flicked it onto the stovetop. This time he saw the flame burst from the water itself. When it burned out, the water was left.
*
"Out of the swimming hole! Everybody out of the water! Now!"
Everybody turned to stare at Boober, who had run into the Great Hall in a panic. Red, who was treading water, said, "What's your problem, Boober?"
"Get out of there! Hurry! Hand Poncle to me! How do you feel?" He held out his arms insistently.
He was really freaking out. She lifted Poncle up to him. He was examining the little girl when Red climbed out. "What's the big fuss? We were having a good time!"
"The water's contaminated!" he shouted. "Dry yourself off! And don't go in the kitchen!"
Gobo joined them. "Contaminated? Are you sure? It seems fine to me."
Boober stared at him. Then he looked at Red. He didn't have time to debate the issue with them. "Wait here."
He went back to the kitchen. When he returned he had a coal from the oven in a pair of tongs. He said, "Stand back!" Then, with all the Fraggles watching, he tossed the coal into the swimming hole. Instead of disappearing beneath the surface with a hiss and a wisp of steam, it ignited the water.
Fraggles screamed as the surface of the water erupted into flame. The fire lasted for only a few seconds, but that was enough to terrify them. Boober said, "Now do you believe me?"
Gobo, the first to recover, asked, "How long has it been contaminated?"
"I don't know! I just found out myself! Does anyone feel sick? Throat tickly? Eyes itchy? Stomach ache?" He looked at Red and Poncle, who were dripping wet and horrified.
"I'm fine. How about you?" Red asked Poncle anxiously.
Poncle said, "I'm fine!"
"It must have just happened. Otherwise Boober would have noticed it sooner," Wembley said.
Mokey spoke. "We can't live without water!"
Gobo said, "Maybe there's clean water somewhere else. There are streams and springs all over the Rock. Boober, get some empty jars. We'll get samples."
"Yes!" Boober said, relieved that Gobo was taking charge.
*
Boober gathered an armload of empty jars from the kitchen and pantry. Gobo gave them out to the Fraggles he sent to take water samples from sources they had trusted in the past. Meanwhile, Red was toweling herself off as fast as she could, and Wembley was drying Poncle.
Sage, who had only caught the end of the panic, asked Boober, "What happened to the water?"
The others were listening for his answer too. He said, "Something has gotten into the water and fouled it."
"How?" Poncle wanted to know.
Boober shook his head. "I don't know. This has only happened once before."
Gobo, Boober, Red, Wembley, and Mokey exchanged glances. This was a frightening tale, one they had never told in full to their children because it was too terrifying. But now they needed to know, so they would understand the danger they were in and stay out of the water. Gobo said, "You know the story best, Boober."
Mokey patted her lap. "Come here, Sage."
Sage sat on her mother's lap. Mokey put her arms around her as if to protect her. Gobo held Poncle. Boober began, "Many many many days ago, when we were young and you hadn't been born yet, the water became contaminated. The Silly Creatures in Outer space, who didn't know we lived down here, began putting poisons in the earth. Those poisons got into the water and made us very sick. As sick as the worst flu you've ever had. If we swam or drank water, we drank more of the poison and got sicker."
"No swimming?" Poncle asked, wide-eyed.
Boober said, "There was no clean water for swimming or even to drink for a while. I didn't get sick because I didn't swim in the water, and I could smell it so I didn't drink it. It even hurt the Gorgs. And the radishes they watered with it turned yellow and died."
Sage asked, "How did the water get clean again?"
Boober said, "I went up to where the Silly Creature lived and begged him to stop poisoning us. I gave him back Gobo's postcards because I thought he was angry that we'd been taking them. And he made them wash the poison away with clean water."
Wembley put in, "This was before we met Doc. He wasn't the one who poisoned us, but he did make them stop it. Doc would never hurt us!"
Now Sage was glad she was in her mother's lap, enfolded by her mother's arms. Poncle looked frightened. She said, "I don't want the water to poison me!"
Red told her, "Don't worry. We won't let anything happen to you." Words alone could not reassure a little Fraggle, so she and Gobo hugged their daughter between themselves.
Boober said, "That's right. We'll all keep you safe." He glanced over to Mokey. She beckoned to him. He joined her and Sage in a comforting three-way embrace.
Nobody was holding Wembley. He sat alone, feeling very small and worried, and wondered if the thing he had heard in the night was poisoning the water.
*****
Tomorrow: Watership Fraggles