TMS-guest starring Bowzer-Season 3

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BEAR said:
I've only read the first part so far, but I love it so far, Kathy! You really know how to write comedy. I look forward to more.
Thanks Bryan.I intended to have Part 1) (from the beginning-where the Chef got stuck in the gooey cake batter) to Part 2 (the commotion backstage where Gonzo & the Swedish Chef got stuck together-the end of the show)together but it didn't get "Stickied" on time. Oh well...these things happen.
 

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I agree Kathy. You should write more. It is great and the more you practice I'm positive the better you'll get at it.
Thanks Marty :smile: Hopefully I'll come up with another fan fic sooner or later.
 

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I think this was a lovely job, and I think Bowser is a good choice for a guest star. (Love Sha Na Na) I find writing this sort of half-script, half-outline all difficult. I'm impressed with your first effort. When you're ready, hit us with another one!
 

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Ooh! Kathy WOW!! It's very very funny, and very very well written! I like it a lot! And apparently so do the mods, it's become a sticky! Congrats Kath! (((HUGS)))
 

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theprawncracker said:
Ooh! Kathy WOW!! It's very very funny, and very very well written! I like it a lot! And apparently so do the mods, it's become a sticky! Congrats Kath! (((HUGS)))
Thanks Ry!(((HUGS)))) Actually I need to be honest. I was sort of running out of ideas a few days ago & this was sinking lower & lower to the bottom before I could do anything with it. So I asked Kevin to sticky it.
Now that it's done I'll ask him to unsticky it. I'm glad you liked it!:smile:
 

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Katzi428 said:
Thanks Ry!(((HUGS)))) Actually I need to be honest. I was sort of running out of ideas a few days ago & this was sinking lower & lower to the bottom before I could do anything with it. So I asked Kevin to sticky it.
Now that it's done I'll ask him to unsticky it. I'm glad you liked it!:smile:
I think it's totally cool to have a sticky! Like a badge of honor! Hehe, (((HUGS))) back to you Kath!:zany:
 

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Hey Kathy. I was looking at this again and I realized my favourite part was Bowser helping Gonzo and the Swedish Chef get unstuck. I could see them flying through the air in my mind. What more fitting place for Gonzo to land than in the box with Statler and Waldorf?:big_grin:

And the whole running gag with the doggies and Bowser's name is excellent. I loved how Rowlf formed a special bonding with Bowser over the piano. :smile:
 

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You know what would be really perfect Kathy?

A closing Statler and Waldorf gag relating somehow to dogs. Maybe even using Bowser's name.

I must admit my own mind is a complete blank as to any suggestions to make. It's hard but something may come to you if you think carefully about it. :smile:
 

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VERY cute! :smile: I could easily picture all of it, and Bowser would make a great guest star! (YES of course I remember Sha Na Na...although the only one of their songs I recall enough of to sing is "Get a Job.")

The not-a-dog gag is funny. I think you could even have put several MORE of them all through the show and it would still be funny. I love running gags, though!

Write another soon. :smile:
 

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VERY cute! :smile: I could easily picture all of it, and Bowser would make a great guest star! (YES of course I remember Sha Na Na...although the only one of their songs I recall enough of to sing is "Get a Job.")

The not-a-dog gag is funny. I think you could even have put several MORE of them all through the show and it would still be funny. I love running gags, though!

Write another soon. :smile:
Glad you enjoyed it so much!
 
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