My idea for a teaser trailer for "The Power of the Dark Crystal"

[crazed gonzo fa]

Here's how it goes:

(Camera focusing on the Crystal)Narrator:"This is the Pure Crystal. Hundreds of years ago it was spilt and became the Dark Crystal. But it was healed and returned to it's true form. But soon the Crystal shall be spilt again, soon the world shall again feel...The Power of the Dark Crystal.(Title appears, then fades out. Then the following words fade in):Feel the Power, Fall 2007.

What do you think?